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    green bee aint got no skill id vote 4 tha genius but im drunk as hell so fuck my vote
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    Fo'sho N.G gots my vote, that shit is a fuckin land slide.
    N.G you shit was on point, good verbal, good flow, ya shit was pretty mean
    Word life
    Solid.

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    ya man i gotta get paid, real estate in south florida is the shit, plus i gotta support my wife and baby, but yo check it, im not even gonna drop a rhyme in here, this green bee bitch killed it with that 80 lines of garbage, im just gonna go drop in that other thread where u challenege me nitorious g, ok peace
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    GreenBee


    YE Want Me To Battle Im Shakin Like A Rattle

    MA PeopleZ Fist Fight On The Street With Beans An Brits

    So Dont Talk ISHT ...

    Choppin Beef Like Cattle Talkin Through YA This Hip Hop Son, U A Rapper?

    Like Slim Mathers Well Im Whiter N Badder

    Stomp Ya Fuckin Then Head Make It Flatter

    Than

    Columbus UpDating The Atlas

    Wet The Hell With My Piss Bielzibub At The Top A My List

    Youís A ...

    Commodity Trick Chop You Hands Off At The Wrist Wanker Cousin Remove Two Ribs

    Cocksucker

    ^^^(I get it ... like charles manson supposidly did ... lol ...)

    Fuck Your Mother With My Think Walt Deliver You A New Siameze Brother An Sister

    Who The Fucks This Mister Pop You Like A Blister

    ^^^ ( ahaha ... you're not a rapper, you're a POP star ... lol ... he'll pop you like a blister ... cute)

    MotherFuckin Boaster Blow You Up Like Peptic Ulsers

    Yo Styles Fucked Like My Native Accent, You Mashed Up Like Pulp Paper-Shit I Kill You By Accident

    Stray

    Thoughts Fuckin Packin This Who The Fucks Yo Daddy Bastard(<---you was kinda stretchiní the rhyme on that one, I gotcha though, youíre sayin youíre his daddy ... owned ... lol )

    KidsHave Some WhizzTake A Fuckin Release

    Watch Me Bail This World Out Of The AbyssI Give A Fuck If IMiss Laugh When I Fill Yo

    Bitch Coverted Turnin Out Ho's Thats Really How The Game Go's

    ^^^ ( ahaha ... I liked that one)

    Why Yo Jaw Hit The Floor? That Girl Was Always A Whore

    (Now Im Done Witchu) But I Give You Some More Sendin My Soul To Explore

    While My Bodys In Court Jedi Mind Trick Make Null Verdict Abort, This Is My Fuckin Hobby Lazy

    Bastard Dont Like Sport?

    Just Wait Til My Squad Hit New York ,Wipe Out Shadey Like Jews Refuse

    Pork Fuck Your Dead Bolt Son ILL Run Through That Door Raid Your House And Give To The Poor

    That Blue Retinal Sellout Is An Eye Sore All O Yall And More I Shit On Unsigned Hype Fuck Yo

    Contracts For Life I Cant Wait Till I Die God Is Fake And Red Bull Makes You Fly We AlreadY

    Doin Time With The Pigs In TheSky Fuckin Ghetto Bird Aint No Good Keepin Ma Peoples Awake

    In The Hood I Was Raised A Rebel Now I Think That I Should.

    Phewwww.



    LOL ... dude, you really have a lot to say don't you?

    I disagree that GreenBee's flow is a bunch of babble. I think it's just that he has a lot to say ... you know, like he trys to fit a lot of words into a small space. I read it for what it was, and I think he does have skills. The problem is in his format ... IMO.

    GreenBee, you need to lay your shit down so that it's easy to follow, and so that it flows. That way, people can really see your punches, metaphors and word play, rather than huge run on sentences.

    IMO, this shit was hot. It's a combination of comedy, disses and awareness. I liked it alot.

    I'm not droppin' a vote ... I'm just trying to shine some light on my man's flow so that hopefully more people will see it. I know it's a battle and all, but I think there's still room to give some helpful pointers.

    Peace
    ???




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    Dogg, Whats Goin On. Im Tryin Stop Sokin This Fuckin Cannabis. I Got Yon 14 Inch Scar

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    humble urself i fuckin destroyed u nigga....

    ur shit was terrible

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    Dogg, Whats Goin On. Im Tryin Stop Somokin This Fuckin Cannabis. I Got Yon 14 Inch Scar On My Chest. I Mean It Peoples We Godda Fix This Fuckin World Before I Die An Shit. I Am Built For This Shit.

    We All Are.

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    Indeed I Can Say I Am A Veteran SoulJa But The Physical War On My Island Is Over.

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    ok as far as what da jae nae said, maybe he isnt as bad as we say, but still, i wasnt feeling his verse, but ill tell u what, i read some shit green bee wrote, nota rhyme but just some thoughts on his mind, and i defenently feel his approuch on life, but anyways ill battle u green bee, just set up a thread, peace
    but see i gotta get paid fully... whether its truthfully or untruthfully.
    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=401654

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    Thats My Trainin Partner Right There. I Drop New Thred Tonight.

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    ok lets do this
    but see i gotta get paid fully... whether its truthfully or untruthfully.
    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=401654

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