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Thread: (VOTES NEEDED) Dusk v. Poem

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    i vote poetic.. all around better... delivery of words ,creativity of words.dusk threw me off with the "new mex ,boarder line pheonix" line. a single line ruined it....

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    dont get me wrong my man, you got flow. it just sounded like you forced that ryme....keep doin your thing son, im feelin the majority of your isht

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