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    "Rap clones, attempted to dethrone the god from his position,
    but the original stands alone, so I defeated my opposition,
    bodies lay, where my sword had swung and created a blood bath,
    Vultures fed on the remains of those who crossed jamel's path"

    this was my fav lil section of this rhyme

    you got potential son
    it started off a lil choppy but got better after a few lines

    keep at it you got a nice vocab just gotta be a bit more creative with it

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    that was ill i see u took some vocab from are battle huh jamel????

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    When I first dropped people thought I was spitting hieroglyphics,
    to be specific, it was too complex for the neolithic,


    hot dam,that was ill
    "i got drug spots from NY to Canada/
    cuz Big L b fuckin wit more keys then a janita/"
    Follow me @SkiLLs456

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    yea realized that 2 but didnt feel like copyin the whole verse
    haha peace
    "i got drug spots from NY to Canada/
    cuz Big L b fuckin wit more keys then a janita/"
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    cheers












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    sickness pure sickness
    "It id missing the point to think that the sword is solely in cutting a man down. It is not in cutting people down; it is in killing evil. It is the stratagem of killing the evil of one man and giving life to ten thousand." - Pg.72 Death Dealing Sword. < Life Giving Sword >



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    More feedback please












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