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    Default (VOTES NEEDED) daliff89 -vs- Poetic Wun

    ummm

    8 bars/16 lines

    two rounds, you first this round, me first next round

    no feeding within the rounds (i don't feed off of your first round verse in the first round, you don't feed off my second round verse in the second round)

    i'll drop probably a day after you drop

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    vote - poetic, clearly better.. sorry liffy that was just mad dope

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    calm down Richard....

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    lol ill get mine up later today or manana...



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    i'ma change my sig here in like 45 minutes though, just a heads up.

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    *over a week later*

    ..........

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    Lol..........

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    im gonna close this...PM me if i should reopen

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    an L is what i'ma be handin you, slut...
    ima crush you like kids is crushin Danimal cups...
    i guess i pulled a Krusha n forgot about this shit...
    really i was just giving you a few more weeks to live...
    ima leave you terminally ill from a face fuck as well...
    100proof demonic - my seeds send you straight to hell...
    fuck feeding off rhymes, you couldn't get any worse...
    i'ma let you type 32 lines & dissect each of these bars in your first...
    this niggas predictable, who's willin to take bets--
    he guna try n get at me on my "homo line" then spit witless threats...
    i'm leavin you ass out like the broad in your banner...
    i'm a royal flush/ you a full house like dj tanner...
    here, ima help you out and waste a bar...
    bloopidy bloop... blobbidy blah bla...
    and i know you didnt change your sig for lil ol me...
    a weak little taunt...
    well...
    not too bad considering your rhymes are kinda corney

    Last edited by Poetic Wun; 09-02-2009 at 05:12 AM. Reason: to change the text to a link for reference



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    look at dude's track record, Poem's poetry sucks...
    my punches got him 'seeing red' because he's throwing up blood...

    grabbin' his abdomen, peelin' it back...
    rip his face off, sew it over mine so i know how it feels to be wack...

    you're losing fluids Poem! chill and relax!!!
    retire the sigs and Photoshop some skill in your raps...

    but that would probably be a failure too...
    third grade rhymes, go inhale some glue, i got some braille for dude...

    lump his face up, erase his makeup with eight slugs...
    duct tape this fuck face, light bars, get your weight up...

    Myoplex is your best bet...
    but judging by your stress test, Death says you better get some bed rest...

    reading Poem his last rights, pray to your god...
    Tempurpedic Poet, i fall asleep because he' amazingly soft...

    livin' in a mix of The Matrix and Oz...
    you're thinkin' you're dope, you need to be choked and raped in the yard...

    __________________________________________

    wasting your bars, this faggot is so retarded...
    my flows are heartless, he's special needs and screaming yogurt garbage...

    mono-sylabbic babblings, you're wack despite lies...
    DJ Tanner? nah faggot, i'm Bob Saget, a foul mouthed white guy...

    The Hand of God devours demons, he sees this and i bet he retreats...
    you couldn't hand me an L if you were hosting Sesame Street...

    feeding every step of the way, i'll accept the debate...
    but why is it a few weeks later, and still this 'rapper's message is gay???

    talking about molesting my face...
    terminally ill? you've got indegestion, i'm over here digesting the plague...

    dissecting your phrases, my threats are contagious...
    just to see my shows i make people go and sign medical waivers...

    i should be on every veteran's play list, greatest weapon in ages...
    he's upset with the changes in my sig, fuck the bets that he's takin'...

    you're testing my patients, you're sick? forget it, the doc's gone...
    y'all ready for Wu-Corps worst verse ever? get your popcorn...



    *continues waiting*

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    this kid just name drops me in cheap wordplay usin pictures like a punk...
    i'ma show you how he does & break it down for daliff so he can keep up...

    exhibit A: lol track record?-- implying i'm barely staying afloat...
    ask Dusk, my only L was due to me slittin my own throat...

    of all "E-MC's" on here I'M supposed to "chill & relaX"...
    psh, a filler line/ i type lines that rhyme/ you aint worth a rap...

    cheap diss/ i'ma start a list of all who guna drop the photoshop line...
    nigga taunts me but knows he wants me to molest his face, homo, stop lyin...

    last rights, yeah right, i don't even say grace...
    you in dire need of some self esteem, you come to W.T.C. to post in the same place...

    guna try and get at me while i ain't in your scope/sayin i think i'm dope...
    nope, the great "white" is gettin mangeled by a tope...

    you got a lil better rhyme scheme but on content i done made you ghost...
    so if you take this, it's only off your cockyness & decorated posts...

    cause i'm at every corner killin your attacks, dead/ i admitted to being wack, sped...
    internet crack head, beggin for a battle like this is a "smack-thread"
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    arent u the one who needs to drop a verse?

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    he drops 16, i drop 16, i drop another 16, he drops 16

    the line in my 32 line verse represnts the divide between my two 16s

    bump for votes.

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    idk how ya'll said my shit was weak... shit

    Poet-

    an L is what i'ma be handin you, slut...
    ima crush you like kids is crushin Danimal cups...
    ok punch & multi

    i guess i pulled a Krusha n forgot about this shit...
    really i was just giving you a few more weeks to live...
    ehhh

    ima leave you terminally ill from a face fuck as well...
    100proof demonic - my seeds send you straight to hell...
    face fuck..? woulda been nice to see a multi in here

    fuck feeding off rhymes, you couldn't get any worse...
    i'ma let you type 32 lines & dissect each of these bars in your first...
    ehhh

    this niggas predictable, who's willin to take bets--
    he guna try n get at me on my "homo line" then spit witless threats...
    ehhh

    i'm leavin you ass out like the broad in your banner...
    i'm a royal flush/ you a full house like dj tanner...
    ok punch

    here, ima help you out and waste a bar...
    bloopidy bloop... blobbidy blah bla...
    kinda funny, kinda seen this shit before

    and i know you didnt change your sig for lil ol me...
    a weak little taunt...
    well...
    not too bad considering your rhymes are kinda corney
    ehhh

    this kid just name drops me in cheap wordplay usin pictures like a punk...
    i'ma show you how he does & break it down for daliff so he can keep up...


    exhibit A: lol track record?-- implying i'm barely staying afloat...
    ask Dusk, my only L was due to me slittin my own throat...
    idk about this

    of all "E-MC's" on here I'M supposed to "chill & relaX"...
    psh, a filler line/ i type lines that rhyme/ you aint worth a rap...
    ok ok

    cheap diss/ i'ma start a list of all who guna drop the photoshop line...
    nigga taunts me but knows he wants me to molest his face, homo, stop lyin...
    ehhh

    last rights, yeah right, i don't even say grace...
    you in dire need of some self esteem, you come to W.T.C. to post in the same place...
    ehh

    guna try and get at me while i ain't in your scope/sayin i think i'm dope...
    nope, the great "white" is gettin mangeled by a tope...
    ok

    you got a lil better rhyme scheme but on content i done made you ghost...
    so if you take this, it's only off your cockyness & decorated posts...
    umm

    cause i'm at every corner killin your attacks, dead/ i admitted to being wack, sped...
    internet crack head, beggin for a battle like this is a "smack-thread
    alright

    daliff

    look at dude's track record, Poem's poetry sucks...
    my punches got him 'seeing red' because he's throwing up blood...
    ok, didn't really rhyme well

    grabbin' his abdomen, peelin' it back...
    rip his face off, sew it over mine so i know how it feels to be wack...
    ok

    you're losing fluids Poem! chill and relax!!!
    retire the sigs and Photoshop some skill in your raps...
    ehh

    but that would probably be a failure too...
    third grade rhymes, go inhale some glue, i got some braille for dude...
    um ok flow was alright

    lump his face up, erase his makeup with eight slugs...
    duct tape this fuck face, light bars, get your weight up...
    like this one

    Myoplex is your best bet...
    but judging by your stress test, Death says you better get some bed rest...
    ok

    reading Poem his last rights, pray to your god...
    Tempurpedic Poet, i fall asleep because he' amazingly soft...
    not bad

    livin' in a mix of The Matrix and Oz...
    you're thinkin' you're dope, you need to be choked and raped in the yard...
    ehhhh

    __________________________________________

    wasting your bars, this faggot is so retarded...
    my flows are heartless, he's special needs and screaming yogurt garbage...
    haa

    mono-sylabbic babblings, you're wack despite lies...
    DJ Tanner? nah faggot, i'm Bob Saget, a foul mouthed white guy...
    good response

    The Hand of God devours demons, he sees this and i bet he retreats...
    you couldn't hand me an L if you were hosting Sesame Street...
    shot for shot here, not bad (although the sasame thing is how did u say.. played??)

    feeding every step of the way, i'll accept the debate...
    but why is it a few weeks later, and still this 'rapper's message is gay???
    ok

    talking about molesting my face...
    terminally ill? you've got indegestion, i'm over here digesting the plague...
    ok

    dissecting your phrases, my threats are contagious...
    just to see my shows i make people go and sign medical waivers...
    alright

    i should be on every veteran's play list, greatest weapon in ages...
    he's upset with the changes in my sig, fuck the bets that he's takin'...
    ehhhh

    you're testing my patients, you're sick? forget it, the doc's gone...
    y'all ready for Wu-Corps worst verse ever? get your popcorn...
    ehhhhh

    overall - daliff had more punches/multis/personals/feeding

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