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    Default Bronze's Inferno

    Loosely based on Dantes Inferno

    My feet glow heated bronze and iron
    my voice flows like water, booms like bomb sirens
    retirin emcees led to the slaughter
    crafted and formed for the godly potter
    terracotta warriors surround my grave
    high upon a mountian hillside cave
    paved the way for followers
    many scribes, scholars and philosophers
    atop my castle spire, i watch, as their needs become dire
    inquire with the lord, about his law and this constant war
    torn between these nations, DAMN these manifestations
    im facin got me pacin, re tracin my steps

    the first time i entered the inferno
    i met Virgil and he urged me to go
    ghosts and the ethreal hosts
    follow me on hollow feet, drift and float
    arrive at a river, then appears a boat
    in one stroke, from the boatmens oar
    CRASH right into the shore
    he speaks " what is the reason, you come to these waters,
    Bronze what is it that you ponder"
    I came to see what was yonder, first you must go through hell and back
    before the Almighty can call you worthy
    act as you would have done upon thee
    but save your words for the damned behind me

    Arrive at the enterance to the city of the dead
    headless shoguns stand guard, unarmed with eyes bled
    crimson red, speakin "THOUS SHALL NOT PASS"
    i walk by and laugh, they curse my name
    and bolts of red lightning crash
    hasten my walk to a dash, along a stretch of carved path
    outside the doors of this lair, only the stench of dispair
    the final ring of my journey, soon in paradise will i retire
    for i have fought out the muck and the mire
    silver silks and gold crowns are the attire
    lessons learned, that lifes walking lines as thin as a wire
    in the moments of calamity, do you prespire?
    does he make war with his brother?
    if so thou shalt be floating on lakes of FIRE

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    Nice Illustration, Vivid As Usual Bronze Keep It Up

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    before the Almighty can call you worthy
    act as you would have done upon thee
    but save your words for the damned behind me


    ^Damn-
    feelin it B-

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    Verbal art Bronze.
    Sick drop
    AH IZZ AH DINASAWR

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    Peace IGC, thanks

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