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    Verse one

    i make consumers listen to less sell-out for the airwaves guaranteed sucess

    addict of beats, and mics my rhymes have splattered the best

    sets scattered depressed as i pressed on slapboxed those who cling -on

    Robbed with bling on you chickens jumping on beds the season to spring on

    Kid your not a lyricist who the fuck takes you serious?

    Nearing this industrial revolution bloody your style after your periods cops spot my executions

    Insiders in institutions trooping to trampled life's canceled

    Unable to handle the blowout like birthday candles

    Ammo in the back pocket loaded into the rocket

    Before i blast off hand over your wallet

    And your cellphone too the robbery you can't call it

    In nowadays these kids will die to win

    so let the battle begin heathens, demons, gods, and maskedmen

    Killingfields bone riddled i'm dropping riddles within

    deep in sin preying after slaying followers disobeying

    While you brush your teeth with aim i'm aiming

    Staying hot claiming spot chicken sweat me for the pot

    dickriders sweat me for the shots in the streets respect i get alot

    when the moon turns black they'll know who got the props

    Fiends used to flock because i had the biggest rocks

    Busting chops open snitches last sight the gun smoking

    the mic burner best believe the sun's spoken

    Leaving all contenders backs broken for provoking this no joking
    well spoken spokesman

    Dissing my rhymes would even make Meth say to them what's that shit they be smoking??



    My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    Ammo in the back pocket loaded into the rocket

    Before i blast off hand over your wallet

    And your cellphone too the robbery you can't call it
    damn jts u crushin right now these lines felt like the straight outta a james bond flick

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    yo this is kickin real ass big j-

    vacuum tight man-

    i'ma step off then peep this again every day for the next few dayz yo-

    big time butter duke-

    peace-

    GOLDEN ARMS REDEMPTION



    'Forked tongue make painful kisses...........and fam, when you talk, then the angels listen.'

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    Thanx guys i appreciate the feedback.



    My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    Damn ! really feeling that ! tight flow and strong rhymes !

    "Nearing this industrial revolution bloody your style after your periods cops spot my executions" ... Nice

    "In nowadays these kids will die to win
    so let the battle begin heathens, demons, gods, and maskedmen
    Killingfields bone riddled i'm dropping riddles within" ...
    damn, really loving that !


    "Busting chops open snitches last sight the gun smoking
    the mic burner best believe the sun's spoken
    Leaving all contenders backs broken for provoking this no joking
    well spoken spokesman
    Dissing my rhymes would even make Meth say to them what's that shit they be smoking??"
    ... Love the follow up with the word play

    was feeling the whole thing ... rhymes like that remind me of the 2003 days on this site when rhymes where tight !

    keep it up and looking forward 2 ur next spit ... would love 2 do a collab with ya !

    Peace Out
    Riddlez
    Who is the Coloured Man ? Who is the Original ? Who is the Bio-Chemical ? Who is the Graphted Digital !

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    Thaks Riddlez peace.



    My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    Thanks Bronze



    My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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