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    awesome stuff BB
    i'd rep you if i could.
    I really like "loopin"


    ain't nothing change but the address...

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    Thank you, Thank you. Do you write any?
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    Default Haiku Rainbow

    Not until he bled,
    Did I notice that his was,
    The same as mine...
    Red.

    We rhyme, Him and I.
    Finally dashing the thought,
    That I was
    Orange.


    Don't wear such dark hues.
    Against your shining nature,

    Yellow is more true.

    Speak kind words to me.
    Better yet and harder still...
    Admit being
    Green.

    Little baby Blue,
    Your countenance will be loved,
    By the world someday.


    No mistake was made.
    He and I combined made You...
    My Royal
    Purple.
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    Yeah this is beautiful work here ecspecially looping.



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    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    Thank you.. Everybody likes that one I guess. lol!
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    That's VERY impressive.
    Keep doin it!
    Peace
    AH IZZ AH DINASAWR

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    Default Voyeur

    I picked him up in the middle of the night -----------
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    And brought him to my room --------------------------
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    I uncovered her and ordered them to touch ---------
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    I held him as he stroked her ----------------------------
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    I watched as he made love to her ---------------------
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    The way I told him to ------------------------------------
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    He glides and takes direction well ---------------------
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    Left to Right. Left to right. ------------------------------
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    With each stroke she becomes more beautiful ------
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    More like me ----------------------------------------------
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    She knows what I know ---------------------------------
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    I held her down so she couldn't move ----------------
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    But he never skipped a beat ----------------------------
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    So Smooth -------------------------------------------------
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    He says things I dare not repeat -----------------------
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    He covers her from her head to her feet -------------
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    And I watch as they become one ----------------------
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    And once he's done --------------------------------------
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    I lay him down --------------------------------------------
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    And I cover her again -----------------------------------
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    Until the next time that I decide to write... ---------
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    For She is my paper --------------------------------------
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    And He is my pen. ---------------------------------------
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    Default Love Is...

    Love isÖ
    Not on my schedule
    Not in my plans or
    On my list of things to do

    -But-

    Love isÖ
    All up in my face and itís
    All up in my nature, I
    Canít seem to get away from it

    -And-

    Love isÖ
    Something I canít figure out
    To be such a veteran, Iím

    Not sure what Iím talkiní Ďbout

    -So-

    Love isÖ
    Probably the death of me
    But I canít tell the future, so

    I guess weíll have to wait and see

    -If-

    Love isÖ
    Gonna get the best of me
    Suppose I should surrender
    But I probíly wonít go quietly
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    Default This Life

    This life is too small for me
    My job is monochrome but I work in color
    My clothes whisper but I move at the top of my lungs
    My hair is tangled but my dreams are long and free flowing
    My room is a cube but my mind is edgeless
    This life is much too small for me
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    paper and pen 1 was dope-
    Last edited by War and Peace; 03-14-2009 at 04:54 AM.

    GOLDEN ARMS REDEMPTION



    'Forked tongue make painful kisses...........and fam, when you talk, then the angels listen.'

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    Default Ammo

    When you leave Ammunition lying 'round,
    Odds are that it's likely to be found.
    And if you choose to live a life unsound...
    It just might be the thing that shoots you down.
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    Default And You

    Speak and you move me.
    Touch and you soothe me.
    Smile and you send me.
    Laugh and you mend me.
    Call and you draw me.
    Cry and you awe me.
    Move and you sway me.
    Leave and you slay me.

    Give and you get me.
    Hold and you fit me.
    Love and you lift me.
    Live and you gift me.
    Glance and you grab me.
    Ask and you have me.
    Kiss and you fill me.
    Go and you kill me.
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    Default Careless

    Sit down a moment._______________Sleep for a moment.
    Be relieved of your load.______________ Dream of a day,
    For a time let this place,____________Perfect and tranquil,
    Be your humble abode.______________ And not far away.
    I invite you to rest.________________ I urge you to pause.
    I delight in your peace.__________________Relax, I insist.
    Let your worries go West.__________Know that a second,
    Let your problems go East._____________Of solace exists.
    Though I have no,__________________ Lay and be small.
    Golden harp here to strum,_____________ Sigh and inhale.
    Empty your mind,___________ Put your cares in the wind,
    And the music will come._________And wind in your sails.
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    Quote Originally Posted by War and Peace View Post
    paper and pen 1 was dope-
    I know, right? My writing materials get it on! LOL
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    Quote Originally Posted by BeautiFlyB View Post
    Love isÖ
    Not on my schedule
    Not in my plans or
    On my list of things to do

    -But-

    Love isÖ
    All up in my face and itís
    All up in my nature, I
    Canít seem to get away from it

    -And-

    Love isÖ
    Something I canít figure out
    To be such a veteran, Iím

    Not sure what Iím talkiní Ďbout

    -So-

    Love isÖ
    Probably the death of me
    But I canít tell the future, so

    I guess weíll have to wait and see

    -If-

    Love isÖ
    Gonna get the best of me
    Suppose I should surrender
    But I probíly wonít go quietly
    hahahahahahahah wtf this funny LOOOlOloLol

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