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    Default For Whom The Bell Toll 4......(reponse To Bronze's How I See Things)

    *was inspired by Bronze's joint "How I See Things" had to drop something

    This is my 1st days and last error Iíll ever make
    Saw the depths seen the step now I pledge/
    Without work left I rest in the sanctum of the unranked
    Now cats making me think after I penned on the slab/
    Edge the ledge seeking affirmation
    By words I pre-dating taking out words
    Checking the reader, writer hold up highlighters/
    Fire fight driven back seen the lefts driven right
    Hold the microphone tight got to express myself wit it/
    Gifted griffin up lift games played blueprints unfolded
    Became colder than any solider I saw on the plank/
    Danked up rank wit styles I spank cats wit
    Somebody was mad as hell popped out the bushes/
    Took me out wit them kushes now Iím just air yíall
    Ball to you fall, draw the pen, the sword got cha beat by a mile/
    Never been on a table beside the operating one
    Saw the knife slice into me, now thatís eerie/

    For whom the bell tolls
    Those who roll
    Those who flow
    Those who dope
    Those who smoke
    Those who toke
    Those who donít
    Those who canít
    For whom the bell tolls
    Check the roll call

    Never brought a tux until I saw bad luck
    Buck the bed, check the edge of my ledger/
    Read back thought I saw as a INSANE
    Typical name placate rhyme on time without a beat/
    Cheat on test, karmaís a bitch she snitched while I pitched
    Out the batters box open out the target and watch me lock onto it/
    Soaked in the wet, webbed up in head, comb the due, view those that skewed
    Didnít cha pen a new; the blues got me lying over the shoulder of my girl
    Coming back down, I see fear in me, watching collapse/
    Out of body shopped down to charter, hope to became a martyr
    The war in my mind was harder than the depths of my soul/
    I found my past decisions given no wisdom until I skidded
    Now they got me under the eye like Jor-El & other put on trial/
    Now back for the revival could be raised from the table
    Wit simple electrical paddles alone, once I awoke minutes/
    I asked the doctor how long I was out forÖ.he said minutes
    I said it felt like days, months, years way past seconds/


    For whom the bell tolls
    Those who roll
    Those who flow
    Those who dope
    Those who smoke
    Those who toke
    Those who donít
    Those who canít
    For whom the bell tolls
    Check the roll call

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    Soaked in the wet, webbed up in head, comb the due, view those that skewed
    Didn’t cha pen a new; the blues got me lying over the shoulder of my girl
    Coming back down, I see fear in me, watching collapse/
    Out of body shopped down to charter, hope to became a martyr
    The war in my mind was harder than the depths of my soul/


    ^that was vivid as fuck

    dope drop Sheep, had to read this like 5 times to catch everything, may still have missed some

    Yo get at me if you ever got some ideas

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