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Thread: WINNER (ERAD)-Makaveli Da Killah Vs. Eradicate

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    Default WINNER (ERAD)-Makaveli Da Killah Vs. Eradicate

    Yo man, wanna do this shyt..?! It's first time to challenge u....

    1 round, 16 barz and as always, I will drop first..?!!!

    So.....................????!!!


    Peace man..............

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    Here it is:


    Aiyo, they shitted bout my vocabs, and how I rap normally,
    but they were wrong, my rhymes r dope, I'm lyrical anomaly!
    If my style is deadly venom, ur is fuckin toy,
    My rhymes killin u, my punches kill ur joy.
    I'm diggin u more deeper, into core of da Earth,
    My mentals r blessed since the first day of birth.
    My style is so deadly, killin every ray of optimism
    Fakers droppin shyt, counterfeitin my liricism.
    Tryin to get attention by fakin my joints,
    but my verses r pure bangers, classics worth tons of gold coins
    cuz many niggaz from here to LA still like licking cunts,
    we, real hip-hop headz, spit rhymes and roll blunts.
    And u r one of fakers, ur style is wack like heaven,
    Me, I'm like Dirt Dog, straight from 97!
    And I'm a beast on mic, I bring the ruckus, make mess,
    And here is the final line, it's over, I kicked ur fuckin ass!!



    Yo that's 16 lines. Hope that I improved my vocabs than in previus battles...!!!
    It's your turn man......
    Drop them whenever u like...!

    Peace.............

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    *bump*

    Yo man, wutz up...??!!?
    Gonna drop some shyt...??!!


    Peace...................
    -suuuuuu///

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    i'll have you runnin' on a certain path while ya ponderin' rhyme
    'chute' makeveli down so quick he'll leave my laundry behind
    its been over from the first bar, if i lose ya'll hatin on the dude
    but i'll make this duke a 'handi-cap' like a fitted waitin to be used
    the shows over, runnin by you... but i think i'll pull over
    its apparent why ya wack cause with constructive criticism, i'd need a bulldozer
    i'll hurt ya pride, ruin ya life cause you a lonely prick
    punches'll push you back to when the Dead Sea was only sick
    you'll be dead when my mans pulls the snub..
    beautys on the inside?..shit, he'll just look like a handful of slugs
    next time before you attack, find a set flow
    cause these punches'll make your chest 'cave in'..till it echos
    You puttin guns on me? That means the scope is on the god
    Son you in a 1 man crew and you still aint the dopest of the squad
    Shoulda said hell no to this battle, fuck weak.. E'll leave you on a suck streak
    I put my money where my mouth is, this chump smiles with buck teeth
    Last edited by Eradicate; 06-18-2008 at 01:30 AM. Reason: suck my penis

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    Flow - Tie

    Vocab - Mak

    Creativity - Eradicate

    Punches - Eradicate

    Congrats to Erad on this. I really liked the '1-man-squad' line.

    Makaveli, I liked your verse, but you need less 'me' 'my', and really need more diverse punches, really punches. Just like the above mentioned line.

    PEACE to both y'all

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    ^^ Yo man, thanks for voting..
    So now, 1-0 for Erad...
    Nice verse man, I hope it's gonna be hell of a battle!!!!!!

    Peace guyz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    -suuuuuuuuuuuuu///

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    Flow - Eradicate
    Multis - Eradicate
    Vocab - Makaveli
    Personals - None
    Punches - Eradicate

    Vote - Eradicate

    I put my money where my mouth is, this chump smiles with buck teeth

    dat line wuz monster, cuda ben even betta am tinkin wit slightly betta wordin

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    ^^ Thanx 4 voting.............

    __________________________________________________ __

    Yo famz, keep droppin votes................


    Peace.....................
    -suuuuuuuuu///

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    *bump*

    C'mon ppl, please keep droppin ur votes.....

    Thanx.............


    Peace..................
    -suuuuuuuu///

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    Thank you Novakaine and Shizzah.. Again wow already 2 votes not bad...

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    *bump*

    Vote please!

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    Vote bitches, so i don't have to come back to this site anymore..

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    *bump*

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    Flow - No one
    Multis - Eradicate
    Vocab - Makaveli
    Personals - No one
    Punches - Eradicate

    Vote - Erad

    to me erad brought it more

    The War Angel

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