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    One Step at a Time. (freewrite)

    same illusions
    drift...
    drift....

    stop.

    is this the concrete evidence i was told to wait for?

    strange to look into a mirror
    and not recognise The Fallen in front
    of me.

    slide....

    my hands, down this unusual scene:

    scars fro a razor i stole in Paris,
    burns from a cigarrette i killed for.

    they called me criminal, spat,
    and ended their days with a visit
    through my cut womanhood...

    it still stings...

    i thought the cutting would work,
    the wound stays,
    the pain is greater,

    and i'm bigger than i should be.

    they called it my cleansing process..

    it was all i could do.

    and now,

    concrete evidence of a freedom i never wanted.

    Not Guilty.

    but guilty in the eyes of the white women whose
    husbands i have killed.

    when they rap....ed me.

    .Roze

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    the moon aura shines
    speakin of dimes as dames and i just write lines
    destined for shine as i write n keep it real
    like a land of yields and land merchants i hold my skill
    thirllin mc one afta another i kill
    speakin of pressure as u feel that spine chill
    like bill a mastermind facing a tragic fate
    while i errect mentaly ya niggas just masturbate
    rubin of ya'll i feel the hate but i just put the bait
    ya'll took it and now are exposed as fake
    is to late to lament the commonents of past times
    i'm not flo'etry but my poetry trancends rhymes
    schemes i'm reedemed by each word even in a battle field of many
    my overflows rises and yields plenty
    i know is an envy of how can he be so simple and yet original
    because on the flow i'm not generic brand i'm high class chemical
    if mathematics is the answer then my logic is supream n pure
    cause my arithmic flow is the answer for an aching hearts cure
    i'm the lure the adored the mc wit a purpose n a goal
    i'm the suit all played and the dimond within the coal

    look at battlefield 444trumpets thread for ORIGINAL

    Wat ya think?
    ROCKD IN THE HAUSE<- WU-TANG SOUL MENACE

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    Trials and tribulations got me hopen for new inovations/
    Revolations become a #1 because of soul elimination/
    Hopen for a better life, rappen about the same subject every night/
    Gotta fight to survive, liven in the darkness with no light/

    Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched..
    for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth
    Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System..
    Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom


    Take ya life plus ya afterlife -Bloodshed

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    The past effects the mind, through deja vu, it's passed a second time/
    I have to press rewind, far away enough the track makes a U turn/
    but few learn from the relationship the past drapes the future/
    Flooded with cynical thoughts i release the first notion/
    and freeze the time by suspending the earths motion/

    Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched..
    for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth
    Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System..
    Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom


    Take ya life plus ya afterlife -Bloodshed

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    you carry a gun 4 a rep
    others carry to protect
    but whatever the reason
    death will be coming - looking for souls to collect

    and when he knocks on your door
    dont act all surprised
    like you dont sell drugs
    and you dont tell lies

    he's coming so start running
    you better watch your back
    cos theres nowhere to hide
    from the devils sadistic attack

    bullets cant hold him back
    his figure exists in the darkness
    and one things for sure
    the muthaf**kers heartless

    once he knows your location
    your as good as gone
    facing unholly incarcaration
    dont you wish youd lived your life differently?

    Now your burning in hell
    and your never gettin out
    and its all your fault
    arent you proud???

    remember when you killed that man?
    for talkin shit?
    his family said they'd have revenge
    yeh this is it

    for all the sins commited
    all the murder
    all the rape
    this is payback fool - enjoy

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    Night after night, you whistle tunes of a foreign descent

    And call it tradition.

    Little Child, Melancholy stood there.

    Come and see what I see everyday, on the other side of silence,

    The bruise which faded quicker than that of your cheek.

    It shouldn’t happen, not in this home…

    Silence breathes here… it laughs here…

    It exists.

    Don’t forget yourself.
    .Roze

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    damn as I'm sitting here,
    I can literally hear the tears,
    falling from my fallen peers,
    eyes swollen eyeliner smears,
    we all follow what we fear,
    death surrounds us as we adhere,
    caught in a tragic sphere,
    evaporated souls seared...

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    everyone gettin real deep in this piece. i like what i read , stay up everyone


    A surge potent enough to tear the surfaces texture in a sense/
    Like weight is measured in pounds, time is mesured in events/
    Text words can't impress, so i'll help you invison this incertinty/
    A old timer has a short life, while a teen lives an eternity/
    it opens the next chapter and captures the bland design/
    that we can live long and leave our footprints on the sands of time/
    Draw it, it'll boost progression, and it will erase the proceedings/
    It's time to throw away my clocks and put faith back into my feelings/

    Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched..
    for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth
    Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System..
    Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom


    Take ya life plus ya afterlife -Bloodshed

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    why do we fight? ignite the superficial hype,
    throats hoarse screaming all fucken night,
    bodies tired dead burn in funeral pyres,
    look at the iris and see the liar,
    for what they are cosmic rays meteoric scars,
    litter the earth archeologist I'm feeling the hurt,
    spilling my science all over my shirt,
    forcast overcast cloudy days no one laughs,
    my feet are swollen walking with the torment...

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    i call this one


    ~~Wanted to know~~

    can true love out last time/
    can i do time and still except you to be mine/
    will you think of me even t hough i can't be there/
    will you be true to me cuz you trully care/
    can u be strong enough to make it through another season/
    can u have heart enough to defend my honor if given reason/

    girl i just wanted to know...

    can i count on you to be on my team/
    can i tell you i love you and you know exactly what i mean/
    can u be my support when i need a crutch/
    can i confess my love even though it can't be measured how much/

    girl i just wanted to know...

    will you confide in me and tell me how you feel in this letter/
    will you try your best to make this bit easier and make me feel better/
    can i count on you to accept my calls and be there to answer the phone/
    when this bit is done can i count on you to take me home/

    peace to my brother for writing this piece about his girl that they recently broke up. show sum love for emotions ya'll..

    Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched..
    for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth
    Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System..
    Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom


    Take ya life plus ya afterlife -Bloodshed

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    Quote Originally Posted by TheRoze
    Night after night, you whistle tunes of a foreign descent

    And call it tradition.

    Little Child, Melancholy stood there.

    Come and see what I see everyday, on the other side of silence,

    The bruise which faded quicker than that of your cheek.

    It shouldn’t happen, not in this home…

    Silence breathes here… it laughs here…

    It exists.

    Don’t forget yourself.
    Do you think you're a prophet or something? You're not deep, you're just another attention whore who can't get her 'poems' published in real life so you post it online. Your typing style is stupid, also. You're not unique, you ain't special. You lost as a poet and you lost at life.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Revolution
    Do you think you're a prophet or something? You're not deep, you're just another attention whore who can't get her 'poems' published in real life so you post it online. Your typing style is stupid, also. You're not unique, you ain't special. You lost as a poet and you lost at life.
    hmmmm.... i think i've seen this somewhere... oh wait, yes! your PM... did you save this just so you can copy and paste it?? just for me???? that's so cute Revvy!!!!

    awwwwwww!!!

    well... now that you've been noticed you fucking louse,
    go crawl back into your little hole and wait until the world decides to notice you again.
    i've had just about enough of your bullshitting on this site and you make me sick.

    so BACK THE FUCK OFF YOU CREATURE!

    thank you, and have a nice day.


    people, continue with your poetry writing.
    .Roze

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    Quote Originally Posted by Revolution
    Do you think you're a prophet or something? You're not deep, you're just another attention whore who can't get her 'poems' published in real life so you post it online. Your typing style is stupid, also. You're not unique, you ain't special. You lost as a poet and you lost at life.
    What's up with you fam? ...The lady is just posting her poetry, like this thread is for. If you don't like it, kill yaself.

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    lol straight up

    Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched..
    for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth
    Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System..
    Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom


    Take ya life plus ya afterlife -Bloodshed

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    its said that the woman is wisdom
    between the state of mind and regeneration
    the center of heart that bears soul
    the temple betwixt holy of holy
    where lessons of the civil towards lies
    are brought like eyes to the skies
    and reproduced like earth and fruit
    granting substance that metaphysically replenish
    thoughts to thinking that lead amongst brink in
    ledge where know edge thats hot and cutting
    for the temperance of bearing all or nothing
    about the paths pointed where compass annointed
    from words to encourage prudence over courage
    full hearted but never to be fool hearty
    giving teeth to chew to discern smart be
    patience waiting brewing and instilling
    virtues veritable clues to ways not to lose
    through the birth from out their womb
    though preconceived in brain as full bloom
    to guide along days through nights twilight
    until the outter limits are transcended
    and reflections are reflected before tomb is heeded

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