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Thread: Eric Unseen Vs Vernakula ( Eric WINS )

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    Arrow Eric Unseen Vs Vernakula ( Eric WINS )

    2 verses, first to five explained votes take it. I'll start it off


    Mike Tyson at 20, I'll smash any competitor
    Your shit is garbage, you need a ghostwriter and an editor
    Stepping up is a real bad decision
    Bout to get a beatdown like a nazi in an all-black prison
    You won't make it out alive of my verbal cell block
    Shanked in gut as soon as the gates unlocked
    Then hang you from the rafters with your own intestines
    Intense lesson for anyone that holds my skills in question
    Then I cut the cord to watch ur fake-ass splatter
    No ones fuckin with my ill-gray matter
    You little roach, you scatter when the light comes on
    Run for the bomb-shelter, this is rap Armagedeon
    Puttin an end to you, ya poser MC
    Laughin while you perish at a thousand degrees

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    Default Re: Takin' on whoever.....

    You mike Tyson at 20 fuck u him at thirty/
    Your oblique blows dont hit that hard when u say they hurt me/
    U say u'll hang me by my intestines fuck i'll hang u by ur entrails/
    In great detail, ur whack rhymes i will derail/
    And I will prevaile, choke u till ur eyes roll back and ur faces pale/
    Cuz rhymin me is mutha fuckin futile/
    Ur rhymes are whack child obcenity a Geoffrey Dahmer type petefile/
    U think u can but u cant match a great mindz style/
    Get ur shit together for the next verse oblideration/
    I'll jus turn u in to a statistical # scientific notation/

    nice verse 1

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    Default Re: Takin' on whoever.....

    sry to be a downer but i can only do 1 round right now + 2 rounders r horrible no1 votes c'mon

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    Default Re: Takin' on whoever.....

    I wanted a chance to reply to a verse, fuck it if no1 votes, I like the competition. Feel you thou

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    Default Re: Takin' on whoever.....

    whatever man i don tink it'll matter cuz urs was tight as hell but it aint worth it really i've been in the same boat homieu can change ur verse tho

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    Default Re: Takin' on whoever.....

    Scientific notation?
    I'm an atom-smasher, prepare for scientific disenagration
    I'll crush you to particles smaller than molecules
    Just to prove that no MC is an obstacle
    I'll hop over you like a track star does hurdles
    You make me sick to my stomach like when everclear makes the milk curdle
    You said Dahmer but I'm more like Charles Manson
    I'm the mastermind of murderous expansions
    I'll stab a pitchfork thru you're stomach like you lived in that mansion
    Then they'll post your death on the evening news
    Scaring your whole family permantely like a shitty tatoo.
    Hell, even I'll pour some liquor in memory of you.
    Tombstone reads "Masta Genius, unwise in which battles to choose"







    Respect homie, I know you can come with it.

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    Default Re: Takin' on whoever.....

    Your rap mentallity dont fuckin scare me at all/
    Cuz rappin against you is like rappin against a whiter version of Paul Wall/
    scientific desinagration? Now ur speaking verbak diarreaha dysentary/
    Next time look scientific notation in a scientific dictionary/
    Charles Manson? u dont even speak well rounded rhymes/
    Fuck it I'm Helter Skelter jus lyrically stabbed u 55 times/ (get it?)
    U might be droppin dimes i be droppin dollars so a penny u might wanna pench/
    u have a mansion now? Ur rhymes dont even make fuckin cents/ (i liked that one)


    good battle homie

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    Default Re: Takin' on whoever.....

    good battle indeed. much respect due. peace

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    Default Re: Takin' on whoever.....

    i think eric unseen took it cuz his flow was on point the whole way. the last verses from both of yall was tighht an even but masta's 1st verse was pretty shitty. it wasnt prepared well.
    eric unseen's punches put u down masta.

    vote=eric
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    Default Re: Takin' on whoever.....

    sicka tell me what oblique means?

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    Default Re: Takin' on whoever.....

    jus playin but ur right sicka wasn't prepared well its says verbak in it

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    Default Re: Takin' on whoever.....

    i never said he was any good, i think you coulda both done better, you did better than me man, both of you. be sure to peep me verse teknickle or somthin. ill type it up now. peace
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    Default Re: Takin' on whoever.....

    Vote goes to Eric, masta you held shit down but I dont think you reached full potential. Not in the mood today?

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    Default Re: Takin' on whoever.....

    not feelin enrgy homie lol not feelin my usual flow


    I jus didn't wanna get embarrased is all

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    Default Re: Takin' on whoever.....

    Lol sall good we all got them days, the verse I wrote to sicka I was half asleep. I havent slept in about 46 hours now....

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