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    Mongolian Steel



    As I unsheath the sword of the great warriors
    I swish and cut everything through the corridors
    One level down, from the dungeons down to the temples
    Secrets buried for thousands of years... unveiled
    For 16 days I prevailed, like in jail, with no room for bail
    No shield in my other hand, going for the promised land
    Found myself in caves, with live overground graves
    Skeletal stenches sting your nose like wrenches
    But can't go back, don't know the way back
    The fact is that the math doesn't work in this torture rack
    I stick the blade in one of the walls, the walls fall
    I run as fast as I can, can't afford to stall
    I felt rocks knock on my bloody heels
    Stab a blade in your leg if you wanna know the feel
    The sword remained whole, crafted by Mongolian Steel
    My shattered morale went back to pick it up
    It was buried in the ground and wasn't stickin out
    I moved the obstacles, stone by stone
    I swore to blood and gore until I break my every bone
    Sword skills honed, I go in danger zones alone
    I saw a demon, gleamin, I saw death in his eyes
    Silver disguise, picking up the sword of the wise
    He summoned a fireball of catastrophic proportions
    I ran without any caution, struck the blade in his thigh in motion
    The ball of fire, it's power expired, he summoned a whole empire
    I ran away, like a coward before a grave
    A bloody path, made, for days paved
    I took my stance, raised my steel sword, roared
    Crushed my own vocal chords, charged
    Everything was enlarged, the vision in the back of my eye
    I knew I'd die, but why? I snapped with the battle cry
    One demon fell, the second quick after him, then the third
    I was flapping my steel like wings of a bird
    Millions of demons still remain, the battle goes on
    The queue of foes' long, I move strong
    An arrow struck me, my whole battle gone
    Now I lay there, dead... killed
    With the blood shining on my Mongolian Steel


    Bump, now with a pic.

    Oh, and thanks for the love yo. I'm open for collabs always.

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    lisn man, im feeling a collab big time, i think our rymes can blend and ive seen some light on the freestyles we have on the other forum nahmean?

    what u think?

    choose a topic, a theme, a crazy theme the corp might wanna read to the end...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Prince Rai View Post
    lisn man, im feeling a collab big time, i think our rymes can blend and ive seen some light on the freestyles we have on the other forum nahmean?

    what u think?

    choose a topic, a theme, a crazy theme the corp might wanna read to the end...
    Let's do this by PM, I'll hit you up any minute.

    Peace

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    peace bro, lets do this

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    Drop battle axes master pyroclastic raps
    Zip zap through domes like electrical jolts/
    I fold up like collapsible swords used in highlander
    My shit ain’t no slouch wanna take a gander/
    I’m the one armed bandit smashing rhymes like atoms
    Leaving protons shattered with flows that remain scattered/
    I reload my mind with fuel for the blind open your mind
    Optional with Chicago Winds and earthly trends/
    Break your legs, limbs and shins my mind bends steel in the end
    Shapely sharp throwing darts reprise seven chakras
    Operate minds mechanized like thematic operas/

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    Lightyears





    Sleeping beauty eradicates the sources of Evil
    Break your neck, your mother should've named you Knievel
    I deceive detectives, escape epidemics, I'm in the center of the epileptics
    I'm the reason Solaris Alpha's orbit is hectic, all aboard the spaceship
    Explore the nebulae in the center, death of the stars are formed, in winter
    I enter the mental render and take the continuum, bend her
    Plasma rays sweep across the solar surface
    Stars are formed, in the space cervix
    The Ephalae has many forms of hibernation, full of patience
    I take my time, and move the nations without special occasions
    4 Billion years ago, Mars became a red barren
    6 years ago, 4 Billion was the income of McLaren, in KWD*
    The infamous crater remains on the surface, VBE**
    Maybe life was once there, now it's a furnace for centuries
    Jupiter's moons hold the key as the home of the next though
    The target of HOPE***, is Callisto
    The view is marvelous, like Mephisto
    A planet exists, there where there is no mist
    It's no myth, it's beyond the dark side, beyond Sith
    Where creatures communicate through the mental
    Where they chew food, without dentals
    They don't need air, they don't breathe
    Maybe they don't need food, they don't eat
    The life creation is an accident, spontaneous
    I'm not here to convert believers into atheists
    How can God create something he cant control
    He didn't create those mysteries for us to unfold
    Lightyears beyond, extraterrestrial exists
    Wondering about the same thing, as we
    Could there be, life for eternity
    Could there be someone out there, besides me
    Take a book, and a telescope
    Read the bars I wrote, read em close
    It's impossible to predict, like fantasy blows
    As I roam through hyperspace gates, I seal fates
    Science in crates, you can't take what I say
    Dispose you, like Paper Plates, this is wisdom
    I have risen, beyond the boundaries of Shizzm
    Read this again, the future of men in one verse
    Our own history was never a curse


    *KWD - Kuwaiti Dinar
    **VBE - Visible By the Eye
    ***HOPE - Human Outer Planets Exploration

    Last edited by Ritter; 08-29-2008 at 03:39 AM.

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    Shizzah is spitting genius level lyrics ha ha ha lol anyways the imagery in your rhymes are very vivid son. your style of rhyming reminds of one of my favorite poets Alen Ginsberg.

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    Thanks bro, can't wait to hear more feedback.

    This was an experiment in style.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shizzah View Post
    Lightyears





    Sleeping beauty eradicates the sources of Evil
    Break your neck, your mother should've named you Knievel
    I deceive detectives, escape epidemics, I'm in the center of the epileptics
    I'm the reason Solaris Alpha's orbit is hectic, all aboard the spaceship
    Explore the nebulae in the center, death of the stars are formed, in winter
    I enter the mental render and take the continuum, bend her
    Plasma rays sweep across the solar surface
    Stars are formed, in the space cervix
    The Ephalae has many forms of hibernation, full of patience
    I take my time, and move the nations without special occasions
    4 Billion years ago, Mars became a red barren
    6 years ago, 4 Billion was the income of McLaren, in KWD*
    The infamous crater remains on the surface, VBE**
    Maybe life was once there, now it's a furnace for centuries
    Jupiter's moons hold the key as the home of the next though
    The target of HOPE***, is Callisto
    The view is marvelous, like Mephisto
    A planet exists, there where there is no mist
    It's no myth, it's beyond the dark side, beyond Sith
    Where creatures communicate through the mental
    Where they chew food, without dentals
    They don't need air, they don't breathe
    Maybe they don't need food, they don't eat
    The life creation is an accident, spontaneous
    I'm not here to convert believers into atheists
    How can God create something he cant control
    He didn't create those mysteries for us to unfold
    Lightyears beyond, extraterrestrial exists
    Wondering about the same thing, as we
    Could there be, life for eternity
    Could there be someone out there, besides me
    Take a book, and a telescope
    Read the bars I wrote, read em close
    It's impossible to predict, like fantasy blows
    As I roam through hyperspace gates, I seal fates
    Science in crates, you can't take what I say
    Dispose you, like Paper Plates, this is wisdom
    I have risen, beyond the boundaries of Shizzm
    Read this again, the future of men in one verse
    Our own history was never a curse


    *KWD - Kuwaiti Dinar
    **VBE - Visible By the Eye
    ***HOPE - Human Outer Planets Exploration

    PRO!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shizzah View Post
    Illest, realest, every sentence shines like pendant
    21 MC's dropped to dust, the rhythm hit em
    I followed the leader, the enchanted mind of the reader
    The mic, I need her, pieces of puzzle, complicated
    Rhyme never outdated, never outnumbered
    Untouchable, he swagged, while everyone blundered
    Don't battle, if you don't know the casualties of war
    What hurts more, a hardcore MC knockin at a sellout door
    Don't sweat the technique I speak, pull the plug, I'm unique
    A microphone fiend, hardcore in the genes, MC's flee
    Know what I mean
    Shit's serious, no jokes allowed, he's holding the crown
    I like to move the crowd
    He knows you got soul, he keeps the mic in fahrenheit, he makes it cold
    He's the master, the 18th letter, so do what you're told
    His DJ is named president, a hardcore hip hop royalty resident
    Real estates on a plate, as Rakim Seventh Seals your fate
    In the ghetto, there's no escape, Rakim the great, sets you straight
    His melody is untouchable, hits you with a gamma ray, with no omega
    It's been a long time, a lot of gold rhymes, but his is always greater
    He never fell on the dark side, he's still rockin the bells
    He keeps bars cold, like his notebook's a jail
    Lyrics of fury, go plea to the jury if you're worried
    You're waiting for the world to end, I spit juice, you have to know the ledge
    It's the music for the masses, rap fantastic
    I need more hands, to count the classics
    Beat him in a battle? Yeah right, I'm keeping shit tight
    When I be on tha mic
    It's nothing, rhymes shine like a Breitling, there's no use in fighting
    MC's falling down like birds without a right wing
    If it weren't for Ra, I wouldn't be writing
    Everybody jump on your feet, as I move the crowd like telekenise-

    What happened to peace?

    PEACE *echoes*

    * lines in italic indicate scratched samples.

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    It's the writer cynic flow typical off the remedy
    I知 an enemy to any rival trying to marvel at me/
    Beta carotene master cream cash rules wit galactic spheres
    My flow revolves with a revolution that's off the axis/
    Clash wit the madness I知 boasting roasting you camels
    Leaving no marks or smells for animals to pick up on/
    Draft enzymes when I decide to rhyme craft lines off the meter
    So your Geiger counter can't pick up any traces/
    I cut these linguist wit flows that hard to distinguish
    I got too much mental barriers for you narrow/
    Throw harpoons into any barrow giving you hair-raising experience
    I知 the decadence to any eminence without a premise/
    Dismiss your thoughts, as a wrinkle through time
    I drop lines call them land mines to any one trying to follow my plot lines/
    Gotcha hooked off the first bar now your fiending for my gasoline lyrics
    Burning through your headphones like you drinking hard liquor/
    I知 sick as any infection correction I am the infection your not immune too
    If you want to know me I知 a combination of the avian flu and small pox/
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