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    . waiting for dusk to drop his second verse but if it's only a 1 rd battle dusk got this .



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    holy shit, didnt realize this was 2 rounds...verse comin shortly.

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    your facing greatness horse, so ur tastin humiliation
    ima hang u upside down like a Mason initiation
    so u wastin time tryin to chase behind dusk, youll find dust
    tryin to rhyme with us, ill make ya motherfuckin hymen bust
    shinin under pressure like a diamond does, rockin grills
    like charcoal, my bars mold into plastic explosives
    my acid's corrosive, so stand back and scan the lines
    like bar codes, ya legs are shakin like its hammer time
    cant define how i redefine the term massacre
    my vernakular's redesigned, i could burn africa
    with firm character i knock this bonehead off his high horse
    apply force, leave him sWollen with an eye sore
    from puerto rico to shangai: a lizard lecture
    right now, Horse is suckin more Puerto Rican dick than HZA HECTOR

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    hahah dusk is nice, never really read your work before
    i wouldn't wanna battle you tho


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    i got one more round in me..................stay tuned



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    thanks...btw...to clarify, that lizard line was refering to a story horse may or may not tell yall...eloels. the votes can start now i guess.

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    matter fact, go ahead and vote, i could go another but its not like i got alot of votes and need a tie breaker or something...well played dusk



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    fuck it. fuck votes.i dont give a fuck if i win or lose.im having fun its about the art so check it

    2009 let me rewind and pull it back
    like im cocking this gat,
    like dusk pullin on foreskin and nutsacks
    with star trek type facts, ill travel back ,
    and kill this cat again like i did my first track
    duke u whack ha ha ha ha ha

    ill build and destroy, real type mccoy
    you trying to mcgeyver up a story
    on how u taking on this horseman army
    the clavary is what you should call me
    i be in fatigues like the army, hiding in trees
    with metal and magic youd think its alchemy
    or wizardry, rob u, leave u in your fleece, then flee
    all youll hear is a stampede
    while you sound like a broken record player
    u aint no lizard u a regular taxpayer
    but it dont matter cuz u fucking with a dragon slayer
    Last edited by PALEHORSE; 10-14-2009 at 11:55 AM.



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    like dusk pullin my foreskin and nutsack?!?!?!?!?!? no homo? no? lol

    no disrespect but Dusk ate you homie, but Dusk, you know I'm the best ever to do this!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dusk View Post
    cant define how i redefine the term massacre
    my vernakular's redesigned, i could burn africa
    with firm character i knock this bonehead off his high horse
    apply force, leave him sWollen with an eye sore
    from puerto rico to shangai: a lizard lecture
    right now, Horse is suckin more Puerto Rican dick than HZA HECTOR
    daaaaaaaaamn with some lol's thrown in.
    even threw in a lil subliminal, ive never read much of ur shit but wowzers.

    sometimes the wack dude makes the other cat look good but this is just nice.

    @Pale
    i like the improvement. ur catching on with the rhyming-within i see.
    try some wordplay and using multi-syllable words that are really similar next to each other a lil too (i.e. Dusk= define, redefine, redesign)
    unfortunately the charade needn't proceed any longer.
    3verses v. Dusk's 2 still tops yours. your improvement came a lil too late my friend.
    his worplay was stronger, even without that he was able to implement more hits altogether.

    my vote 4 dusk

    keep rhymin tho Pale, i wanna see the improvements.



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    And Hector, quit promoting me ya groupie homo!

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    Quote Originally Posted by iniquity View Post
    . waiting for dusk to drop his second verse but if it's only a 1 rd battle dusk got this .
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