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    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=248831

    This is solid, gimme some fair criticism

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    Default Re: Wandering Thoughts (years of progress)

    i dont like how u chang ur voice when u rap

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    what do you mean? my inflection?

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    yea the hook u sound normal but when ur verse hits u change ur voice like ur trying to obtain the hardcore sound like jedi mind tricks or somthing ..u know...i mean hey do what u want..im just saying what i think........

    but keep donig ur thing...lets see what others have to say

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    like I said dude, criticism is what I wanted here, I know you're not hatin on it. you're right too, I do sound too gravely, and it does kinda remind me of what vinnie paz goes for.

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    Pretty Good!
    Work on the delivery some more and you got it.
    You can tell who has heart!
    My name is DASANE
    I make my own beats
    I write my own rhymes
    Remeber the name DASANE

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    just relax with your spittin , your goin for the pissed off sound that's aight , but just chill a bit , might be just me but i really wasn't feelin the hook and the beat needs a bigger bassline , the atmosphere is aight for an aggressive tune but i think it could probably use a bit of "juicin" up .

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