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    The Paintings of Mrs. ???

    We just ordinary people or so goes the Legend
    paints in her spare time but couldn't picture heaven
    how they met, straight from a storybook page
    threw each other lines, tied the knot young age
    as it go..,men get old thats not enough
    sadly the optional part is growing up
    cell phone blowin up, strength to muster
    holds back the tears with the sole thought "he loves her"
    fucks her, stopped making love a long time ago
    gauged his lies, reaction time was kinda slow
    designer clothes, boys night out again
    high enough once thought there was no mountain
    sketchy alibi's, womans intuition
    had everything but proof and the will to resist him
    liquor and emotions mixed with job stress
    ease but can transform you in the process
    late night entry, arguements spark
    she was smacked in the face but felt it in her heart
    far to frequent, soaked pillow case
    in a room with a stranger with familiar face
    so she paints, and paints to escape situations
    lesson hard learned, there's all types of inspiration


    We just ordinary people or so goes the Legend
    paints in her spare time but couldnt picture heaven
    fairytale shit, knights in shiny armour
    flirts with ideas, justifies as karma
    on her, way to the bookstore often
    was a place in the world where life seemed to soften
    innocent jesters to empty regrets
    changed her whole demeanor, could see it in her steps
    sex, unbelievable passionate rage
    younger dude gave her youth, the difference in age
    didnt matter, it felt so good to be held
    daydreaming, panties had a secret to tell
    they fell, melted deep into his grasp
    "hows ya day", fuck, her man never cared to ask
    till the next episode, scrambling for clothes
    home, cooks dinner,..her man never shows
    celly vibrates, " I'm out with some friends"
    late night entry, here we go again
    but this times different, the pains in the cheeks
    " I dont need this shit " , curse words in her speech
    she runs toward freedom to escape the drama
    shiny armour, his arms were like hotel rwanda
    alarm clock beeping, wakes up from sleeping
    nodded off painting, she was only dreaming
    had painted a caged bird with eyes full of sorrow
    smiles, "think i'll hit the bookstore tomorrow"

    she paints, and paints to escape situations
    lesson hard learned, there's all types of inspiration

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    that's nice man. lots of imagery, strong content with a story. the rhyme scheme is basic so it's not distracting. props.

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    Good shit man, good shit.

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