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    that shit's tha bomb man.....r u gonna go audio.....the hook is unreal!
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    i like the rhyme for real homie, the only bad thing i can say is to stay away from rhyming lines with "brain" and "pain" like in the 1st few lines of the 2nd verse, its just been done too often, and u got a hell of a lot of words in your vocab so i say stay away from simple rhymes that have been oversaturating songs for too long now, anyways good shit homie
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    that shit was dope man It was like watching a movie- except in the movie you were an egyptian on a pyrimid in egypt and you were battling an Aztec warrior atop a pyrimid in South America and ryhmes were causing wars and weather ruckus like two wizards battling across continents- peace

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    that was tight man, always feelin' ya rhymes stay up, two fingers!



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    Cheers for all the feedback sofar.












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    dope shizz my man

    flow was solid
    vocab is nice

    good imagery with the second verse

    cant fault it any way homie

    keep doin ya thang


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    Well written, flow seemed to be on point, good use of rhyme schemes. I wasn't feeling the content though, and at times it seemed like you might be forcing big words. All in all a good piece though.


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    Cheers to both for the feedback, Noel and 83.












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    anyone else?












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    Yo my nigga shit be tight rollen up piece on dubs what?!?!

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