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Thread: VOTES NEEDED-Skillz vs. Dusk

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    Default VOTES NEEDED-Skillz vs. Dusk

    Ite 16 bars 2 rounds... no bs

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    Im materfully splattering the bladder of this creep,
    passively ripping organs, giving the gift of eternal sleep,
    Call me grim cuz I reak of reap, & deliver death 2 those weak,
    I Break bones and shatter backs of wack mc's for weeks,
    and provide with venom so complex for you to self inject,
    verbally strangle u til ur last breath, leave marks on ur neck,
    Lyrically aimed at your throat, for you to gag on my verbs,
    choke on my words and swallow my thoughts on this verse,
    I stay constantly trashing wrappers, from Dusk to Don,
    recycling writers, leaving redskulls behind 2 b found at dawn,
    I'm relentless, god's apprentice, now repent this, I'm reckless,
    grip the cross, rip off, your chain and leave you neckless,
    I'll strain ur smarts, leave ur brain hoarse without remorse, of course,
    mentally bash ur head in and bruise your skull without using the force,
    Just play jedi mind tricks like I'm a disciple of yoda but no lightsaber,
    got more moves than da matrix in a tight room, not even vader can save ya!!

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    Skillz, you brought a fork to a battle of blades
    and im a stork, delivering life to quivering Strife's
    rattle your cage, Hell in a Cell, ill give you a knife
    out of sympathy, lyrically these MC's get split in three
    like pie charts, these rappers in their infancy aint fuckin with my infantry
    the time starts for me to make your spine part
    speaking of which, ya spine youll hand to me,
    my rhymes remind ya mind of times u wanted to battle me, a FInal Fantasy
    for those who challenge D, you trippin like unbalanced feet
    i reach in ya mouth to pull out ya fuckin tongue and smash ya teeth
    on the way out, now since ur vertabrae's out...then stay out
    and keep your inside jokes inside, before i make your insides poke through your thin hide
    or til ur ribs poke out, get choked out with butcher cutlery
    im good with luck, so good night, the boogie man couldnt fuck with me
    its nothin to close the windpipes of "tufftitty" foes, Dusk is a pro
    ill pull u inside out til muscle's expose

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    cool thanks for voting and i agree dusk prolly had a better verse, but its 2 rounds so hold ya votes til we done

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    ^^ Ahhh, shyt man, I haven't noticed that...

    Sorry man!!! Dusk, delete my vote, gonna have to wait for second round!!

    P.E.A.C.E.

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    my style is impetuous, fracture your smile, connecting fists
    masticate your child, master guile, a perfectionist
    man ya raps are mild, mines are spicy, burrito shittin
    on these assholes in their clouds with their Nighty's
    ill feed you kicks in portions that are known to cause abortions
    kill Thai Gear, or put em in a coma for five years
    and life support em, i extort sons,
    cut them into pieces and export them to indonesia
    ur a fuckin noob and wack rapper, who needs ya?
    ill be the reaper of your soul, in a hole ima leave ya
    a man fuckin eater, so come and see that Dusk'll bleed ya
    i aint waitin round for this fuck to bust like Hustler readers
    whether its warlocks or ghosts, im raw, not to boast
    but when im goin off top make sure that ur door's locked
    this aint MGO, its my battle, and your not the host
    you pot roast, go look for a cock to smoke

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    Your the original red headed devil rite?... but ur,
    metaphors can't settle scores if ur down by "four",
    I've earned my stripes like im working 4 adidas,
    needless 2 say im ill, im pretty sure that u can read this,
    Listen I make muSICK thru martial arts, I kick sick shit,
    Like I study KUNG FLU & infect tracks wen I sneeze or spit,
    At ur knees I rip & tear ur heart out with a sniper scope,
    SVD preferably, ur heads shot & u left without hope,
    I'll make it rain bullets like im BALLAH ALLAH,
    While your worshiping Madonna's kabbalah,
    It ain't nada for me to leave you LOST like abc,
    Have you looking for HEROES to save u at nbc
    fill u up with lead until ur Solidusk, u'll get burnt after reading, I start eating my way up the food chain,
    Ill use an AUDio SPECtrum to pull out your rectum,
    & step on ur face, then use wrench so I cud wreck him,
    Thai can pollute ol' earth and I still be her favorite,
    ima leave u alone so u can masturbate 2 Larry David

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    i like the stealing of my punchlines there buddy.

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    Flow - Skillz
    Creativity - Dusk
    Punches - Dusk
    Vocabs - Dusk

    Overall - Dusk

    Well, ya both heard my mistaken vote , so I won't explain again, I will stand behind everything I said, tho' second round just exchanged my votes between Punches & Flow, cuz I think Dusk striked much more in second one, tho' punchez in first one r better, I still gave him vote for that & skillz improved flow alot, so I gave him vote for that!!

    But all in all, overall stayz same!! I vote for Dusk!!!

    Great battle, ya both came hard, and I liked those punches!! Round 1 was way too better than second one, still fuckin great battle!!

    Keep droppin them famz....


    P.E.A.C.E. yall..........

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    *Round 1*
    Flow-Skillz
    Punches-Skillz
    Creativity- Skillz
    Vocab- Dusk

    *Round 2*
    Flow-Dusk
    Punches-Dusk
    Creativity-Skillz
    Vocab-Dusk

    It was pretty even but the second verse skillz had made very little sense and Dusk was really going in that's why my vote goes to Dusk...good battle tho and I liked a lot of lines from both parts... of the bat... the jedi mind tricks and the pie chart bit ..."rappers get split in 3s" ..nice

    Overall my vote favors Dusk
    Last edited by Havok; 09-26-2008 at 07:35 PM.

    The War Angel

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    I got winner or loser ... well if u wanna battle let me ...and please vote on my battles

    The War Angel

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