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    Lightbulb Demon Inside

    My soul is trash, trapped garbage gas
    Passed on fashion, dirty T-shirt blastin'
    Am I askin', too much from that refined slut?
    Bitch's butt bangin', emotional game changin'
    Rearranged the frame, my jaw hanging
    Now my balls clangin', solid brass
    Sparks shootin' out my ass, lightin' fires
    Dead tired, I'll sleep when I die
    Maybe then I'll catch some winks
    Drink moonshine in Hell, well...that'd be swell
    I don't accell-erate my fate, just wait patient
    Blatant pyscho, I might blow up and fuck up
    Get cut up, don't give a fuck what?
    Who said shit? Bitch quick fist a fag's lip
    Tendencies suicidal, Hennessey through my vital
    Ride or die, code I live by....out of 4 Soldiers
    Only 2 remain unchanged, still plain insane
    Ready to fall bleedin', call it a demon
    I'm pleadin' to no one, I'm no son
    I grow dumb and cold, numb and bold
    Crumblin' soul, grapple holdin' foldin' chair throwin'
    Barbarian Honkey Kong, call me Donkey Saun
    True Spartan til pine boxed, smokin' rocks
    I block shots, recover and spark talks
    My heart's cocked, ready to blast
    Hernia havin' hemmorroid out my ass
    21 year old Irish Scotch botched, a bad batch
    I'm mad as matterah fact, angry as fuck
    Call me Lost Luck, fuck the system's legal touch
    Clutchin' solid jail cats from way back
    Fuck a clan or a posse, toss me in with him
    BTK & Squish, push pussies and pimp slap fat bitches
    The sitch is riditch, pitch fit bitties with big titties
    Two outcasted crazies, feelin' hazy Swazey Roadhousin'

    There's no dousin' a flame lit inside a man's eyes
    Fly a foul finger to the bringer of news he chance dies

    Like plants tied, the vine entwines
    Path lined from start, branch apart
    Could be ranchin' cart, cattle havin'
    Saddle rabblin', or dabblin' in golf tees
    Under shade trees, pleased at my busy steez
    Bitch please, I choose this life...
    Weed smoke chokin', nose broken
    Coke dopin', and throat soakin'
    I broke open, there's no hopin'
    For a better change, or place in the game
    Weatherin' rains, I taste all the same
    This song is my life, as strong as I like
    Go for bong or a knife, I'm Kongin' this type
    Soldier on Quietly Until Intense Shit Happens
    I shit rappin', I'ma lit Captain'
    Goin' down with the ship, finger tips
    Drip blood and mud, beer suds flood
    Too drunk to see, still sinkin' cups
    Balls back, it's a fact I act polite and nice
    To some people I like, but might
    Fight a buddie bloody for sumpthin' crummy
    Be a dummy bummin' wood sleepin' sonova
    Creepin' bunny hop, karate chop ya top
    Stop, and really listen, no...listen
    I'm listin' my condition, illicit livin'
    Bliss is, a misses, no washin' dishes
    This is, missin' kisses, vicious pitchahs
    Picture a flickah, take a camera witcha
    Getcha a good idea, of why this here
    Is swillerin' beer, filterin' fear to purity
    Surely he, knows he comes close
    To losin', becomin' is the struggle I kinda like the abusin'.

    I'm not about to be givin' in, from beginnin' to end...defendin' my sin


    Tell me you know a poet more correct.
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    18 views and no feed? Damn.

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    Quote Originally Posted by AcidPhosphate69 View Post
    Tendencies suicidal, Hennessey through my vital
    Ride or die, code I live by....out of 4 Soldiers
    Only 2 remain unchanged, still plain insane
    Ready to fall bleedin', call it a demon
    I'm pleadin' to no one, I'm no son
    I grow dumb and cold, numb and bold
    Crumblin' soul, grapple holdin' foldin' chair throwin'


    There's no dousin' a flame lit inside a man's eyes
    ^^still most original flow style of writing i've read to date.

    Bitch please, I choose this life...
    Weed smoke chokin', nose broken
    ^^^nose broken is a perfect quick description of a life, cuz u know what that implies universally



    I'm not about to be givin' in, from beginnin' to end...defendin' my sin
    ^^^defendin my sin? definition of simple wordplay at its best, justifying wrong doings wraps up this piece nicely.


    Tell me you know a poet more correct.
    SHits nice, great to see something worth reading through here, 95% is trash here, and i do mean to offend those who know they are. 1.
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
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    holy shit hottest read in awhile and agree wit bigot theres alotta niggas in here that needa elevate quick,

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    ...acidphosphate, ah'ight, okay I see you. crafty bruh. nice, nice...
    ...demons stray through stations...but God's patience for those worth saving...piece/peace, and one...

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