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    It’s hard to grapple my abstract technical technique
    Open heads will be broken off the ledge/
    Grown from the vowels I scraped together bowels
    Wit sires I hire more vats giving up any stats/
    Gamma ray gassed sprays congruent armed hallows
    Pardon the interruption conducting campus sweep/
    Cheapen seats driven off leaps my creeps are sight beyond sight
    Sold cha charm infrared dead heat beat cha meat my cleat leave you snuffed/
    Duff out of order corridor homonyms be syncopated when we weighed
    Shady prospects be dialect I interject without any intercept/
    My gaming mantra be pure honor
    Leaving dimmer than a toddler/

    It’s out the park………
    It’s a homer………
    It’s out of here……..

    Roast domes wit close calls
    I ball wit the skills of AI in his prime/
    Come wit the razor sharp scalpel technique
    Oblige oblique shatter knees make them believe/
    Seek what cha shall never receive guidance is blind obedience
    I rid myself on reliance unless I had to be complaint/
    What lines don’t siphon minds be bottles of lighting
    Dial up these “Youtube” cats wit no bats they can’t strike back/
    Told cha whirlwind rage I write be holocaustic when I get levels beyond it
    Solar rays be blinding shining so much light darkness is indivertible/
    Curve the balls by the way the velocity comes off the fingers
    Let them linger hit cha wit a humdinger
    Leaving more stinging sounds then when it’s dinged/

    It’s out the park………
    It’s a homer………
    It’s out of here……..

    Dragon form dynamite
    Grip the gold holding out in the cold/
    Check the excreta medicate cha medicine
    From vibration in life’s stream/
    Dole out chops from plots I knock
    Documents faxes chalice the balance/
    Coming cramped wit days of polish
    Still get they’re stains varnished/
    I harness darts telephoning ports
    Courted wit judges warranting/
    Now I’m boarding ships Columbus rented
    Thinking I tanked it my brothers sold out they’re brothers for NOTHING/
    Gluten when I was rotting in bodies
    Shaking til my scurvies got the best of me/

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    Damn Sheep

    you a monster on the keyboard for real

    Dragon form dynamite
    Grip the gold holding out in the cold/

    this one line blew me away

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    man Sheepish is just a powerhouse of verses after verses after verses.

    your first verse here is so strong and the complete verses in its entirety just sums up my first line.

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    man i was listening to "The Swarm Vol. 1" more specifically "And Justice 4 All" RZA's complex verse inspired me plus i gotta keep my writing game up cannot afford to slack. appreciate it though i feel like we're all in friendly competition n i try n stay sharp plus i happen to be watching Naruto Shippudden the movie

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    thats the best part.

    the friendly competition is great because we all are trying to elevate our verses because we see what works effectively.

    Everybody has their own style to it, like Sheepish you are unique because I don't see many mastering your style. But you see the competition and always come back stronger. and thats mad because that makes people want to do more. thats why i wanted to write with you and bronze etc...

    besides im doing a project right now and i want to drop that as opne of my best ever... so we shall see.


    peace

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    and that is true i think as we elevate it's easy to create i think the vibe you feel when you write and i think that coupled wit "friendly competition" make's it feel differently because you see someone like Bronze, JTS, you, me or anyone else you see like dang that's nice and wonder can spit something that vicious hmmmmmmmmmm.......

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    Word man i look forward to seeing something new in here especially from the Section and Rai. Helps me elevate higher see what others are sayin about whatever, gets you inspired to grow on that.

    and when we collab who ever it is, that just gets you anxious to see what the next guy might drop

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    yeah true dat bronze

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    yo Sheepish is like the Ghostface Killah of Section 9-

    peace g-

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    'Forked tongue make painful kisses...........and fam, when you talk, then the angels listen.'

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    Quote Originally Posted by War and Peace View Post
    yo Sheepish is like the Ghostface Killah of Section 9-

    peace g-
    HAHAHA THANKS FOR THE COMPLAINMENT I COULDN'T DO WIT OUT ALL YALL SUPPORT APPRECIATE IT MOST DEFINATELY

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