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Thread: (VOTES NEEDED) locust vs. daliff

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    vocab-daliff


    . nice battle .



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    good work by both writers.

    locust i liked your rhymes, they flowed well. some witty punches.

    daliff your rhymes were nice as well, killing the wordplay.

    overall,
    locust i thought ur first verse was straight, the gay jokes were funny but then soon after they just starting getting redundant. What's this "wack" and "i won" banter? (swaying to me it looks) Your second verse was better although i did catch acouple feeding lines, but there were no rules against it.

    flow = locust
    punches = daliff
    multis = locust
    wordplay = daliff
    personals = tie
    nameplay = daliff

    v = daliff

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    aight cool 2-1 for daliff

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    i gotta go with locust


    nothing against the other dude, he was good and all

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    its a close one! daliff ur a dope battler, i've never had such a close match 2-2

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    daliff make dope shit! peace man.

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    flow = locust
    punches = dali
    multis = dali
    wordplay = dali
    personals = locust
    nameplay = daliff

    vote for daliff

    both wrote smooth shit

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    bump for TKO.....

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    haha mine was finished way before yours =P

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    Daliffs grammar game was on point and came better with the flow. i really dug how he switched up hir rhyme scheme in the second round but Locusts seemed more personal with the sig hits even and he came harder in the second round even tho the gay jokes got old.
    the lines
    "you spit like you're reverting thirteen...
    half of you don't understand what half of the shit in my verse means..."
    kinda overhyped the verse... it was like sayin something without saying something. locusts had more relative substance despite its simplicity so im rollin wit Locust.



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    3-2 bump.

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