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    Sup All ... been a while since ive put something 2gether, so little quick freestyle ... please let me know what u think. Peace !


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    Vision of a Serpent
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    Intro ...

    Yo, Creation a big bang,
    synchronized angle river dance
    water in flow trance
    separate .. the earth .. by the border of the atlas
    leave man to find the balance ... but hah, NO CHANCE !


    yo ! check"heard" ...
    chess board battle play the economy teler~kinesis
    countries fall, the king control the pillars, the marble pieces
    re quote the divine thesis and erase the status of Jesus
    and replace with corrupt leaders, dropping bombs on unborn fetus
    then distract us and tease us, green, white and pink bits to please us
    then feed us, lies fried with blood of a swine stirred with a monkey spine
    to force us to incline to the brain of reptile back to the pyramids of the Nile
    slavery of the pheroes, no heroes or staffs to split the social murals
    illusions vale the iris from seeing the virus that spreads within the soul of the Osirus
    spiritual pirates hijacking the ship of pious and the door of the city of knowledge written on papyrus
    replaced with tubes or photons bombed reflecting their corrupt views
    etching images into the skull of the youth via shows and cartoons
    truth to a minimal while falsehood subliminal
    the horn of the devils penetrate the soul of the political criminal
    pierce through their conscious, hands, feet and third eye temple
    tie the strings to the orifices and watch then dance speeches to the masters cymbal
    the symbol ? simple, left view float like a grape above the lips and the dimple
    powered by the forces, rearrange natural sources in the form of miracle,
    allude the cynical by rearranging the tables in the fusion of the periodics
    new elements luminate the sight of the blind with vision of the aquatics
    never still but full of ripples so u never see your true image as a reflection of the sermon
    the mirror has been shattered, trapped in slit in the eye of the vision of a serpent !



    Peace Out
    Riddlez
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    Quote Originally Posted by Riddlez View Post

    re quote the divine thesis and erase the status of Jesus
    and replace with corrupt leaders, dropping bombs on unborn fetus
    then distract us and tease us, green, white and pink bits to please us

    illusions vale the iris from seeing the virus that spreads within the soul of the Osirus
    spiritual pirates hijacking the ship of pious and the door of the city of knowledge written on papyrus
    replaced with tubes or photons bombed reflecting their corrupt views
    etching images into the skull of the youth via shows and cartoons
    truth to a minimal while falsehood subliminal
    the horn of the devils penetrate the soul of the political criminal
    pierce through their conscious, hands, feet and third eye temple
    tie the strings to the orifices and watch then dance speeches to the masters cymbal
    the symbol ? simple, left view float like a grape above the lips and the dimple
    powered by the forces, rearrange natural sources in the form of miracle,
    allude the cynical by rearranging the tables in the fusion of the periodics
    new elements luminate the sight of the blind with vision of the aquatics
    never still but full of ripples so u never see your true image as a reflection of the sermon
    the mirror has been shattered, trapped in slit in the eye of the vision of a serpent !
    I was gonna try to dissect this and just highlight the lines I like the most, but most of this is something I would call to anotherz attentiona as an example of greatness. THIS is ur freestyle? Get a thread up couzin and see the gods manifest with u.
    weep for lost babylon,
    the bleeding god, the forgotten sheep slaughtered in a forest of evil fog
    bordered by a sea of faults,
    fleeing mobs turn to see the holocaust and become kings and queens of salt
    screaming shots, police and chalk,
    wingless fallen demons walking among us as people...

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    Sup 5KutSkeleton

    Thanx for the feedback brother ... yeah its been about 5 years since i last wrote something. Felt like writing so just got on and thought id post something up 2 c ppls feedback/comments/criticisms, u know just 2 get back into the swing of things !

    Once again, thanx for the heads up cuz, will definitely encourage me 2 get back into dropping some more rhymes

    Peace Out
    Riddlez
    Who is the Coloured Man ? Who is the Original ? Who is the Bio-Chemical ? Who is the Graphted Digital !

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    synchronized angle river dance
    water in flow trance
    chess board battle play the economy teler~kinesis
    countries fall, the king control the pillars, the marble pieces
    re quote the divine thesis and erase the status of Jesus
    and replace with corrupt leaders, dropping bombs on unborn fetus
    then distract us and tease us, green, white and pink bits to please us
    then feed us, lies fried with blood of a swine stirred with a monkey spine
    to force us to incline to the brain of reptile back to the pyramids of the Nile
    slavery of the pheroes, no heroes or staffs to split the social murals
    illusions vale the iris from seeing the virus that spreads within the soul of the Osirus
    spiritual pirates hijacking the ship of pious and the door of the city


    DOPE



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    Sup J.T.S

    Thanx for the feedback. u picked alot of my fav lines

    Peace Out
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    Who is the Coloured Man ? Who is the Original ? Who is the Bio-Chemical ? Who is the Graphted Digital !

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    No More feedback ??? man this forum has changes since 2003 ! ppl used 2 give both good and bad feedback to help one develop !
    Who is the Coloured Man ? Who is the Original ? Who is the Bio-Chemical ? Who is the Graphted Digital !

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    not a lotta feed nowadayz sun. itz division in its longest form, chargin forward in this empty and lawless forum...
    weep for lost babylon,
    the bleeding god, the forgotten sheep slaughtered in a forest of evil fog
    bordered by a sea of faults,
    fleeing mobs turn to see the holocaust and become kings and queens of salt
    screaming shots, police and chalk,
    wingless fallen demons walking among us as people...

    -.5Kut

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