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    Life strikes in sinister ways as the devil sits and plays wit our last few days

    An were not at liberty to say but we do have the right to kneel an pray

    And if that means were wrong ok I’ll do the wrong thing for god any day

    An I’d rather right my wrongs then rot in hell so on the count of three ring that bell…ding, ding, ding

    It’s time to fight these demons so we must unite if we don’t want them to beat us

    An take us under to live wit lost souls people pay attention cuz life is gold-en

    I don’t think u have ever been told thuroly enough

    If u feel like I feel then please stand up

    Cuz we gotta fight together

    Unite as one…there’s no time to prepare the war has all ready begun

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    Default Re: pain games

    cant read a amn thing

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    Default Re: pain games

    damn, really liked that, nice work inifiniti
    He Who Professes The Faith Will Excel:
    And To Whatever You Accustom Yourself
    You Will Grow Accustomed To.
    Blessing To The Reader.

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    cant read it that well...


    still standin tall

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    i agree with spoken

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    Nice verse keep it up, but ahh leave the "ding, ding , ding " and such expressions in your lyrics it weakens the impact. But nice verse!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Yah the font size also -keep it in check!!!!

    Peace

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