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Thread: VOTES NEEDED-Shizzah vs Demented

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    Default VOTES NEEDED-Shizzah vs Demented

    24 lines, you go first, like we settled.

    It's on.

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    checking in, I'll edit to stick my verse in

    kid can't get a word out, clear ya throat
    change this babies act, better fear me ho
    the kids stuck, pondering his next move
    in a casket there ain't no wiggle room
    reading this you're ready for a new one
    check your rep, the corp new you were done
    king of a jungle? tropicana juice only punch you deliver
    you for breakfast, your parents for lunch and dinner
    don't talk how you ill smoking me for a comeback
    showing your ass crack your version of a flashback
    bust a bullet in your ass repeatedly
    like looping a part in a porn movie
    see homie, I know you ain't a g or a druggie
    drawing up some x's and o's asking "Can you hug me?"
    raid his house, in and out quick, shizz a fag
    can't afford a gold fish, so he jizz's in a bag
    shits already dead wrapped up underground
    bombed so bad he got a ten on the richter now
    don't run, if I don't do it I got an insane crew
    now your feelings hurt like a blind man raped you
    call me fag, substance is what your words lack
    pussy on my mind like Dr. Seuss, got a cat in the hat
    its over now, like the radio broke, put the tape on
    kicking it with your bitch doggy style like I have no arms

    I think thats 24 lines. Hopefully I did better then versus makaveli
    Last edited by thatKid; 06-15-2008 at 11:10 PM.
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    Rhymes talking about pussy and hugging
    Beat me with that? You must be bugging
    I'm hardcore, I chop ya fucking head off
    You strangle me and I just cough
    I'm invincible, regenerate like I'm like C.B.
    Infectious paragraphs, leaving you with TB
    Wreckage of your mental without an instrumental
    Knock out your dental, and that's just being gentle
    I'm just showing mercy,because I'm sentimental
    You're like a louse, and I'm the devils advocate
    Stick a dick in your mouth, and fuck what you spit
    You get writer's block after two lines
    That's the explanation of your bad rhymes
    I stop the clock like Hiro, plunging out your eyes
    Leaving you blind, to stare behind
    Wondering what happened, I fuck with your mind
    Leave you in paranoia, looking over your back
    Screaming, but everything is black
    You're demented talking about rape
    I make wine out of you, squeeze you like grape
    I do it like Sylar when I drop off the head
    Knockin' a bit of whers' rhymes,leaving you dead
    You live in illusion,thinking your style rocks
    You smoke a cigar,pretending it's a black cock

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    Votes people

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    votes

    I think I lost. Oh well, fuck it. I need a lot of practice
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    Flow - Shizzah
    Multis - Demented
    Punches - Demented
    Personals - None
    Vocab - Shizzah

    Vote - Demented

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    Shizzah had more direct attacks, better consistant flow, better metaphores.
    overall i felt his verse was the winning one.

    VOTE-SHIZZAH

    liked your closing

    "You live in illusion,thinking your style rocks
    You smoke a cigar,pretending it's a black cock"

    KIA KAHA

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    Flow - Shizz
    Punches - Shizz
    Personals - Shizz
    Vocab - Shizz
    Creativity - Demented

    Vote - Shizz

    I liked both verses! But it was like 2 totally different styles! It seemz to me that Demented really played with his verse, and I liked it, so it seemz he formed few very dope punches, but Shizz' verse, for me, had plenty more direct and harder punches, really nice flow, and the last line was way too better than demented's! So overally, Shizz took this one!

    Peace...........
    -suuuuuuuu///

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    Shiiet, I forgot about this battle. I don't do battles no more. Kinda rusty with the shit, I see.

    If I was an outside observer, I'd vote tie.

    But thanks for those 2 votes.

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    I'm gonna have to vote for a tie, the two styles are too different.

    Shizzah had mad crazy metaphors and a better flow but demented was more direct with his attacks, just too different to go one way or the other

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    vote=Shizza

    fuck the vote method

    keep it straight

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    It's 3-1 now right?

    I completely forgot about this battle lol.

    Keep voting peeps.

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    flow - Shizzah
    creativity - Shizzah
    vocabulary - Demented
    punches - Shizzah

    Vote: Shizzah

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    flow - Shizzah
    creativity - Shizzah
    vocabulary - Demented
    punches - Shizzah


    over all i gotta go with - shizzah

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    Peace peace

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