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    Poisonous poems present powerful aggression
    it may sound like i use big words to gain your attention
    naw kid, it puts you the perfect direction
    correction, it helps guide and lead
    each and every little seed,
    proceed with your evil deeds, fuel to the fire feeds
    oxygen for the toxins to breathe in for the next gen - eration
    contemplatin about being part of corporerate enslavin
    its amazin how they still view the television
    they need to get they minds un twisted,
    before they can speak from a position
    your opinion, is null and void
    if your only information, is based on the media they destroyed
    and every station, falsifies or exaggerates events complex reporters paranoid


    this is the state the we live in, not much sooner
    will we seek critical condition
    while other sit on the sidelines bitchin
    others are striving to make a difference
    its different, but it works, the only people that it hurts
    is the one doing the acts, for that, we just laugh
    how is this funny young dunny?
    when people cant eat, but we as people thrive on money
    what happened to manage you own land?
    putting food and clothes in your own hands?
    its gone and never will it be back, for human nature is never to counter react
    lifes to simple and plain, when hardships come, we just ask the next man
    so on and so on, laziness keeps grow on and grow on
    so if you approach me makes sure you ready to spare with a mental atomic bomb

    this is.... my.. poetic justice
    sink mothafuckas like sea ships
    in my own views i seek bliss
    self destruct if i ever feel a sense of ignorance
    i have seen hell at a glance
    me and the lady of death even shared one dance
    but it CANT and it WONT
    happen till im ready and when i die, im gonna do it laughin
    my lifes my vessel and im the only capitian
    a caption appears over my head
    soul controller approach with caution, or end up dead
    but i tryna say im a bad mothafucka, i got a bad mouth like
    a badass trucka, and i will swing on you suckas
    but i got honour, so i wont pull a gun on you duckas
    unless you threaten my family membas
    then you feel it get cold as Canadian decembers
    winter as hell freezes ova
    i move on you bastards like a king cobra
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    yo bronze all this need is a chorus n this would be a dope song

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    thanks Sheep

    i was thinkin of putting it down, i need to work on my chorus skills, never really done that many lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bronze Feet View Post
    thanks Sheep

    i was thinkin of putting it down, i need to work on my chorus skills, never really done that many lol
    yeah i have problems their too but i try 2 make it fight the song cuz most people don't memorize lyrics they memorize the chrous, that's why swagger like us is such a huge song cuz of the chrous

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    word true

    usually the first thing they listen for, to me a chorus is just like a filler but i understand there use, imma work on one for this track tho

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    Poisonous poems present powerful aggression
    it may sound like i use big words to gain your attention
    naw kid, it puts you the perfect direction
    correction, it helps guide and lead
    each and every little seed,
    proceed with your evil deeds, fuel to the fire feeds
    oxygen for the toxins to breathe in for the next gen - eration
    contemplatin about being part of corporerate enslavin
    its amazin how they still view the television
    they need to get they minds un twisted,
    before they can speak from a position
    your opinion, is null and void
    if your only information, is based on the media they destroyed
    and every station, falsifies or exaggerates events complex reporters paranoid


    speechless



    My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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