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    aint it funny, the gap between wealth and poverty/
    rich kids dont do shit and got a life set out properly/
    some kids culda been a better son if they had the chance probably/
    but u dont gotta do somethin u dont need to just wut u gotta be/
    and it just seems that i gotta be somethin better then wat i been/
    never can i win cuz i just set another goal, live another sin/
    unblelievable is the pressure to take yourself another level/
    10 dollars out of 2 it seems only diamond bezels is the absolute acceptable/
    and then it becomes regretable, you payin thousands for somethin easily forgettable/
    cash culda went to a charity fund or even a gift for a friend who acts respectable/
    incredible how money takes over and greed no longer is in the frame/
    would you have done the right thing with ur money, i think most wuld do the same/
    u hate to think about it because its not ur problem to begin with/
    until its those same issues and triumphs u gotta live with/
    cant get large fries cuz it goes over ur budget/
    lemme pick up a dime wen no ones lookin fuck it/
    got a friend from school buyin a new lancer 2008/
    happy for ma niggas but wut the fuck do i got on my plate/
    wut do i gotta show for all the times i been through/
    see a cheap nigga and u think hes a bum who needs you/
    ur bubble jacket got holes were the fluffy shit seep through/
    some days you wish god talks to your soul and says here/
    i finally freed you/
    Last edited by adedwutang; 06-27-2007 at 07:37 PM.
    "i got drug spots from NY to Canada/
    cuz Big L b fuckin wit more keys then a janita/"
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    feeedddback please
    "i got drug spots from NY to Canada/
    cuz Big L b fuckin wit more keys then a janita/"
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    somebody
    "i got drug spots from NY to Canada/
    cuz Big L b fuckin wit more keys then a janita/"
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    feedback ppeeeppsss
    hey wusup ya thought i come back and drop some knowledge on you old ass mother fuckers haha check it

    Invisible Ink, the new alias of a general/
    Natioanl Treasure my rhymes become federal/
    no retinals, cant focus on the look of ma lines/
    only pigment i contain is the blood in my eyes/
    word of the wise, too hot cant throw dirt on the sun that i shine/
    no cover no bullets your mine/
    no time no money im crime/
    pause, gimme a second its hard dam work to shit on this record/
    lucky like a seven, get ya head blown off split like a melon/
    come steppin/
    im reppin every hood that be feelin ma message/
    hard shit on this track im spittin wit method/
    maybe ghost, or masta, im still killin you/
    tax man u all paid up but im still billin u/
    stick a ice pick in ya neck yes im chillin too/
    sorry for the graphics but im just too visual/
    gone for a min but a nigga got a legacy/
    legendary skill not just a heisman but the treasury/
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    cuz Big L b fuckin wit more keys then a janita/"
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    aint it funny, the gap between wealth and poverty/
    rich kids dont do shit and got a life set out properly/
    some kids culda been a better son if they had the chance probably/
    but u dont gotta do somethin u dont need to just wut u gotta be/
    and it just seems that i gotta be somethin better then wat i been/
    never can i win cuz i just set another goal, live another sin/
    unblelievable is the pressure to take yourself another level/
    10 dollars out of 2 it seems only diamond bezels is the absolute acceptable/
    and then it becomes regretable, you payin thousands for somethin easily forgettable/
    cash culda went to a charity fund or even a gift for a friend who acts respectable/
    incredible how money takes over and greed no longer is in the frame/
    would you have done the right thing with ur money, i think most wuld do the same/
    u hate to think about it because its not ur problem to begin with/
    until its those same issues and triumphs u gotta live with/
    cant get large fries cuz it goes over ur budget/
    lemme pick up a dime wen no ones lookin fuck it/
    got a friend from school buyin a new lancer 2008/
    happy for ma niggas but wut the fuck do i got on my plate/
    wut do i gotta show for all the times i been through/
    see a cheap nigga and u think hes a bum who needs you/
    ur bubble jacket got holes were the fluffy shit seep through/
    some days you wish god talks to your soul and says here/
    i finally freed you/

    You lyrically got some shit off your chest with this one.
    Kinda reminds me of "Hungry" by U-god but better.
    I only have one beef, you need to fix your spelling.



    My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    haha good looks yo im actually really good wen it comes to grammar and all that but wen i write freestyles i put down watever but thanx for replyin son.
    peace-
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    cuz Big L b fuckin wit more keys then a janita/"
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    the last page of the scrolls homey the dynasty is over/
    ima retire and come back harder like jay to tha hova/
    invisible Ink write the name down and remember it/
    take a mental note of ma skill cuz it only lead to ya betterment/
    the delicate flow is so ancient that they just had to relic it/
    relish it, sell a cig to a sick cuz im on that goodfella shit/
    infectious like staff no vaccination for the lives that im takin/
    chef master i bake bad mutha's so hot u cant touch this kid sucka/
    fuck up ya ankles wen i break em like half-amazin at the rucker/
    bring da ruckus cuz ya never herd somethin fuckin up ma structure/
    i hail from the greatest ice storm New York is back mother fuckers/
    i dont act son ima hustler wen it comes to fuckin up bustas/
    Big L status smoke spliffs wit the baddest rather im badder then the illest/
    spillin the knowledge stone cold im the chillest/
    killer raps wit science im the devil version of a chemist/
    Last edited by adedwutang; 02-19-2008 at 06:27 PM.
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    cuz Big L b fuckin wit more keys then a janita/"
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    cmon ma niggas
    "i got drug spots from NY to Canada/
    cuz Big L b fuckin wit more keys then a janita/"
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    linez 8-12 had my head bobbin yo-

    nice work

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    yea that was my favorite part too i tried to make a verse around it real quik but i dk cuz good looks tho
    peace
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    check it
    nuclear rhymes split apart ya particles cuz ma flow so marvelous/
    part of his method is a criminal-esque molecular level arsenist/
    ima son yo ass cuz this boy got too many bitches im mackin shit/
    guess whos back in it, i bust yo head aint no way of reattachin it/
    smack ya koofy off, strait up dunce a nigga like ima game show host/
    parasitic insect cut up ya veins til i get to ya brain then i choke/
    smokin motha fuckas bring a death fog as i approach/
    cant escape the mist just sacrifice ya self for the roast/
    lackin the inte
    "i got drug spots from NY to Canada/
    cuz Big L b fuckin wit more keys then a janita/"
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    Quote Originally Posted by adedwutang View Post
    aint it funny, the gap between wealth and poverty/
    rich kids dont do shit and got a life set out properly/
    some kids culda been a better son if they had the chance probably/
    but u dont gotta do somethin u dont need to just wut u gotta be/
    and it just seems that i gotta be somethin better then wat i been/
    never can i win cuz i just set another goal, live another sin/
    unblelievable is the pressure to take yourself another level/
    10 dollars out of 2 it seems only diamond bezels is the absolute acceptable/
    and then it becomes regretable, you payin thousands for somethin easily forgettable/
    cash culda went to a charity fund or even a gift for a friend who acts respectable/
    incredible how money takes over and greed no longer is in the frame/
    would you have done the right thing with ur money, i think most wuld do the same/
    u hate to think about it because its not ur problem to begin with/
    until its those same issues and triumphs u gotta live with/
    cant get large fries cuz it goes over ur budget/
    lemme pick up a dime wen no ones lookin fuck it/
    got a friend from school buyin a new lancer 2008/
    happy for ma niggas but wut the fuck do i got on my plate/
    wut do i gotta show for all the times i been through/
    see a cheap nigga and u think hes a bum who needs you/
    ur bubble jacket got holes were the fluffy shit seep through/
    some days you wish god talks to your soul and says here/
    i finally freed you/
    If you shortened a couple lines in the begining, this would be one kind of music i would listen to. You gotta a simple and upfront style of writing, and by the end of this verse i really got the points. Reminds me of a conscious devin the dude verse, without all the rhyme schemes he writes with. Out of all the bullshit on this site, this verse is stands apart from what i've read.
    8/10.
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    thanx cuz i appreciate that, sometimes i get heated and i just wanna talk real shit so good looks on that. ill try n keep that up.
    peace-
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    cuz Big L b fuckin wit more keys then a janita/"
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    pass that shit and lemme show u the tru meaning of ya highness/
    honor the best and those worthy of recognition from ya blindness/
    loyalty is a rare quality reserved for only the realest of real persons/
    jealousy and betrayal is what ultimately leads to all these black herses/
    settle down and lemme flow freely wit my neverending knowledge/
    these verses got continuous streaks like cars do with mileage/
    i done wrecked niggas wit my mysteriously vengeful skills/
    i vent for bills cuz my temper swallow mc's like pills/
    wash em down wit the infamous and aquatic flow/
    legendary for the rep now im hot cuz i kno/
    the streets we walk, got mic chords lined out in chalk/
    break bones wit talk, u can c ma skills from the roots to the stalk/
    everybody get wit it, copyrwrite my shit but niggas still bit it/
    bring my ego everywhere and the shit still never fit in/
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    ohh man i love this verse lol
    "i got drug spots from NY to Canada/
    cuz Big L b fuckin wit more keys then a janita/"
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    check it, you cant dissolve the flow this kid got til im finish/
    your raps i diminish, attack the track big shit u cant miss it/
    punk mother fuckers in the kitchen, washed up u cant dish it/
    feelin ma disses convert ur ass from wack ass to Kristian/ (my name)
    best of wishes to ya homey u gonna need the help/
    step up to ya father and this bitch nigga gets the belt/
    think u got me in the corner better revise ur thoughts/
    i rise up from the lost chop the top off the boss/
    killer instinct only comes out wen u the poorest/
    lolipoppin this nigga flamin like a torch in the forest/
    pour gasoline rhymes til i engulf ya whole family/
    satanic raps the fire in my mind equivelant to insanity/
    representing all of humanity i take out UFO's wit 16's kid im dangerous/
    extraterrestrial aliens cant match my intelligence nah nigga/
    they aint as fly as i get, i reach space wen my dj finish wit the set/
    smack the visual out ya head cuz im moving on to the next/
    nigga i can deepthroat bitches wit ma balls on her breast/
    "i got drug spots from NY to Canada/
    cuz Big L b fuckin wit more keys then a janita/"
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