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    Default Willie Lynch

    They label me a danger
    Kidnapped to this land as a stranger
    Hate made me hate myself
    I'm filled with anger
    Less than 30 years ago
    a noose was my hanger
    Sane, I'm productive
    Insane, I'm a banger

    I'm a late night street walker, victim stalker
    Blue uniform with a badge body chalker
    B-Boy body rocker, mason, carpenter and caulker
    Cock blocker, knock you off your rocker
    Black steel cocker, 15 inch subwoofer beat knocker
    Green leaf sparker, the color of teeth tarter
    Through shades darker than tar shit talker
    Authored Make Me Wanna Holler
    Frequent the nastiest clubs clutching sweaty dollars
    A funeral parlor body hauler
    Philosopher, teacher, and scholar
    No good dirty dog, consider my own child a bother
    Wise grandfather, 10 grand a man popper
    I'll pimp your daughter
    Ask me 'Why?'
    I'll reply, "I can't stop her!"

    They label me a danger
    Kidnapped to this land as a stranger
    Hate made me hate myself
    I'm filled with anger
    Less than 30 years ago
    a noose was my hanger
    Sane, I'm productive
    Insane, I'm a banger

    I'm brutally honest, a damn liar
    Colder than dry ice
    Touch me, you'll burn from my fire
    Use legal means for more cheddar
    Illiterate, I don't know no letters
    Go in debt for a Roc a Fella black and gold sweater
    Use illegal means for more chedder
    Over 30, but a child, I don't know no better
    A Muhammad and Jesus follower
    Down with the swine, in the slop wallower
    Tell me any bullshit swallower
    Secretary of State, master of my fate
    Win any debate, calm, irate
    God, king, and savage, innate
    Sold out my family for the cabbage and ate
    News anchor, couch potato, remote channel changer
    Eagle and birdie shooter under par
    In any sport, TV show, or movie, I'm a star

    They label me a danger
    Kidnapped to this land as a stranger
    Hate made me hate myself
    I'm filled with anger
    Less than 30 years ago
    a noose was my hanger
    Sane, I'm productive
    Insane, I'm a banger

    I'm a nerd, jock and activist
    Gangster rapper and raptivist
    Follow anyone, leader and catalyst
    War monger and pacifist
    A 22 inch rim sit uponer
    Show me a Black woman
    I'll call her a bitch and shit upon her
    A virgin, a degenerate, deviant splurgin
    Do anything at my peer group's urgin
    Adolescent with testosterone surgin
    Separated Siamese twins joined at the head
    Supreme surgeon
    Body builder, genius IQ, leave you bewildered
    Live the high life like Miller
    Ultimate master Black man killer
    Cell dwella, from blue black to high yella
    A plus student, I'm stella
    Rob you at an automatic tella
    psychological warfare works
    I'm here to tell ya
    It wasn't a failure

    They label me a danger
    Kidnapped to this land as a stranger
    Hate made me hate myself
    I'm filled with anger
    Less than 30 years ago
    a noose was my hanger
    Sane, I'm productive
    Insane, I'm a banger
    We are already dead, and are replaying our lives at the judgment.

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    Default Re: Willie Lynch

    ok i swear i didn't bit this off you, i figured i would bring it to your attention
    before anyone else runs their fingers, but i did something similar to your
    chorus thing..

    me
    "you lone ranger/ i look at you like a hostile stranger/ steppin' in my
    direction is heading into danger/ don't anger the headless horseman"

    we did it in the same day and it's pretty strange aye?

    word n nice verses dun

    peace

    OmO < Idiom

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    Default Re: Willie Lynch

    born ruler...some serious fire ....

    oh and Idiom didnt bite before people start hate
    "It id missing the point to think that the sword is solely in cutting a man down. It is not in cutting people down; it is in killing evil. It is the stratagem of killing the evil of one man and giving life to ten thousand." - Pg.72 Death Dealing Sword. < Life Giving Sword >



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    Default Re: Willie Lynch

    Your flow and lyrical content seems to be based on the rhyme of the verse. You have to make it flow with the rhyme you have in mind (that's how this verse appears like). You have a certain rhythm which you worked with from the start of the verse and tried to keep it till the end of the verse. And you lyrical content needs to improve- but with this verse you can almost get away with it cause fo the title you gave it.Work on you style though.

    Peace

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    Default Re: Willie Lynch

    nice verse son u killeed tha whole thing
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