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    Default New Beat... Give me all your criticisms to improve it...

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    This is one of the first beats I've made in a while, I made a few a couple of months ago but they were all kinda... well, wack.
    I wanna hear what you have to say on this so I can work on improving it. Thanks

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    Sounds alright, you need some kind of change up in there somewhere tho' (it gets kinda repetative), not sure I like the kick sample your using (but I'm only listening on my powerbook speakers, and they ain't the best).
    Maybe add some more percussion to fill it out a bit too, like some hi-hats or shakers or sumthin', also garageband has some sick 'Apple Loops' try using some of them and chopping them up to get a more organic wu sound.
    Oh yeah, if you can't find any better kicks etc, has garageband got the bitcrusher plugin?, that would fatten those beats up.
    Pz.

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    Default Re: New Beat... Give me all your criticisms to improve it...

    Yeah, was gonna try and get a friend to drop a verse on it and then when putting it together would have varied it a bit.
    I think Garageband has a bitchrusher thing... I'll give it a go now...
    Thanks.

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    Default Re: New Beat... Give me all your criticisms to improve it...

    Im sorry that shit is sad. I dont mean to be harsh but its the only way you can get better. Shit is fucking garbage.

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    it's just too much synth and other things, it's not a good quality beat....

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