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Thread: (winner) Maccabee Ridah vs. Shizzah

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    Default (winner) Maccabee Ridah vs. Shizzah

    Yo, peace bro'...

    Wanna do this shyt we've talked bout for months..?!?!?

    1 round, 20 lines, u can choose whether to drop first or second!!

    Just accept & choose and we can start..!!

    P.E.A.C.E.

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    Ok, I'm dropping first. Nice rhyme rock. Lol liked your last line. Let's do a Mef vs Chef.

    Since you don't wanna start, I'ma finish this
    Watch how I slay, while your wordplay diminishes
    Pick up a suit of armor, to fight away my karma
    I was droppin battle rhymes while in the cradle in pijamas
    You can't bring the game, you don't have the balls
    Call me a graffiti artist, I spray your face all over the wall
    Reused Wu-rhymes Wannabe Wu-Ridah
    My soul is gold, like touched by Midas
    You're a bad cover, like Game's album art
    You get a cardiac arrest from my darts you need a new heart
    A beef, if you were smart, you wouldn't have chased it
    From the start, you were doomed to get wasted
    Like my time, you like my rhyme, you admit it
    You swung the bat repeated, but you never hit it
    Let's see your comeback, let's see your Brett Favre
    I carve multiple scars on your bars while you starve
    I cause headnods that end with neck spasms
    I'm on time, while you're having fake orgasms
    A spider can't spit, you can't either
    R.I.P. Maccabee Ridah


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    Yo, sorry for waiting...

    I was soooo fucked up last 3/4 days... I hardly managed to log in tonight!!! Anyway, here are my 20 as promised...


    You are the one, fuckin crazy ass sucker from bum,
    bitter, pretending to rhyme like Rakim the one
    to do a track with him, u would let him fuck ur mom,
    and still u lack skill to match me son.
    Goin' around the Corp, actin like u'r kickin some truth,
    bet u would give a head to be found as islamic friut!!!
    Next Popa Wu, but u r still weaker stud,
    be4 entering this thread, u prayed to god!
    Runnin P9 just to get promote!
    Tell me, how much ur verses whers actually wrote?!?!
    C'mon man, u even cheated on fuckin tricky internet test:
    "How much animals did Moses take on his ark" - "Google, google, help me, I wanna be best!!!"/
    Yo, it's good to be entusiastic, but not fuckin snake!!
    The way u rhyme, ur style, even the way u talk is fake!
    And check ur crew, faggy PUCE nine,
    are u tryin to copy C'mron or bite Wu-Tang Clan?!?!!?
    Everyone is now laughing at u, I made u look as ugly sucker,
    It's the result of frontin dopest Wu-Corp motherfucker!
    So u can't match this verse!??! U need ur crew?!?! I'm fine!!!
    Let's make the presedan!!! Bring the whole P9.


    Peace man & great verse...

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    ^^^^ha ha , not bad but u need an editor son.
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    Great verse Mac, really. I'm stunned.

    Dusk... do your thing.

    Voters vote.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shizzah View Post

    Call me a graffiti artist, I spray your face all over the wall
    Reused Wu-rhymes Wannabe Wu-Ridah
    My soul is gold, like touched by Midas
    You're a bad cover, like Game's album art
    You get a cardiac arrest from my darts you need a new heart
    Quote Originally Posted by Maccabee Ridah View Post

    You are the one, fuckin crazy ass sucker from bum,
    bitter, pretending to rhyme like Rakim the one
    to do a track with him, u would let him fuck ur mom,
    and still u lack skill to match me son.

    Runnin P9 just to get promote!
    Tell me, how much ur verses whers actually wrote?!?!
    C'mon man, u even cheated on fuckin tricky internet test:
    "How much animals did Moses take on his ark" - "Google, google, help me, I wanna be best!!!"/
    Yo, it's good to be entusiastic, but not fuckin snake!!
    The way u rhyme, ur style, even the way u talk is fake!
    And check ur crew, faggy PUCE nine,
    are u tryin to copy C'mron or bite Wu-Tang Clan?!?!!?
    Everyone is now laughing at u, I made u look as ugly sucker,
    It's the result of frontin dopest Wu-Corp motherfucker!
    So u can't match this verse!??! U need ur crew?!?! I'm fine!!!
    Let's make the presedan!!! Bring the whole P9.

    Sorry Chief...

    Flow - Shizzah
    Creativity - Mac
    Punches - Mac
    Vocab - Shizzah

    Overall - Mac

    I am amazed by Mac's verse...he really diddn't hold back...
    As beautifulrock mentioned, a few corrections here and there-
    And you will become much more deadly.

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    Damn man tough battle to pick

    Flow - Shizzah
    Punches - Tie
    Creativity - Mac
    Vocab - Shizzah

    ima give it to Shizz, Mac came damn strong though had some real dope lines

    Runnin P9 just to get promote!
    Tell me, how much ur verses whers actually wrote?!?!

    and he got at all the section.

    Shizzah just had a nicer flow to his scheme

    I was droppin battle rhymes while in the cradle in pijamas
    You can't bring the game, you don't have the balls
    Call me a graffiti artist, I spray your face all over the wall

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    Devine Axis all day!!! lol. On a real not Mac ripped Shizzah with the punch lines and all. He was a little of with the flow, but shit its a battle right??

    MAc is the winner.

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    2:1, props Mac, you really got me.

    Peace for voting everyone.

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    ^^ Yo, thanx yall for votes!! Yo Shizz, thanx for compliment!! It's really important when it comes from u, and all of you great lyricist. I tried this time to listen to your advise, and to try to shit on opponent and not to talk so much about me and use the same words in every 2nd line!! By comments, it seems this time is really better!!

    P.E.A.C.E.

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    ahhhh shit. gotta go mac on this one.

    and by the way...its not P9 haha. we aren't project 9

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    I refrain from voting as I'm next in line, but overall I'm inclining towards Maccabee. Damn that were some punchlines. Shizzah's verse was under his usual level.
    "The Devil is not the Prince of Matter; the Devil is the arrogance of the spirit, faith without smile, truth that is never seized by doubt. The Devil is grim because he knows where he is going, and, in moving, he always returns whence he came."

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    ^^ Thanx ya both for voting!!!

    And yo, Tecknowledgist, don't get me wrong!! I don't have anything against either Shizz or P9 or whateva... Shizz is my bro', mad ill lyricist and yall in P9 chamber are mad ill!!! I'm checking ur thread always, and I'm fuckin amazed how much writing talent yall have!! I just used some situations and some things for this battle, just for fan!!! Nothing else...

    P.E.A.C.E.

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    haha i wasnt getting the wrong idea. i was just saying that we're not "P9". We're Section 9. which would be S9, or SX9 or w/e. Not P9. peace haha

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    ^^ Thought u were Project 9..?!?!? LoL... I'm out of date...

    P.E.A.C.E.

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