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    Default Eric Unseen vs TeknicelStylez ( Tek WINS )

    I got your post this mornin before I had to head off to work but had no time to post.
    Let's go 2 rounds and 5 votes. I'll get back w/ you later tnght cuz I'm about to head off to school. I look forward to the challenge, you pretty fuckin tight with a pen. peace

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    Default Re: Hey, Yo Tek!!!!

    lol iight lemme get you later, I wanted to get you last night cuz I was blasted but we'll get it in today its all good.

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    Default Re: Hey, Yo Tek!!!!

    alright I'm bout to go get lifted right now hit you later, peace.

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    Default Re: Hey, Yo Tek!!!!

    Really not in the mood today you mind posting first mang? I'll respond?

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    Default Re: Hey, Yo Tek!!!!

    Yo, teknically, what you do isn't rappin
    In some corners they call it openin your mouth and crappin'
    I'm looking at my kid, like sorry son' but 'shit happens'
    I think its time you get flushed down the commode
    When I 'Bust a Rhyme" I tend to 'Flip Mode's
    And your names included in all of those 'I got in check'
    Take you at any level, whether it be simple or complex
    Verbal battle left you shook let a vietnam vet
    Heavyly medicated just to help you forget
    How I picked up the mic and smashed you
    Whippin ur little ass ' like you came in after curfew
    These votes ur losing are never coming back
    Kind of like Bush's situation, after invading Iraq
    And to top it off you both talk like a couple of retards
    I'm thinking its to myself it a miracle you've made this far
    So please wipe your spittle off the screen
    That's not a bus window, goddamn man, ur fuckin nineteen
    I'm even gonna be nice this time and allow you to grow up
    That's right, no murder, just punches in the gut till you throw-up
    Leave your face lying in chunks of crusted puke,
    Let you off with a warings of Unseen's rebuke.

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    Default Re: Hey, Yo Tek!!!!

    My mans coming at me hard lol... iight bet

    If this was a test for english, you'd be outta context/
    I Cover the guests in gas, and ignite the whole contest/
    You spit your best raps, and still couldn't light a cigarette/
    High stakes, can't handle a splinter let alone a bigger bet/
    Like vampires wearing crosses shot with silver in daylight/
    Can't inspire to fairing losses so all you ever do is playfight/
    26 you can figure this, as an emcee your pass the age limit/
    Style is diminished, searching for your peak? well its finished/
    Skinny as Olive Oil, battle me? You need to eat your spinach/
    To you I'm royal, I command you to handle all my buisness/
    Start by eliminating yourself, you didn't meet the status qou/
    I'm not discriminating, 2 to 1 odds you had the saddest flow/
    Sorry you had to go, I promise to make it up to you though/
    I'll strap you to explosives so you'll have your chance to blow/
    My kindness shows, for a weakness its not to be mistaken/
    Your Forsaken, step on stage both your legs I'm breaking/
    Lying on the floor shaking, I'm like "CMON YO HE'S FAKING"/
    Trying to get your pity taken, just stand up and walk it off/
    I wanna fight with you, you put your hands up and talk it off/
    Giving off pussy smells worse than a chinese fish market/
    Spitting soft so well, a curse makes you look weak hearted/
    Dearly Departed, and I just got started your alrdy martyred/
    Getting gassed up like I just farted face it your just retarded/
    The match is handicapped get this fucking dandy slapped/
    Luring in little kids in a van with that same old candy trap/
    Fuckin child molestor, couldn't spit if your name was sylvester/
    Just a tweety bird, I teach these nerds call me the professor/

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    Default Re: Hey, Yo Tek!!!!

    Good luck, lets get some votes up.

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    Default Re: Hey, Yo Tek!!!!

    yeah you guys thats some dope shit

    " I'm even gonna be nice this time and allow you to grow up
    That's right, no murder, just punches in the gut till you throw-up"

    and

    "Style is diminished, searching for your peak? well its finished/
    Skinny as Olive Oil, battle me? You need to eat your spinach"

    and

    "Fuckin child molestor, couldn't spit if your name was sylvester/
    Just a tweety bird, I teach these nerds call me the professor"

    my vote goes to TeknicelStylez

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    Default Re: Hey, Yo Tek!!!!

    Thanks for the vote B. Soon as someone drops a verse in your thread I'll vote.

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    Default Re: Hey, Yo Tek!!!!

    hey yo wait up, thought this was gonna be a 2 round bout?

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    Default Re: Hey, Yo Tek!!!!

    Damn you wanna go 2 rounds, you crazy mang I just spit like 30 bars lol....

    I mean I didn't ride your verse at all....

    If you wanna spit another verse go ahead, I definately aint putting in anything else today, and I aint gon wake up till like 9 p.m tommorow lol.... its up to you man.

    I think this is already a legendary battle, we both got really sick verses up.

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    Default Re: Hey, Yo Tek!!!!

    aw fuck it dawg, you right that you didn't ride the verse(except for the age jab) but I ain't sweatin it. looks like I might have to take my first defeat on this one...that was a hot ass verse. Like the Styles is diminished bar. Your shit had me laughin...What'd you think of the spittle on the screen line? That's probably my personal fav in that one. peace

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    Default Re: Hey, Yo Tek!!!!

    You had some shit in there that had me dying to hold on lemme take a look and i'll show you my favorites.

    my bad for riding that part, just i had to get you back for shittin on my age lol.

    I HATE DISSING OLDER EMCEES FOR BEING OLDER TOO cuz I really love you guys, lol but you had to aim at me man... LOL

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    Default Re: Hey, Yo Tek!!!!

    Yo, teknically, what you do isn't rappin
    In some corners they call it openin your mouth and crappin'
    this shit had me laffin the first line lol

    I'm looking at my kid, like sorry son' but 'shit happens'
    I think its time you get flushed down the commode
    When I 'Bust a Rhyme" I tend to 'Flip Mode's
    hot word play here man

    And your names included in all of those 'I got in check'
    Take you at any level, whether it be simple or complex
    Verbal battle left you shook let a vietnam vet
    Heavyly medicated just to help you forget
    Lol the casualty after war and shit... traumatizing

    How I picked up the mic and smashed you
    Whippin ur little ass ' like you came in after curfew
    This line was demeaning lol

    These votes ur losing are never coming back
    Kind of like Bush's situation, after invading Iraq
    bush will always come back dammit! (hate that fucker

    And to top it off you both talk like a couple of retards
    I'm thinking its to myself it a miracle you've made this far
    So please wipe your spittle off the screen
    This shit made me shoot milk out my nose lol

    That's not a bus window, goddamn man, ur fuckin nineteen
    This is where I had to retaliate lol

    I'm even gonna be nice this time and allow you to grow up
    That's right, no murder, just punches in the gut till you throw-up
    LOL i can picture this shit had me dying too

    Leave your face lying in chunks of crusted puke,
    Let you off with a warings of Unseen's rebuke.
    Some graphic ass ending dawg....

    YO you can take it, all and all I had the flow and the punchlines, you had better wordplay and humor.

    If I didn't respect your verse as much as I did, I wouldn't take the time to fully analyze something that insulted me lol
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    Default Re: Hey, Yo Tek!!!!

    I got mad respect for you myself dawg.....here I'll show your verse the same respect althou can't break it all down cuz you had too many hot lines there

    If this was a test for english, you'd be outta context/
    I Cover the guests in gas, and ignite the whole contest/

    (that's a hard-ass line from the get-go, way to come out swingin)

    26 you can figure this, as an emcee your pass the age limit/
    Style is diminished, searching for your peak? well its finished/
    Skinny as Olive Oil, battle me? You need to eat your spinach/
    To you I'm royal, I command you to handle all my buisness/


    (that had me dying and the lines are very-well connected, =(MC secret: staying connected thru a verse will make u better than %99 of the mc's on here, maybe anywhere)

    Sorry you had to go, I promise to make it up to you though/
    I'll strap you to explosives so you'll have your chance to blow/

    (that's on some suicide-bomber shit there, nice imagery)

    My kindness shows, for a weakness its not to be mistaken/
    Your Forsaken, step on stage both your legs I'm breaking/
    Lying on the floor shaking, I'm like "CMON YO HE'S FAKING"/

    (these are nicely connected as well)

    Fuckin child molestor, couldn't spit if your name was sylvester/
    Just a tweety bird, I teach these nerds call me the professor/

    (strong finish-way to put the last nail in the coffin) peace homie

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