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    mad strange how life can change through time sequential
    perceptively deranged but nearly god in his mental
    through distorted projections static mic connections
    a student of life with eternal reflections
    take anything near everything you hold dear
    adjust your minds eye make sure the pictures clear
    dont take it for what it is see its deeper understanding
    find your place for what its worth on firm earth you'll be standing
    forgive the flaws I present thats my human nature
    the light shining through is the aura of the creator
    a product of my enviornment im everything it made me
    just gotta work with what the most high gave me
    i utilize the pen as an extension of my hand
    my minds a desert thoughts are grains of sand
    this poetry represents a universal life cycle
    connect at anytime with anything that you might do

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    Yo...........

    Will I Ever Truly Smile In This Lifetime
    Looking From The Outside In
    As A Treasure I Searched The Ends Of The Earth For
    Is Now In Inconsiderate Hands
    Without Even A Second Look Into My Soul
    My Sanity Cracks As I Wonder If This Is Divine Payback
    For The Hearts I Broken
    Its Seems All I'll Ever Have Is Music & Occasional Smoking
    Never Have I Smiled In My Recent Pictures
    For There Is No True Reason To
    Especially Not Here
    In This Day And Age
    Another Chance Stolen
    Re-opened Scars
    Anger Rises
    Tears Fall
    Painful Truth
    Staring At Stars
    Wondering Endlessly
    How Could This Happen
    Why Me
    What Could I Have Done To Deserve This
    Nothing Seems To Subside These Thoughts
    This Rage
    This Anger
    This Jealousy
    These Emotions
    This Seemingly Fruitless Journey
    My Desires
    My Sadness
    My Destiny
    My Search For A Rare Jewel..............

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    Lord come rescue us from this treacherous replica of history's
    misery & undiscovered mystery,
    Gun love epiphany, i'll blow you into infinity.
    Mud runs where the rivers deep,
    A crescent red sun hovers above the giving tree,
    You heard my battlecry symphony allied with undead infantry,
    20,000 leagues down in the sea,
    drowning but free, we witness the crowning of kings.
    I bring a surrounding of dreams where things are not what they seem,
    Apocalypse theme.......(album in '08, i'll post snippets of the track soon)

    I'd like feedback, thx.

    This a verse from the track "White Zombie" on my album "City of Fire", dropping mid '08.

    PHXorcist of the South West - Phoenix Rising 2007

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    Your new instrumentals are very inspiration Zero thx.
    Last edited by PHXorcist; 10-12-2007 at 10:01 PM.

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    Rewrote some verses from the original song to some of your instrumentals, which is why I want feedback to see if I should switch with these new verses.

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    COUNTING DOWN THE CHURCH BELLS

    a cracked earth, seaping streams of blood
    a locked birth, running my fingers through the mud
    to get a sense of existence and resistance
    deliverence to the divine, in time truth will be revealed
    constantly changing no defenition of real
    i peel the outer skin of my shell, living in hell
    counting down the church bells
    Bank heist in Kathmandu, it was a slaughter
    The day Buddha was born it rained tea instead of water

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    Colossal man made machines storm a land that was once green,
    Blowing the countryside into smitherines with heavy artillery,
    While aircrafts rain death from above,
    Bringing down lightning upon villagers,
    Vikings were found to be similar.

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    this is the 2nd time on this thread.

    well I aint no poet. I dont consider what I write poetry.

    Years of benevolence has faded.

    It has vanished in to the unknown criteria.
    Oh No! I feel so inferior.
    Neutralize weapons from the superior
    Neglect those that donít matter, despite attraction.
    Escape the beauty of deceit.


    Created a journey to search for 1,992 diamonds.
    Incredidible, shinning glass reflect the queen of the 90's
    Never did I complete the journey, due to stagnation.
    Down went my significant other.
    Yield to a master plan, I did not

    Crippled thoughts of the present
    On to a path I know no longer how to conquer
    Never give up on a dream that contains forever love
    Never drive the nails in to the hands of the clever
    Ignorance, is my permanent painful label
    Exit visions, which lead to a tear jerker fable.

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    "TRUTH ADMIST THE LIES" (countin down the church bells pt.2)


    crimson streams of steaming liquid seap down the moutainside
    an abonimation, and example of hate and genocide
    praying to the sky, to find my inner self, another soul on sinner shelf
    i quiver, like crack babies on rabies, stearing through a window at the shady
    depths the world has crep to, my veins strain, but complain i cant do
    i chant tunes of self preservation, planting seeds for the global restoration
    of mankind, iam just trying to find truth admist the lies
    Last edited by SID; 12-11-2007 at 08:32 AM.
    Bank heist in Kathmandu, it was a slaughter
    The day Buddha was born it rained tea instead of water

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    yo, i work for the devil but he never works for me
    The beguiled emcee getting tied up to a tree
    No one ever raps about the shit they cant handle
    Like a boss whos a dick in a job thats a scandal
    I need the money for food, living life and smokin weed
    But arseholes fuck ya about and make ya wanna leave
    so whats the point in doing it, i simply never plead
    cos in the end its just me and my family that will exceed






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    Expression of Machinery

    Tactile responses have cluttered thoughts,
    while the lonely remnants are discovered.
    Armored instances are impulsively bought
    as the truth is last to be uncovered.
    So few decades have aged a man
    than those which were uncertain.
    Yet when the toll of time began
    we rebuilt an iron curtain.

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    "INSIDE"

    i scream into the abyss, for fear of what ive missed
    silent tears in the mist, my dear i crave your kiss
    to guide me through the concrete jungle
    to guide me through my thoughts asunder
    to guide me through false laws and blunders
    to guide me through the poor and the lovers
    all i see is life slowly moulding and contoling my will
    ink soaking my quill, ready to write bright lines
    but i have to take the time to find myself inside....
    Bank heist in Kathmandu, it was a slaughter
    The day Buddha was born it rained tea instead of water

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    Quote Originally Posted by sidious_katana View Post
    "INSIDE"

    i scream into the abyss, for fear of what ive missed
    silent tears in the mist, my dear i crave your kiss
    to guide me through the concrete jungle
    to guide me through my thoughts asunder
    to guide me through false laws and blunders
    to guide me through the poor and the lovers
    all i see is life slowly moulding and contoling my will
    ink soaking my quill, ready to write bright lines
    but i have to take the time to find myself inside....
    nice poem

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    Default For the one in ~my~ L.I.F.E. {C*rmella}

    You crawl

    All over my left ball

    Make me fall off the wall

    Met you at the mall

    Took off your draws

    In the bathroom stall

    Made me call

    Embarrassing; you were short (I was tall)

    Love,

    PAUL

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    Counting shades of grey, my final resting place
    How can I live today when my hopes displaced
    To another place, hold out your hand
    Take this image of me and try to understand
    Why I say these words, don’t make me look absurd
    Tell me you know why I think I’m disturbed
    Release those easy words, tell me all about
    How I’m ok, no ounce of doubt
    Cos now my sights gone grey and its wrong inside
    Cross the water here, take the bridge to blyth
    Stop half the way, look down as it flows
    Like a cold release from hells own abode
    So cold then the calm before the storm
    Where my heart feels fine my souls not torn
    Push into my eyes feel the blind today
    I would rather see black than these shades of grey.
    Paint me a picture in red and blue
    Bruise this portrait of me to look like you
    Sing me a story with words that say
    our world is filled with shades of grey
    Paint me a picture, in shades of grey
    A portrait of how we live today
    Sing me a story with words that mean
    Something, anything, everything to me
    The high density, entity, essentially on a kill frenzy
    Holy gun blade, night shade bullets soaked in benzene
    Casting 18 spells of thundaga, unholy seed of sparda
    Anti-gods formed the shield a hold, am the martyr in armour
    White trash beautiful, see me at your funeral
    Wearing a full white track suit screaming out fuck you
    My kun-fu, getting my katana stained vermillion
    Killing zombies like leon in a decrepit building..

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