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    when i step up on the scene this cat best make way
    when i pull out the glock its fucking judgement day
    ill run up in your crib grab your herb and your ice
    you know that im a nasty cracker far from nice
    so step the fuck back before your ass get got
    im in camoflague fatigues with a barrel thats hot
    ill run up in your crib and smack your mom in the lip
    po nine try to catch me but i give them the slip
    you roll up in your whip im tring to pick the lock
    ill roll thru your hood yelling suck my cock
    when you see me on the streets kid give me respect
    or else the fucking ground be a new shade of red



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    Palehorse is getting broken in when i rope him in
    with a strong case of broken chin, why the long face?
    i go ape like Kong's race, u trynna play Dusk at a Pong pace
    and ya mouth got a schlong taste
    my darts tear apart like kindergarten art scissors
    have u buggin like u heard that Dusk was part Lizard (lmao)
    c'mon son, dope ass rhymes im on them
    u stompin thru my forum, while wearin ya moms tims
    i dim lights for rappers with conspiracy theories
    if ur hearin my clearly, ill kick ya fuckin rear thru ya ear piece
    u fear beasts of my magnitute, im dragon fused
    i ass crack patent crews with michael jacksons shoes

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    idk if this is over yet buuuut...
    Quote Originally Posted by Dusk View Post
    c'mon son, dope ass rhymes im on them
    u stompin thru my forum, while wearin ya moms tims
    lol
    u fear beasts of my magnitute, im dragon fused
    i ass crack patent crews with michael jacksons shoes
    nice

    if theres another round i suggest Pale step it up.
    otherwise Dusk is the bouncer for the monkey bars... you cant hang my nig



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    hahaha alright. its not over yet......



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    alright, you cats all know my steez
    the flows i be kicking putting bitches on their knees
    when i step up on the scene, front you cats some respect
    all these hoes know that kid pale come correct
    whether rocking tommy hill, nautica or perry ellis
    birds all flock and say fuck them other fellas
    you say you want to battle? well bring it trick please
    swatting MCs off my nuts like a doggie scratches fleas
    im coming straight from the slums, a mothering fucking default
    your mom be pulling tricks like a 5 dollar crack whore
    im dipping through your hood with my man and the heat
    when i pull this post you feeling nothing but defeat
    so back the fuck up yo im just about to peak
    and ask lancaster police ill leave you lying in a creek
    hahaha word up respect that hoe hhhaa



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    Quote Originally Posted by Dusk View Post
    have u buggin like u heard that Dusk was part Lizard (lmao)
    haha.
    Bank heist in Kathmandu, it was a slaughter
    The day Buddha was born it rained tea instead of water

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    haha yea that line is even funnier if you know the whole story. its kinda an inside joke between us



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    right...
    Bank heist in Kathmandu, it was a slaughter
    The day Buddha was born it rained tea instead of water

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    Behold a palehorse/
    hit yah wit the dark side of the jedi force/
    knock your starship off course/
    from dusk too red dawn/bitch be gone/
    you fuck'n wit the underworld def deal'n/
    hell spawnz/hza,skampope,palehorse vs. Drunkenmonk,mangani,dusk

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    this dude needs some medication



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    have u buggin like u heard that Dusk was part Lizard (lmao)

    u fear beasts of my magnitute, im dragon fused
    really liked those lines (lol at part lizard)

    i think dusk killed it tho


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    *I'm feelin Dusk more than Palehorse on this one*...Good shit though.

    I was under the impression that the thread title is Dusk vs. Palehorse

    I don't see where it says...

    Dusk vs. Palehorse vs.
    HZA HOT GARBAGE.

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    alright i hope dusk comes back cuz im bored but can i get some constructive criticism



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    Quote Originally Posted by PALEHORSE View Post
    alright i hope dusk comes back cuz im bored but can i get some constructive criticism
    Your battle lines were very basic...Nothing wrong with it as long as you can keep up the rhyme in bars, but try using metaphors & other wordplay.
    Use more clever ways of attack.


    Here are a couple lines from Dusk that I liked:

    "i go ape like Kong's race, u trynna play Dusk at a Pong pace"

    "my darts tear apart like kindergarten art scissors"
    Last edited by pRoTeChTyAnEcK; 10-13-2009 at 06:29 PM.

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    also I'd try to use more multi-syllable rhymes instead of day/way or ice/nice
    like how dusk did theories/ ear piece and magnitute/dragon fused

    peace


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