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    Happiness not happenings SynsCei's Avatar
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    wattup all this is my first post on this site though i've been scoping out the chamber, hip hop shop and know the ledge for a while now. figure my first post should be something i wrote lemme knowwhat you all think...

    before a moment's notice i noticed the moment
    translucent component take five for encroachment
    configured to disfigure a perfect world out of bounds
    feel the storms gather around but i blow them to the ground
    i don't make up stories just try and broadcast wise
    eyes engulfed in cries tears filling in the skies
    to reprimand is in-Demand but not for order
    shatter all the borders back and forth no need for quarters
    underground in a basement wonder around with no placement
    smoke clears the way devils hidden but adjacent
    hesitatin hesitation leading tracks off the pavement
    won't let slave ships gather up a mason
    building and distilling bricks with feeling no revealing
    stack them past the ceiling let the stinging do the healing
    open up the ninth inning leaving only billings
    standing ovation like a red socked Schilling
    poison in the mouth feeling blue with the rhyme
    simple with the crime life counts more than time
    uncertainty complexity leaves many dreams left unseen
    off the scenes i seem to seep through seems lifes not what it used to be
    cause in the mind i'm confined thoughts penetrate the gimmick
    never steep for me to bend it but to sweep up the image
    clueless with the sickness where it seems i'm just a witness
    use diversions with the swiftness hold it off until it's cryptic
    magic forces bearing down drowning out every sound
    lifted off of every ground sinking when i'm seeing down
    perched on a heavy frown extra pillows in the burial
    comfort til i awake soon baked not trivial
    puzzles broken into layers depths are never reached
    jenga til the point i'm the block that can't be beat
    it's a feat that physics can't echo no rhythmic
    bouncing off the walls chasing lights getting fitted
    condition to envision pristine thoughts of wisdom
    glimpsed on certain levels telescoped mind's vision
    floating in the same boat just on opposite ends
    imagine not imagining would it still be pretend
    parallel dimension as if Vic pushed send
    unparallel comprehension leaves a blank stare again
    Shadows of the night reflect nightmares of the day
    Daydreams break light though evenings on its way -- SynsCei

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    Prince Rai
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    welcome to the corp!

    solid words right there.

    peace

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    Happiness not happenings SynsCei's Avatar
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    thanks man much appreciated
    Shadows of the night reflect nightmares of the day
    Daydreams break light though evenings on its way -- SynsCei

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    this is hot.
    keep it up
    weep for lost babylon,
    the bleeding god, the forgotten sheep slaughtered in a forest of evil fog
    bordered by a sea of faults,
    fleeing mobs turn to see the holocaust and become kings and queens of salt
    screaming shots, police and chalk,
    wingless fallen demons walking among us as people...

    -.5Kut

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