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    Default thatKid vs iniquity

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    He accepted from the glove slap thread. I'll key something soon
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    iniq's a whack punk, couldn't lift weight in space
    kids straight staying on ass in this like a wheelchair race
    so how think you come correct, awakening to his death
    couldn't collect puzzle pieces, so how you expect to connect
    I'm kicking raps up sky high, you a drama queen
    you went from battling queers to fulfilling cinderellas dream
    congrats faggit, I'm staying with the belt around my waist
    only time you come out with the V. when you copy and paste
    I've come for ya head even though its midget size
    only time you fists connecting with french fries
    giving you fillers but still enough to knock kid out
    couldn't drop as a cloud, can't defeat me as I shout
    and I've done enough to beat you when the time comes
    cause bitch, only time you getting money chilling with bums
    I tried giving you props, but you done and wasted my time
    leave me bloody? motherfucker couldn't knockout a mime

    I think its 16 lines. Just got really bored. Your turn.
    The, U. NY Knicks. NY Jets. NY Mets. > Ur teams = The Truth

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    i'ma kill this niggas dreams, like the bullet that went in dr king

    i didn't know fags got belts for getting pounded in the anal ring

    then cork his head till his last memory spill, soaked in seroquel

    put him back in pleasantville with a glass of nyquil and his anxiety pills

    right by the bloody mill on the hill where many holy wars were fulfilled

    nada but waste hanging from his waist displaced in purgatory

    between the inventory, and doctor vulture's laboratory

    how you try to father my style and end up on maury?

    claiming you tried to stay low key but got fame from rock like barry gordy?

    kid i'm over your head, land of the dead, put chest to defrost

    mouth and italian bread, pillow over head, neck getting flossed

    bed and tomato sauce, breaking news: thatKID was beaten and eaten

    by a pack of heathens possessed by demons, armed with a pack of wheat thins

    ya niggas sleepin', i put tusk to dusk and bloody ya umbrellas fellas

    to let ya see this fruity rican's nothing more than an aurora borialis

    but back to thatKID, and his lame lines about time and mimes

    fuck i'll salivate, mortify and break you down with enzymes

    till you're small enough to crush between the structure of time


















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    easily iniquity...
    i dont really have an explanation but it didnt seemed like kid wasnt all in.
    his first bar was lame and then onto the gay jokes and it just seemed like he coulda done better.

    iniquitys maury line was pretty funny.

    anyway 1 for INIQUITY



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    iniquity hands down.... (even though he passed the bar requirement)
    thekid bars were way to simple.
    I think if he took his time on this battle, his verse would have been better
    BTW that Maury line was fucking great.

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    . thx guys, 2-0 .










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    iniquity

    for reasons already stated..and...more creative better wordplay
    We do it for the people.


    "In the abundance of water, the fool is thirsty"


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    . 3-0 = k.o?







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    Quote Originally Posted by iniquity View Post

    . 3-0 = k.o?

    ?







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    dont forget to vote in other battle threads as well...
    We do it for the people.


    "In the abundance of water, the fool is thirsty"


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    Iniquity hands down, rhyme structure was killer. Plus that Maury line!

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