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    Default (VOTES NEEDED) Visions Unseen VS. Eradicate

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    1 verse, no feeding.

    explained votes..

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    This guy knows E's rad but wantin' my dick to get ate?
    NO HOmo fag, get off my plate and find some new taste
    My Visions are too futuristic they remain Unseen
    You can find this guy joining the Navy in pink cut-off jeans
    Grabbing for a bib and making a request to come clean
    I'm stormtrooping like a Marine, first killer on the scene
    Hold more sting than Costco bottles of Listerine
    This dude's style is more bitch than Cosmo magazine
    Reminiscing bout' Frisco n Crisco when someone mentions tag-team
    Ripped seams and curdled screams, a nightmare for most is his wet dream
    Just the type of fag I hate, punch heavyweight to decimate Eradicate
    The time ain't tickin its already too late, sendin invitations to seal your own fate
    Psychopathic mindstate dominates the landscape
    Get your guts scraped by killer apes and hold you together with duct tape
    Fuck that fake talk that you really ain't walking
    You can preach the violence, I got my piano wire, stalkin
    Hawkin on a victim in a HUD house lookin Urkel, won't stop till the blood gurgles
    Your whole life swirls right before your eyes, prayin this ain't the day you die
    But the words are eternal and you can't outlast it
    I'll be there to throw the dirt on your casket

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    quit your day job you aint gonna blow, nope
    because if THIS is what yall call good Vision, then Lens Crafters is gonna go broke
    It was destined to happen…if I were u I wouldn’t invest in this faggot
    He’ll hide behinds his looks, with a lock on his medicine cabinet (unseen???
    so you thought I was wack? and that I cant key sickness?
    bitch, ill stomp a mudhole in your ass and plant trees in it
    your crib is worthless william shatner couldn't get A price for tour guides
    plus I'll put such a hurtin' on Vision he'll be A sight for sore eyes
    i havent battle here in awhile but i'm workin' to retire V
    one punch to the chest'll send ur heart to ur spine like ya personal diary
    salute u goodbye like a gentleman, u get dispatched cuz im godly
    so i'll shake ya hand... but it won't be attached to ya body
    you think your matching my verse, but ur a coward, doubt it
    cuz u got wind of my skill & it caused a power outage ..
    the slope of this guy..that's been claiming he's ill or dope in disguise
    This site had it's sight on greatness until Vision opened his eyes!
    your 30, nerdy.. hang out in chatroom's and watch kid's dancing
    im your worst enemy, like it's dateline NBC and im Chris Hansen
    vision take's hand out's.. anything to stop the show
    so i'll just give u an El-Vis like The King of Rock 'N Roll.......

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    Visions

    i don't understand why people still use a mono-syllabic rhyme scheme.....

    a lot of your punches were weak

    jbunch of gay jokes really, no name play, saying you're a killer, etc...

    just doesn't seem like a battle verse IMO, more like something you'd spit on a song

    Eradicate

    i thought a lot of your punches were weak too

    the Dateline punch is overused (though it's usually used in the 'can't fuck with the kid' sense), i really don't like the 'Elvis' line either, just seemed kinda corny

    i didn't change my facial expression at all reading either verse..........Eradicate had more punches, more nameplay, and more multis.....

    VOTE: Eradicate

    now can i get a vote on my battle?

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    Well thank you Daniel.. i'll try to make it doper for you next time

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    i'm go wit E on this.
    i thought he had better punches and more multirhymes.
    he opened with a killer line and even though his hits digressed it was at least constant especially being that he strayed from the gay jokes & murdered his name.

    VU fluctuated more where he had a hit here & there his duds kept the tone flat.
    gay jokes seem to be e-cheap shots.




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    you kno VU makes the sound view, right? was that intentional? like that Velvelt Underground compilation? eloels.

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    ^lol you was the only cat i thought would get that... (not that it was completely witful)
    but unless you get what i meant about "fluctuated" it don't count lol



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    Eradicate easily won this..

    this site is a joke..what do yall base ya votes on?? what is a battle verse in most of yalls opinon?? Knowledge?? multi's, punches, and creativity wins battles..shit that make ya laugh.. shit that make ya say ooohhh..maybe I am just an old head thinking of old days..

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    old days? gtfo....battles WERE NOT bout punches and multis in the old days, how old are you? lmao. OOOOOHHH

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    . eradicate got this .



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    Im votin 4 eradicate nice punch usin visions name against him made and you made the flow like a marvel comic how the flow followed vision from work to death but the elvis punch was a sure miss vision son you bellyd up smarten up or quit your day job
    Right outside.

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    Eradicate
    We do it for the people.


    "In the abundance of water, the fool is thirsty"


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    Eradicate wins this imo.


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    Visionz

    THE REAL PCP

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