Page 1 of 23 123411 ... LastLast
Results 1 to 15 of 376

Thread: The Official Poetry Thread

Hybrid View

Previous Post Previous Post   Next Post Next Post
  1. #1
    Are U aware I ban @ will? MASTER PAI MEI's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2002
    Location
    The Depths of Shaolin
    Posts
    77,780,496
    Rep Power
    10

    Lightbulb The Official Poetry Thread

    Alright after reading G's poem I think we need a Poetry thread in the Temple

    I'll start off with this



    ever see birds fly at night?? birds teethered together.. ever see the sky at night?? words turned to vapor outfield player errors and favors major league movements made with in layers.. distractions tailored a 3 piece suits' the Savior?? compound fractures litter the foundation we cater.. gestating raider relations lattitude and longitude activate the station.. missle launch gravity distorting magnetic bursts never rehearsed.. served up asthetics work horses disperse with blinders a pigeons purring chirp sirens sound crackers and cookies the ensueing visions hurt alligator skin with a velvet plush curse an albino absorbing the worse exposing sun suicide residue and rickety rides diping they dive straight shooter not an aimer but a hooter get the subwoofer lavishly subdue ya.. fuck ya'll laws microsoft computers rule ya'll.. diamond bits centered they drill right through ya.. grab the ruler an measure your line physical space magnified through my eyes spiritual fools are hypnotized ..God is in you open ya eyes or be defined to stand on one side and defend and fight blindly as the 4 corners close in on your mind failed strategy and design a tragedy of your crime..

  2. #2
    SupaSelekta tekunique's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2004
    Location
    TransFixedST8
    Posts
    6,538
    Rep Power
    53

    Default Re: The Official Poetry Thread ( Please Sticky )

    the big man at it again.. i'll read it when i get home, as im off from work soon. peace.

  3. #3
    Are U aware I ban @ will? MASTER PAI MEI's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2002
    Location
    The Depths of Shaolin
    Posts
    77,780,496
    Rep Power
    10

    Default Re: The Official Poetry Thread ( Please Sticky )

    PEaCE SpOK3N

  4. #4
    Tian Xia
    Join Date
    Jul 2005
    Location
    london
    Age
    33
    Posts
    442
    Rep Power
    12

    Default Re: The Official Poetry Thread ( Please Sticky )

    i'll spit this piece for godless freaks, who drops are crocks in altered speech,
    i'll rob the street in public feats, insight the beat to bind the weak
    define whats deep refine and seeks, inside this steep where failure creaks
    remind these beasts inside is bleak, rewind this piece combine with streaks

    peace i got bored

  5. #5

    Default Re: The Official Poetry Thread ( Please Sticky )

    Scarred (hood Life)

    Thought you were set free, unaware slaves controlled by tha powers that be watchin' me
    Dollar signs tha god of society, it imprisons us mentally
    eyes see materials as the way out, don't you know fads play out
    Sometimes i stay out on tha block, watching the seeds runnin' their mouths
    About the money, hoes, and cars their so far from reality
    Next month i read about one of them in the obituary
    It scars me to think our seeds are becoming extinct
    Gone in tha blink of an eye, why? Theyv'e been fed lies
    No matter how hard i try some seem impossible to reach
    With no fathers to teach them the trials of manhood
    They end up down, and out up to no damn good
    in the hood it seems to be positive is to be soft
    Our babies are lost lookin' for love theyv'e never received
    The same tainted theme, so they indulge in pussy, liquior, and weed
    A high to overcome the depression, a role model's what they need
    Claiming a street they don't own, in out of jail until theyr'e gone
    Mothers mourn then move on, i tell em' stay strong
    How long will the seeds suffer and nothings being done
    To fix this crisis poverty's paradise we stuck in tha slums
    Every night justs gets worse, another casket in tha dirt
    I work to make ends meet and to provide for my family
    and live out the path allah has planned for me



    My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

  6. #6
    Priceless:The Modern IsIs Dae Ja Nae's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2004
    Location
    Norfolk, VA
    Posts
    806
    Rep Power
    16

    Default Re: The Official Poetry Thread ( Please Sticky )

    Quote Originally Posted by james
    Scarred (hood Life)

    Thought you were set free, unaware slaves controlled by tha powers that be watchin' me
    Dollar signs tha god of society, it imprisons us mentally
    eyes see materials as the way out, don't you know fads play out
    Sometimes i stay out on tha block, watching the seeds runnin' their mouths
    About the money, hoes, and cars their so far from reality
    Next month i read about one of them in the obituary
    It scars me to think our seeds are becoming extinct
    Gone in tha blink of an eye, why? Theyv'e been fed lies
    No matter how hard i try some seem impossible to reach
    With no fathers to teach them the trials of manhood
    They end up down, and out up to no damn good
    in the hood it seems to be positive is to be soft
    Our babies are lost lookin' for love theyv'e never received
    The same tainted theme, so they indulge in pussy, liquior, and weed
    A high to overcome the depression, a role model's what they need
    Claiming a street they don't own, in out of jail until theyr'e gone
    Mothers mourn then move on, i tell em' stay strong
    How long will the seeds suffer and nothings being done
    To fix this crisis poverty's paradise we stuck in tha slums
    Every night justs gets worse, another casket in tha dirt
    I work to make ends meet and to provide for my family
    and live out the path allah has planned for me
    Raw truth my brotha ... raw truth. I share your vision homie. This reads like it could have come from me. We are all so quick to turn a blind eye to all that is truly meaningful in this life, being foolishly mislead by all the materialistic bullshit that is laid before us. It saddens me greatly, to say the least, to know that we as a people have fallen victim to such a corrupt society ... maybe one day we'll all rise above.

    Who knows ...........


    Peace




    I sew...
    beautiful seeds that sprout flowers thatís deeply rooted
    your weak style-diluted with concepts thatís so polluted
    my words flourish, creating jewels the conscious will cherish ...

    -- Dae Ja Nae

    http://www.soundclick.com/daejanae
    http://wutangcorp.com/showthread.php?t=11503


  7. #7
    G...
    Guest

    Default Re: The Official Poetry Thread ( Please Sticky )

    I will drop any of my freestyle/quick poetry peices in here from now on. Good work everyone. ONE

  8. #8
    Veteran Member
    Join Date
    Dec 2004
    Location
    Queens
    Posts
    17,499
    Rep Power
    62

    Default Re: The Official Poetry Thread ( Please Sticky )

    Tight verses everyone.......thx.



  9. #9

    Default Re: The Official Poetry Thread ( Please Sticky )

    When it's time for you to go, how would you feel?
    Would you kneel down and pray to god?
    or would you keep it real, and give the nod.
    Paintin' the picture, I emphasis death in the scripture,
    My soul is sold, Once secured like a fixture.
    But since death is at the doorway, no need to keep him waiting,
    open the door, felt a sudden chill, followed by my mind fading.
    Dream's past, vision's so real, it distorted my reality,
    then shortly followed by the ever dramatic fatality.
    Is there a heaven or hell?, I don't really know where i'm going,
    without guidance, I'll drift into limbo without even knowing.
    Follow me on this journey, through the vision's to come,
    I've seen death through my own eye's, and it's yet to even begun.
    Seen heaven and hell, everyone has, but no need for praying,
    just burn out my candle, and prepare my after life before the decaying.




    Protons Electrons Always Cause Explosions

    This is the real Idaho

  10. #10
    Walk Like a Warrior blackwisdom's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2003
    Location
    Norfolk, VA
    Age
    36
    Posts
    1,266
    Rep Power
    16

    Default Re: The Official Poetry Thread ( Please Sticky )

    How can a woman containing en-richened melanin eyes
    Become so brainwashed and Europeanized
    Iím mesmerized at how much the zombie effect has spread
    My people walk these streets, mostly, spiritually dead
    I dread talking to my peeps about mind elevation
    Because it becomes such a one sided conversation
    With no knowledge shared, cause itís just me schooling
    But they ainít listening so who am I fooling
    They think it sounds cool and yeah he reads lots of books
    But Iím viewed as thief when only as a child I was a crook
    Stealing comic books and candy trying to live the american dream
    When in actuality Africa should always be my only theme
    We played war as children instead of building a nation
    With parents absent, working, we tuned into our tell-lie-vision stations
    To replace the love and care, thatís why we blast up our music
    To rock us to sleep, without the rhythm I would loose it
    But I just vibe and try to assist others to thrive only to get hurt
    Living the life that I lead will always require ample work
    But Iím willing to die for what I believe and give you my life
    So never tell me that what Iím striving for isnít right
    When all I want is the jewels and to shed a bit of light
    All I ask is that my Creator assists me to shine like a pipe
    Blowing ďawayĒ the fog of the lies that have been accepted as the truth
    When I pass I pray that people will remember me for loving the youth

    peace

    "Read everything, listen to everybody, don't trust anything unless you can prove it with your research." - William "Bill" Cooper
    Myspace Libradio Prison Radio/Mumia Fourty-Two/Seven

  11. #11
    Priceless:The Modern IsIs Dae Ja Nae's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2004
    Location
    Norfolk, VA
    Posts
    806
    Rep Power
    16

    Default Re: The Official Poetry Thread ( Please Sticky )

    Quote Originally Posted by blackwisdom
    How can a woman containing en-richened melanin eyes
    Become so brainwashed and Europeanized
    Iím mesmerized at how much the zombie effect has spread
    My people walk these streets, mostly, spiritually dead
    I dread talking to my peeps about mind elevation
    Because it becomes such a one sided conversation
    With no knowledge shared, cause itís just me schooling
    But they ainít listening so who am I fooling
    They think it sounds cool and yeah he reads lots of books
    But Iím viewed as thief when only as a child I was a crook
    Stealing comic books and candy trying to live the american dream
    When in actuality Africa should always be my only theme
    We played war as children instead of building a nation
    With parents absent, working, we tuned into our tell-lie-vision stations
    To replace the love and care, thatís why we blast up our music
    To rock us to sleep, without the rhythm I would loose it
    But I just vibe and try to assist others to thrive only to get hurt
    Living the life that I lead will always require ample work
    But Iím willing to die for what I believe and give you my life
    So never tell me that what Iím striving for isnít right
    When all I want is the jewels and to shed a bit of light
    All I ask is that my Creator assists me to shine like a pipe
    Blowing ďawayĒ the fog of the lies that have been accepted as the truth
    When I pass I pray that people will remember me for loving the youth

    peace
    You know I gots ta keep it "Dae" lol ... I will, in time, drop some feed on all these beautiful jewels, but I thought I would start with this one first. Black this piece was on some minds eye elevation, no doubt. You always come across to me as a warrior, always fighting for truth and righteousness. You and your words always leave me with a strong, deep feeing of pride. Keep ringing the bells of truth my brother, and I will stay forever rocking.


    Peace and One Luv




    I sew...
    beautiful seeds that sprout flowers thatís deeply rooted
    your weak style-diluted with concepts thatís so polluted
    my words flourish, creating jewels the conscious will cherish ...

    -- Dae Ja Nae

    http://www.soundclick.com/daejanae
    http://wutangcorp.com/showthread.php?t=11503


  12. #12
    Priceless:The Modern IsIs Dae Ja Nae's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2004
    Location
    Norfolk, VA
    Posts
    806
    Rep Power
    16

    Default Re: The Official Poetry Thread ( Please Sticky )

    Quote Originally Posted by SurreaL
    When it's time for you to go, how would you feel?
    Would you kneel down and pray to god?
    or would you keep it real, and give the nod.
    Paintin' the picture, I emphasis death in the scripture,
    My soul is sold, Once secured like a fixture.
    But since death is at the doorway, no need to keep him waiting,
    open the door, felt a sudden chill, followed by my mind fading.
    Dream's past, vision's so real, it distorted my reality,
    then shortly followed by the ever dramatic fatality.
    Is there a heaven or hell?, I don't really know where i'm going,
    without guidance, I'll drift into limbo without even knowing.
    Follow me on this journey, through the vision's to come,
    I've seen death through my own eye's, and it's yet to even begun.
    Seen heaven and hell, everyone has, but no need for praying,
    just burn out my candle, and prepare my after life before the decaying.
    Rather than comment, I thought I would just build on your post ...

    I'm not sure where I stand, but I hope that life goes on
    but I'm not foolish enough to believe that we are simply reborn,
    I feel that we somehow pass on to an even greater existence
    dwelling within a higher realm where the soul meets no resistance
    devoid of self conflict, the purest state of elation
    experiencing and unending reign of total exhilaration
    a greater sense of understanding beyond the fathoming of natural man
    like a unification of kindred spirits in a Zen state without demands
    mingling amongst the stars in the form of raw energy
    knowing real freedom for the first time, without constant threats from an enemy
    reaching the pinnacle of perfection, if there really is such a thing
    the completion of a full circle is what I hope the after life brings


    Peace Surreal




    I sew...
    beautiful seeds that sprout flowers thatís deeply rooted
    your weak style-diluted with concepts thatís so polluted
    my words flourish, creating jewels the conscious will cherish ...

    -- Dae Ja Nae

    http://www.soundclick.com/daejanae
    http://wutangcorp.com/showthread.php?t=11503


  13. #13
    Are U aware I ban @ will? MASTER PAI MEI's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2002
    Location
    The Depths of Shaolin
    Posts
    77,780,496
    Rep Power
    10

    Default Re: The Official Poetry Thread ( Please Sticky )

    all my life I've looked to the skies,
    all my life my tears have dried,
    all my life I seek what I think is best
    all my life I've repeatedly burned my nest,
    all my life I've watched these viscious cycles,
    all my life I've feared when the night falls,
    lived in the slums projects and broken homes,
    as I still strive to understand the unknowns,
    take my money my shelter food and clothes,
    but you'll never understand how family's love forever grows...

  14. #14
    Priceless:The Modern IsIs Dae Ja Nae's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2004
    Location
    Norfolk, VA
    Posts
    806
    Rep Power
    16

    Default Re: The Official Poetry Thread ( Please Sticky )

    Quote Originally Posted by bigben
    all my life I've looked to the skies,

    all my life my tears have dried,
    all my life I seek what I think is best
    all my life I've repeatedly burned my nest,
    all my life I've watched these viscious cycles,
    all my life I've feared when the night falls,
    lived in the slums projects and broken homes,
    as I still strive to understand the unknowns,
    take my money my shelter food and clothes,
    but you'll never understand how family's love forever grows...
    Our love for our families and one another is something they'll never be able to strip away. Beautifully articulated Ben.

    Peace




    I sew...
    beautiful seeds that sprout flowers thatís deeply rooted
    your weak style-diluted with concepts thatís so polluted
    my words flourish, creating jewels the conscious will cherish ...

    -- Dae Ja Nae

    http://www.soundclick.com/daejanae
    http://wutangcorp.com/showthread.php?t=11503


  15. #15
    G...
    Guest

    Default Re: The Official Poetry Thread ( Please Sticky )

    General Jottings ~ World Of Havoc

    What I see is a world of havoc, lacking the magic,
    Thay my mind creates from plastic covering the realness, your actors,
    In a fake script where you talk this nonsense that's purely non-relevant,
    I'm an artist that's taking steps bigger than those of an elephant,
    What I see is your hate-filled looks, but your covering up,
    'Cause political correctness has you with news from such and such,
    Now your warped, havoc's come, and now we lost all the magic,
    Your actors in a cinema-scope screen, purely fabric.


Similar Threads

  1. God or Gods
    By Prince Rai in forum Know The Ledge
    Replies: 58
    Last Post: 07-21-2011, 01:44 PM
  2. * Should Muggs produce a whole WU album? *
    By PHI.1.618 in forum Wu-Tang Chamber
    Replies: 74
    Last Post: 08-26-2009, 12:40 AM
  3. SurreaL vs Eric Unseen (Surreal WINS)
    By SurreaL in forum The House of Flying Daggers
    Replies: 28
    Last Post: 09-19-2005, 06:02 PM
  4. Mr. Marcus's Neighborhood
    By Slippy The Pimp in forum Box Office Hideout
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 09-09-2005, 01:45 PM
  5. Gnetic Ghost Ninja...
    By Sun Tzu, Tha Soul Controllah in forum Audio Booth
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: 09-03-2005, 05:28 AM

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •