(VOTES NEEDED)-M.O.D. vs DUSK
i'll set it off first homie .... 1 round 16 to 20 bars each
dusk u stay under the covers - when i enter the place u pack your shit like gay lovers - theres no savin u brother - u need to bounce & retire - u a bitch that never spits they call u mrs doubtfire -
i'll crack your dome while u get skandled - i got blades & i think your femur would make a nice bone handle - aimin to kill - i aint rodney but u steped inside of the dangerfield ....
shit - danny glover couldent catch my punch lines - u wanna bee gee's but have a hard time stayin alive - lacin this guy - leave u bushwicked & layed flat by some niggas from bed stuy - they torch your crib like left eye
u been on defence for so long you never tried your offence - when im done with u ... you unidentified like flying objects - i spread evil - u a BITCH that spreads eagle - now days i cant leave my house without doin somethin illegal
its a bleeding nation - i can tell u cant spell cause all u use is abbreviations - your just another cremation - that i spread over plantation for fertilization
nigga - i got nine times the endurance - when they herd who u were battling they cancled your life insurance
bomb your colt with the guns - im cancerous - nigga u Destined to plunge like john travolta's son
Last edited by M.O.D.; 02-05-2009 at 01:10 PM.
so, Merchant of Death, to verse your subversive attempt
id burst til no person is left, before reverting to Kent
decimate where ur Hearse is sent, and leave a letter written in roses
reading that ull be permanently living with moses
poison ull be given in doses, my flow leaves exposed ribs
hes hopeless, like tryin to suck a dick with no lips
so let the bets start, this re-tart, is leavin fathered
this shit was a fuckin "Dead Start", MOD, "Don't Even Bother"
cuz im retreivin spines, i love batterin rappers, these javalin catchers, im leavin blind like Gov. Patterson
u want these gloves back again? lets fight for the title belt
i Freestyle, so suck my pipe like Michael Phelps
with the type of welts im leavin im assumin ud like some help
but id rather the crowd enjoy watchin a GOD fight an elf
cuz ull be hunted like an Elk, taxiderm'd and left scoured
ur chances of winning=your rep power, so STEP COWARD
u got nice word play homie no doubt , but i still killed u with the punches
so who changes it to votes needed
1-0 that didnt make much sense to me but ok.
ya i understand what ur saying, but i did mine to a beat in mind whereas im imagining he didnt, no offence MOD cuz urs is good, but there is much less of a flow IMO, not that i think it matters at all in a battle, just thought it was funny that u saw it the opposite way. peaces.
no doubt dude , everybody gotta defend they side . but what im sayin is u have no punch lines homie just word play & that type of shit dosent win battles , & that michael phelps line u had was fuckin wack
iv battled on many other forums dog & i gotta say the competition in here is pretty grim
u dont just drop a verse for yourself & say that shit was hot son , u gotta let the people fill that shit & nobody knows the beat u wrote that shit to anyway
ok i aint lettin this shit slide no more, idk who the fuck u think u r man, but u got some nuts, ur pretty much saying we all suck here, (namely myself) and u know what, for the first time in my rap career i will say this. I am a better rapper (in EVERY capacity) than you. Normally i wouldnt do all this shit seriously this is outta my element but, saying i had no punchlines is absurd, when i could break all ur punchlines down as being stupid and in some cases non sensical. I agree my verse was wack, but coming from your side? thats fuckin hilarious.
i apologize for that everyone, let the voting continue... (which will likely be against my favor)
i apologize for the outburst, and the insults, but when u come in here, u gotta check ur ego at the door man, especially when in all honesty and respect, u arent very good. I will say also in honesty that u did get me in some aspects in this battle, but that isnt lauding u, its shitting on me.
how u gonna diss someone then turn around & apologize , i swear to your god u got 2 faces
what the fuck are u talking about dick head? thats how rational non-gangster types do things on planet earth, man fuck you.
flow - Dusk
creativity - Dusk
vocabulary - M.O.D.
punches - M.O.D
Dusk's opening lines were crazy to me, and it flowed much better.
I diddn't understand the :
"i can tell u cant spell cause all u use is abbreviations"
When you yourself used them ?
But on the whole your punches were dope, I especially liked :
"u wanna bee gee's but have a hard time stayin alive"
But overall I prefered Dusk...
And thats not just going against the grain for the sake of it.