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Thread: (VOTES NEEDED) Dusk v. Poem

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    eloels..thx bro..can u elaborate a little tho?

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    i vote Poetic


    he killed the second verse. and also his first but it was hard to read and comrehend (because of all the "="s and ";" LOL)


    but still, his wordplay and imagery was ill


    btw, idk shit about hte comic theme LOL
    We do it for the people.


    "In the abundance of water, the fool is thirsty"


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    my vote goes to poetic

    dusk had an overall better flow but poetic dropped some heavy lines that took it for me.

    i didnt catch the comic lines, but points for being creative lol

    good battle yall

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    another 4 dusk

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    ^ ill name but:
    Originally Posted by Dusk
    when people vote, simply saying the name is not enough for deciding a winner, its not fair for the Battlers...so u CAN say their name, and also explain a little, a lil less than a paragraph, explaining is good detail why u chose who u chose..

    also im changing the vote guidelines..something simpler..also when u use it, still explain a bit why u chose who u chose,

    Flow
    Creativity
    Punches
    Vocab

    these will be the only four necessary from now on. still takes some work. So i ask you battlers, Please cooperate, and this Section will be one to talk about again....



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    ^lol where did your pull that from?

    ive never read that before
    We do it for the people.


    "In the abundance of water, the fool is thirsty"


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    it's the very first thread in this sub forum.
    right above the "Call Out GLOVE SLAP thread"
    lol i don't think anyone ever notices it.

    you and bronze should be cool but bambinoTTT and buildah got some 'splainin' to do'



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    haha
    We do it for the people.


    "In the abundance of water, the fool is thirsty"


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    lmao at the ricardo shit...ya i agre...elaborate please people.

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    . vote: poetic. he was the more consistent of the two and his lines were sharper .





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    Quote Originally Posted by Dusk View Post
    wow...mad random.

    Flow - dusk
    Creativity - poetic
    Punches - poetic
    Vocab - poetic



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    3-0 me.

    *Liz Lemon:
    Shut it down!



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