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Thread: Ayo what yall think of my GZA style rhymes?

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    Default Ayo what yall think of my GZA style rhymes?

    these are a couple of verses i wrote, tell me what yall think.



    I'm da one who be looking for da worms under ur backyard/
    not a lawn man ask about me, niggaz act hard, they shit took/
    fukin wit a nigga from queens, listen man look/
    if they brain's infected wit plankton, they will end up in my hook/
    I rhyme wit a greed for more, no satisfaction/
    like a wealthy man, who only worries about traction/
    TVs and cameras inside of them lights for action/
    my flow's malicious like the the thoughts of John Gotti/
    and carries the katana that leaves their system bloody/
    their flow is weak like da blood of a dead body.


    and


    Slow niggas dont catch my rhymes/
    I intercept tochdowns for my side/
    u didnt know competition so beef, i let it slide/
    my complex sentences on the field leaves us with massive friction/
    have you irrational thinking like pentagon attack superstion/
    blowin up from the body that holds constriction/
    ur shit is stressed like niggas reducing from attrition/
    they raps old like a technology mission/ immature like puberty/
    soft like flowers from cannons, feel my sense of incongruety.

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    Default Re: Ayo what yall think of my GZA style rhymes?

    Why dont you come with your OWN style rhymes??

    "Come from your own heart with this" -RZA

    I see a 'Shark Niggas 2' skit is needed to remind you niggas

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    Quote Originally Posted by CYENCE
    Why dont you come with your OWN style rhymes??

    "Come from your own heart with this" -RZA

    I see a 'Shark Niggas 2' skit is needed to remind you niggas
    son i know i got my own style, and look at the first verse, im just immitatin gza, i dont usually rhyme like this. i do it sumtimes cuz i like how he rhymes.

    and word up i wanna c a shark niggas 2, in cuban linx II

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    first off there is a thread for stuff like this..........IT'S CALLED THE TEMPLE OF DARTS..........secondly i ain't hatin on you, but they were pretty wack.......i don't know what they sound like but the style was just tryin to be like GZA's waaaaaaaaay too much, it was too incoherent and i wasn't feelin it at all........just my thoughts

    "Reciting a biblical verse before I make your melon burst like that nigga Jules from Pulp Fiction...my salvation is salivation, and diction crucifixion" - Ras Kass


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    Pretty good man
    "I gotcha back, but you best watch your front,
    cuz its the niggaz who front that be pullin stuntz."
    -Gza

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    Default Re: Ayo what yall think of my GZA style rhymes?

    wrong forum jacko


    BIG L Rest In Peace

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    Quote Originally Posted by LikwidSwordz
    Pretty good man
    i like ur name nigga.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sun_Tzu
    first off there is a thread for stuff like this..........IT'S CALLED THE TEMPLE OF DARTS..........secondly i ain't hatin on you, but they were pretty wack.......i don't know what they sound like but the style was just tryin to be like GZA's waaaaaaaaay too much, it was too incoherent and i wasn't feelin it at all........just my thoughts
    aight, thanx for ur thoughts.

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    Default Re: Ayo what yall think of my GZA style rhymes?

    it is weak need to come way harder to compare to gza style

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    Quote Originally Posted by 100pr00f
    it is weak need to come way harder to compare to gza style
    aight look.


    Fake niggas get fucked like pussies, prostitutes dead from uzies/
    they wheezing for a life niggas, da shit is useless/
    better have a condom on em, and i iant talkin 'bout fruit sex/
    if not a gun in my hand fuckers, end up so toothless/
    the streets is down for me, like Corleone's down for Gottie/
    she gives me the food I need, results of da busy bodies/
    I watch em get out they job, they children is screaming daddy/
    my matic sprays them wit led, his kids dont know the hurt/
    dont regognize the pain, think he in a polka dot shirt.

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    you got any audio?

    "Reciting a biblical verse before I make your melon burst like that nigga Jules from Pulp Fiction...my salvation is salivation, and diction crucifixion" - Ras Kass


    http://www.myspace.com/theblacksunn1 http://theblacksunn.blogspot.com


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    Quote Originally Posted by Sun_Tzu
    you got any audio?
    nah man, i tried recording with the mic in da PC, but the voice changes and doesnt sound like me.

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    Fake niggas get fucked like pussies, prostitutes dead from uzies/
    they wheezing for a life niggas, da shit is useless/
    better have a condom on em, and i iant talkin 'bout fruit sex/
    if not a gun in my hand fuckers, end up so toothless/
    the streets is down for me, like Corleone's down for Gottie/
    she gives me the food I need, results of da busy bodies/
    I watch em get out they job, they children is screaming daddy/
    my matic sprays them wit led, his kids dont know the hurt/
    dont regognize the pain, think he in a polka dot shirt.

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    Default Re: Ayo what yall think of my GZA style rhymes?

    Dont hate on people if you cant do better for all you saying this kid is 'WHACK'
    "I gotcha back, but you best watch your front,
    cuz its the niggaz who front that be pullin stuntz."
    -Gza

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    and what are you sayin?

    "Reciting a biblical verse before I make your melon burst like that nigga Jules from Pulp Fiction...my salvation is salivation, and diction crucifixion" - Ras Kass


    http://www.myspace.com/theblacksunn1 http://theblacksunn.blogspot.com


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