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    I just finished this book, promise ill come with som new material soon lol

    my story is only provoked by the holy
    solely, coldly yet masterful boldly
    uncontrolablly i write epic poetry
    Aristotle knowingly, before reason had it place in history
    my story is His, divine and majestic, yet so just
    i launch off with ballistics, cast doubt upon these misfits
    i dont miss SHIT
    yet i remain the most humble, when others stumble
    i lend them my hand, my granduer is that of an entire Roman clan
    disband across my own holy land,
    the edges of Hell consumed by sand
    on the rim only one sign that stands
    "Not For the Faint At Heart, Here Enters Only the Damned"
    here i make known my heavenly commands
    and make forth as God deems planned

    This sage
    whom you read page to page
    wise in his days and beyond his age
    Bronze, I display my poetic ways


    In the morning rising sun, i awaken
    dreary with my faith unshaken
    hastened by a sense of urgency, my amrbosa
    enlightens me to these heracies
    so with spreaded wings, i take flight
    the lift from one flap flips rocks like fish flop
    and the speed at which i travel, forces time to stop
    arrival at the edge of a pit of gravel, I AM
    the lawyer, the jury and the judge with the gavel
    since Cain slew Abel and the Towers of Babel
    i have been, righter of wrongs, slayer of usurpers
    act my punishments on evil doers
    sent many to the devils, who pierce with hot skewers

    This sage
    whom you read page to page
    wise in his days and beyond his age
    Bronze, I display my poetic ways


    Depleted by these daily rountines, my eyes view only prestine
    been around for centuries, this coming up on 16
    but my age, is no factor for i am the Lords ambassador
    heavenly senator, holy as i may be, designed as a predator
    settle this ancient score, foreclose the final chapters in the book of lore
    i tore through Hell, and all those who dwell
    now as i reign supreme, lord of the underworld, my enigmatic dream
    seem - less riddles, in a jar holds the devil while he play his fiddle
    abysmal confound to rain and bound to fire eternal

    This sage
    whom you read page to page
    wise in his days and beyond his age
    Bronze, I display my poetic ways




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    Depleted by these daily rountines, my eyes view only prestine
    been around for centuries, this coming up on 16
    but my age, is no factor for i am the Lords ambassador
    heavenly senator, holy as i may be, designed as a predator
    settle this ancient score, foreclose the final chapters in the book of lore
    i tore through Hell, and all those who dwell
    now as i reign supreme, lord of the underworld, my enigmatic dream
    seem - less riddles, in a jar holds the devil while he play his fiddle
    abysmal confound to rain and bound to fire eternal
    bronze was on some smelt them down liquid wit this. these were some super clever lines

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    hahaha peace Sheep, thanks

    get at me for a collab soon man

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    Aight Will Do Bronze

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    my story is only provoked by the holy
    solely, coldly yet masterful boldly
    uncontrolablly i write epic poetry


    i liked how you started this off

    Very vivid and imagery was nice



    My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    sick DARTZ
    AH IZZ AH DINASAWR

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