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    Exclamation new kid on the corner

    my rhymes written in cosmics san so 85%rs can understand
    you tryed to stop the master plan
    deaf dumb and blind hear the music but you stand for the man
    time now wasted for hundereds of centurys
    god take my heart so they can't get the rest of me
    I have many blessing which fill a avg 10%rs lifetime
    run chase grab for the right line

    can johvah budda muhammad and jesus witness for testification
    come up on the hill get hit with a life that will be forever wasted
    facin bids one after another can't stand to look at my mother
    heart broken and bleedin what will happen to the 5%r who finally defeated 95% of the numb-ers


    Munjoy Hill aka NostraDamus

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    Default Re: new kid on the corner

    P.G. keep em' coming!



    My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    Default Re: new kid on the corner

    welcome to the corp cous'
    i'm feelin' this, keep em roLLin' dun

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    Default Re: new kid on the corner

    Not feeling the 5%'er stuff. Kinda played out. I'd be interested to see you drop some other stuff though.


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    Default Re: new kid on the corner

    I would like to see more of your verses, your style was a bit hard to capture, as it semed you need to improve on your lyrical content. Because this verse is a bit distorted (not the lyrics or the flow) but the style you are trying to use. Its like you are experimenting by trying assorted styles in you verse.

    Peace
    PS: Keep posting, but your verse was okay

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    hmmmm it was lacking some depth I feel you could have put more of yourself into it...PEaCE

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    THANKS FOR THE FEEDS! all my stuff is off the top of the dome. no written before hand just monitor and keyboard.


    NostraDamus

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