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    Default WINNER (ss) Makaveli662 Vs. sergeant steels

    Yo man, so u wanna do this shyt....??!

    We will go 1 round, 16 barz, and I will drop first............

    So...........??!

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    sounds good

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    OK...
    I will drop them sometime till tomorrow morning....!

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    Here is my part:

    It's my third battle, and I'm still not defeated,
    Fuck u bitch-ass nigga, my style's so heated,
    My rhymes r killin u fag, like desert eagle gun,
    Man, um unstoppable, rim u like satan god's son.
    I'm standing on da top, like in Triumph Masta Killa,
    Waiting for u bitch, to raid u like god-zilla...
    Lines filled with da wisdom, beats sick, check my mentals,
    I'm spitting rhymes like cum, cuz my infinite potentials...
    Moving like a ghost, one minute here, next gone....
    Till the end of this line, u will be done......
    When u wake up, u will feel somethin similar to grief...
    u will try to stand up, but u can not even breath....
    Cuz u r fuckin dead, my rhymes slashed u nigga...
    Ur acts drove me mad, so I transformed into gravedigga...
    My sword crushed ur skull, my arrows killed u stud....
    And here's the 16th line, what's left of u?! - JUST BLOOD.... *hahahahahaha*



    OK, now ur turn...
    Drop them whenever u like......


    Peace..............
    -suuuuuu///

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    yo man the fuck up before hittin up veterans duke
    i thought u were trippin on mescaline challengin me due to the trash u dropped
    jammed guns definitely bust more effective than u/
    i accept it its tru i was the one masked up that day u got stabbed relentlessly
    all wounded up, only reason u made it through was cuz i left u thrown in the entrance of an emergency room/
    u shook as fuck mate flames im launching got ur bitch ass jumping out ya fire escape
    ur weak but u gonna feel sharp after i catch u and bang ur discombobulated face against a large barbed wire gate/
    no doubt ur raps suck more than toddlers on that similak shit
    itll be similar to a perpetual sentence if i left u trapped with unlimited bars forever keeping ya mind n physical feeling cynical kid/
    ur a minuscule bastard thats insignificant
    im a masculine militant aka sergeant steels devouring that shit u wrote as if it were a plumpy clitoris/
    a firm rhyme assassin from queens the desert rippin it
    evidently taking this homo down then coming after his worthless serbian syndicate/
    ive taken many down but none like this fool that sounds illiterate
    makaveli ur only choice is to get the fuck out and begin 2 pack like the guy who's name u bit/
    and no ur lines certainly arent filled with "that wisdom"
    place this shit on any network any -channel live- and there would be no question on who got smoked like "mad izm"

    -sergeant steels



    nice battle.. VOTES NOW!

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    Flow - Makaveli
    Punches - Sgt Steels
    Vocabulary - Sgt Steels
    Creativity - Sgt Steels

    I tought this was a pretty close battle, and Mak came really good, but he disappointed me with that ' I'm spitting rhymes like cum,', because you spit rhymes with your mouth, and if you spit it like cum, and you get the rest. Mak is best in the flow area, but really needs to expand his vocab and needs to have more diverse punchlines than 'kill u' and 'stab u wit a sword'.... Steels' vocab was pretty good, and he was great with the punchlines. I personally liked that 'makaveli ur only choice is to get the fuck out and begin 2 pack like the guy who's name u bit/' the best. So there you go, great battle, good verses, props to both of you. What happened to peace?

    PEACE

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    ^^ Yo, it was metaphorically said....... I spit rhymes, as I cum...
    But never mind, maybe I could form it other way...

    And, I see my vocabs r thing that must be improved.....
    I will work on that.......
    Thanks for voting...


    Peace...................
    -suuu///

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    Flow - Makaveli
    Punches - Sergeant Steels
    Vocabulary - Sergeant Steels
    Creativity - Makaveli

    I thought it was very even with a contrast of styles...
    I may lean towards Makaveli because of the Creativity...
    Although I agree with Shizzah about the Vocabulary...
    "Me" "My" "U" were used way to much in my opinion.
    I liked how you bought these words into it :

    "Triumph Masta Killa"
    "Raid U Like God-Zilla"
    "Moving Like A Ghost"
    "Transformed Into Gravedigga"

    You get the idea^
    And the last line was dope !!!!!!!

    As for Serg...
    Definatly nice...just a bit wordy for me...
    Some imaginative Punchlines.
    I don't dig the whole..."Location" thing though.
    Real "Ying & Yang" comparing the two...

    If I had to say I would go with Makaveli.

    PEACE

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    Thanks man for voting..!
    I will try to improve my vocabs for sure......


    Yo Dusk, can u change title to Votes Needed..??!!

    Peace..................

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    iight so its 1-1

    peace to shizzah for the vote..

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    Yo people, vote please................

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    Flow - Makaveli
    Punches - Steels
    Vocabulary - Steels
    Creativity - Steels

    Steels won this one.
    "The Devil is not the Prince of Matter; the Devil is the arrogance of the spirit, faith without smile, truth that is never seized by doubt. The Devil is grim because he knows where he is going, and, in moving, he always returns whence he came."

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    ^^ Yo man thanks for voting...
    Now it's 2-1 for SS....

    Keep voting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Peace...............!!!

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    C'mon guyz, keep voting.....!!!!


    Peace to all..............

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    peace Slim..

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