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    Sweet Sinew (sin yoo)

    I need Nefertitis Black Minerva Shebas,
    No Delilah Samson seducing Cleopatra Caesars/
    Understand some flowers just grow wild
    I post up perched like Horus overlooking the Nile/
    With just a modest wish reveal my providence
    Pure as lady lunar Artemis, for me to place upon a lovers sovereign kiss/
    Someone to spin on this axis with
    And a body, to match her minds attractiveness/
    We’ll spar minds, birth wisdom like Bathsheba
    And avoid slowly drifting apart like pangea/
    Sing songs of Solomon, toast the sun
    Mock fate and endure whatever dreams may come/
    Someone, to make me curse… life’s short ride
    Til death do us, slide, reincarnate back in the sky/
    Beautiful like the rise of Aurora
    When the task at hand ensues doubt, got my back like Zipporah/
    So far life’s been 40 days and 40 nights
    Does life imitate art, or does it imitate life/
    Just to be safe, pen our names with feathers from a phoenix
    Analyze the fall of man, crumble, rise a new zenith/
    With the stars underneath us, let nothing come between us
    Show the whole world what happens when the sun shines on Venus/
    So we paint mental pictures of happiness and pleasantry’s
    Baptize the passion of our souls in the 7 seas/
    Sweet sinew..knows a woman’s role
    Just to be herself, and keep her Earth MOTIONS controlled/
    Likes.. midnight strolls, 60’s, 70’s soul
    Can escape into a book, cooks, even writes a little/
    Lives life vibrant and so full of zeal
    With each waking morning give her Destiny’s Seal/
    She loves me for what I am, and what I ain’t
    And what I can be, she’s my everything, my strength/
    SEE YOU SOON SINEW

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    Love Letter Murder

    got my mind on money, legal tender, dime pieces
    god had to be a man to design such features
    i jest, but lets dive, deep into the topic
    of a love like Stevie Wonders placed on a rocket
    took me riding on it,.. yeah, and then she stopped
    bout a half a mile from heaven, and then she dropped
    me back, onto this cold world, go figure
    used to star gaze skinny dipping in the big dipper
    life was beautiful, gave her my judgements, all i knew
    gave her my best, the past used to hit and was thru
    sold em dreams, ..grabbing my ears calling me handsome
    diss em..now they saying that they faked orgasms
    i laugh, but seems karma has a sense of humor
    feeling like Othello...going crazy, all the rumors
    sitting, reminiscing like what could've caused this
    maybe, she felt neglected, late nights at the office
    or, cause we strugglin, low income
    before we linked had a child, wants the best for her son
    i'm trying, guess loves not enough to make it
    if a step was in the right direction, i would take it
    but, you played me for a first of april
    ungrateful, left me,..love letter sitting on the table
    damn, dead my thought process, throw my words in a casket
    bottoms up, murder braincells, bury the hatchets
    drunk wishing, this some untasteful joke
    love letter murder died with each pen stroke.
    this love letter murder, they found no gun
    a broken spirit of a man, more a shell of what was one

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    good stuff.

    i love women too.
    ________
    WATER BONGS
    Last edited by Koolish; 03-24-2011 at 11:47 AM.

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    Default Prometheus Torch

    Prometheus Torch


    Give my thoughts some air time, speak ya mind
    We walk the straight path off the bent line of linear time
    Till death do us, ..face the pearly gates,
    Paying the price of life, hoping its worth the wait
    Platinum pussy’s hawk pavements….
    Gold diggers pick axe pockets for stock on the Armani exchange, bitch
    No P.I. not pass but, pussy interference ,
    Sex séance, give sperm an outta body experience
    Love me……..in the still of the night
    Refuse to get dicked over, got the will of a dike
    Aight, yeah, I feel ya, you spit a little moisture
    The flows Noahs ya know, flood the whole world over
    Bite,..not the bark, rewind the game
    Backyard building a ark for when its my time to reign
    Pair up, get it, symbolically, speaking of course
    Divide my life’s trinity, till I’m one with the force
    Spit heat, call it summer jam
    Gorgeously hand-some niggaz hierarchy rhymes, show n prove I got the upper hand/
    King me



    Raps a billion dollar industry, people slang speech,
    Despite what you heard brother, talk aint cheap
    So I’m spit fire, exit in a blaze of glory
    Crayola tongued apostle, colorize the same the story
    Push limits, shove boundaries
    Collide with constraints, break thru all obstacles that surround me
    Hungry pockets tryin to see a mil (meal), cash flow
    Though,.. like them Spanish cats, know I ga-to (got dough)
    Smell me, I cant you, cause you aint shit
    And probably barely move crowds like continent drifts
    Sick, add it up, sum of all fears bastards
    Audio slaves….will never own they masters
    World go round, legends, few and far gone
    Tactics tenchu, movements millennium falcon…….
    What is murder, my words in action
    Verbally axe em, fire breathing, enter the dragon/ whoa
    Scorch the earth……,
    Fuck the world and mother nature and big bang bus the planets rebirth
    inspiring, wonder why republicans rising
    Oh.., guess the devils planning early retirement



    Warrior drums, rhyme spitter, whoreing my tongue
    Who wanna rap, would be stars, show em the sun
    The weak try to impress, strong do it for self
    Confuse the minds 7 gates, then I move in with stealth
    Gebel Tarik, conquering the Rock of Gibralter
    For my next trick, heal the sick and walk on water
    Blasphemy, self proclaimed metaphor majesty
    For years chased dreams, dragged my feet in reality
    Chuuurch, and tabernacle…
    Forbidden fruits back on the scene, gotta check they adams apples
    Governments still, the original O.G.
    Uncle Sam first pimp, how they do us, Tuskegee
    Gave Indians blankets Africa, vaccinations player
    Birth of Human Resources, slave labor/
    and you call yourself a gangsta
    hung jury or verdict written on paper made from trees they used to hang ya
    throw the book at ya, kind of symbolic
    justice, the bitch has been blindfolded, tooken hostage,/
    but, time goes on with rotation of the earth
    16 prayers , in memory of 16 virgin births

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    Street Dreamers





    this aint a gangsta flick wiseguy, you aint untouchable bra
    play scarface, i come back like Sosa
    for every Carlito...,theres a Pachenga
    goodfella, murderous smiles its rarely a stranger
    my demeanor, embody the image of street dreamers
    glaciers of ice, sun kissed, glimmer my features
    analyzin, always , the ways of wise men
    deal with high sciences god, revealin i am
    wooly haired, fiery eyes, you cant knock it
    they say the prophet, my savior was an ex convict
    chillin like a pharoah, gold cup and scepter
    by my side wisdom reflector, bless me with her sweet nectar
    we birth stars and complete the package
    create our universe to escape this worlds madness
    can it all be so simple "yes", life is what you make it
    hold the smoke in ya chest, sedate the matrix
    been fly since i busted thru my fathers latex
    made my journey, lounged for 9 months and then was made flesh
    devil may cry, my birth rained tears from allah
    when i die, a thousand angels descending the sky
    we silverback gorillas, we not but test and we react like killers
    a mochary of jesus look into his eyes and feel us
    my eyes.., hide the rage of an angel,
    we pray on bended knees cause sweet chariots swing low
    stand to the side, know what happens when planets collide
    heavyweighter, walk on water , sink , atlantis will rise
    my minds strength, when i speak it , flexin my power
    tongue spits bars and pleases women nocturnal hours
    word, we speak truths at 90 degree angles
    shooting for stars, snipe, and catching fallen angels
    since day one, sang songs to raise sun
    the last shall be first,..even jacob was the favorite one

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    Default Cool Breeze

    Cool Breeze





    64 squares of life, who be the king
    Angelou once asked why's the caged bird sing/
    finesse maneuvers, cool, never on that whats it to ya
    player principles, sip kaluha, nigga mind seducer/
    self appraisal, Devin the Dude,.. shit to blaze too
    thru the speaker, no labels still all praise due/
    peace to see ya, Sojourn the Truth, street preacher
    most spit sick lines from time to time, keep a fever/
    luck smiling on me like i'm fingerbangin lady forturne
    clip angel wings throw em off cloud 9's we warring..../
    with the heavens,..
    paradise lost, fuck it start the armageddon, hot steppin/
    this cant be life, seek manipulation of wise minds
    wish i could....climb inside time/ and learn its secrets
    like.. pyramids in egypt, city atlantis
    1, 9, 7, million squares miles of planet/
    1/4 for me to stride..
    3/4 and the sun keep this world alive/
    keep it moving , never lackluster...
    this my reign dance till kingdom come and resurrect my own luxor/ one....
    life we living till the last exhale,
    but i must ask, good people why we catching hell/
    its the aura feel it talk with spirits, seance
    niggaz shoot niggaz still wanting King Jr's day off



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    Default Crucified Rhymes

    Crucified Rhymes



    blood on the moon, red dawn, i stand alone calm, weed charmed
    shackled by sin singing a slave song
    words are lightnig, voice brings the rumble of thunder
    i'm the nightmare without the slumber
    life and times, miracle raps, crucified rhymes
    magnetize minds with fly lines , the city is mine
    anthems of life, is salvation the ransom of christ
    muzzle my dreams, knowin that reality bites
    in present time..many hold mics, i'm blessing mine
    in my youth parents instilled the lesson of time
    means they had to understand, child is father to man
    shape and mold a little soldier, let him conquer the land
    palm of my hand, holds a rope for lassoing hope
    reciting bible quotes inside my mind it rivals the choke
    cause high hopes and low income make some grab gun
    93 million miles yet we one with the sun
    lifes a cycle some find peace in clutchin the bible
    in god we trust, when gunz bust , theres only survival
    freedom or justice,
    nice thoughts, see how they cuff us
    justice blind,
    freedom yet to hear it ring one time
    quick to kill brothers,..too lite, seeing real numbers
    thoughts are pyramids, conceal wonders
    we clockin hours, time waits for no one kid
    as we try to avoid sirens like oddysseus did

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    Default Dirty Wings, Crooked Halos

    Dirty Wings, Crooked Halos





    as the world turns so do revolvers
    clergy men hand pamphlets trying to tell me who god is/ spooks
    walk with shadows, hold words like fiery arrows
    ignite minds, take flight where the wide comes narrow
    recognize enemies,..study designs
    or the hands of friends will not born but dead you with 9's
    its so hard....foul things orbit circumference...
    3 crows, loyalties lost, judas amongst us
    let me paint it, weed smoke blow out nostrils
    god love us, palms touch, pretty mugged apostles
    peace to fam, link, exchange affectionate hands
    its all love amongst us, honey bluntz and ceiling fans
    you'll never know how much, bless my vow with a dutch
    love my unborns, so having cash rule is a must
    chillin with brothers, bottles.....goose on the cover
    its like the black last supper, in god we trust, in larger numbers
    dreams of grandeur, features are classic
    golden child....,leave a gorgeous corpse in a casket
    dirty wings, crooked halos my eyes hang low
    discover,.. christ my brother, co heirs to throne
    its cinematic, spit scripts, they try disband us
    clutch cross hang islamic banners/ i wont allow it
    define i.., i got the midas touch son
    when i nut off...., probably spit out gold cum
    compose like mozart, classic darts
    rare breed, 2 of me placed on noahs ark
    i paint mental pictures for free, now who the nicest
    no penny for my thoughts , my frame of mind is priceless

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    Default Re: Immaculate **Official Thread**

    Hey you have some tight verses here. Though some are a bit too compactive. But nice verses , one can almost imagine the beats as the verses proceeds.

    Peace
    PS: Keep to the good work.

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    Default Re: Immaculate **Official Thread**

    appreciate the words homie, i like ya style too, i be checking for you on here,
    alright man peace

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    Default Crown of Thorns

    Complex simplicity, humble, brash
    flakes, up in fingertips from crumblin hash
    build with math, though, gotta quote vinnie paz
    brain will still function when mans computer crash
    prestigious.. marinate god, Ease us Jesus
    soul of Marvin Gaye thumpin through the speakers
    so whats going on, decades passed, still relevant
    God had a message, came, broke down percentages
    sit with concrete thoughts, spit cement
    who's worthy to cum inside when i pitch my tent
    tryin to master life, shadow traits depicted by christ
    even mock em, rock a version of him dazzled in ice
    diction is poem, wherever kings sit is a throne
    only fuckin with them chickens till i get to the bone
    we tryin to keep our money in shape maintain figures
    bullets fly, thats alright , just , niggas being niggas
    conspiracy's to kill black boys, they cant touch us
    destroy, build, add on, just brothers being brothers








    i pull ranks and skirts, pull puffs off cheeba
    microwaved, dipped in the honey, aroma is sweetah
    Day in the life, i'm cooler man then hangin with christ
    snatch mics...like 60's whites snatched black rights
    intro to the next chamber
    takeover, next kid to spit ether, mos def the new danger
    nothin ghetto here, ..strictly king shit
    exercise flows on anybody i see fit
    sit back, the best, attitude is must be
    like failed dreams, niggaz tried but never touched me
    razzy, deformed pretty boys, wardrobes mack
    born builders, naturally the dough gon stack
    break bread with the heathens, roll with the wise
    baby face, shine kingly grace to flatter the eyes
    imagine that,.. this only 10 percent
    pyramids just a glimpse of what the mind invent
    Gods a scientist, while we dwell creation
    when the universe is the greatest math equation





    Sam Cooke said a change gon come
    must of built with Malachi before he wrote that one/lets shine
    feel the passion of a million eyes
    heard Detroit Red was dead before Malcolm died/what a blessing
    learn to react when people put they hands in pockets
    embrace they minds then leave em alone, they dead prophets
    flows beautiful, gorgeous wordplay , whats happening
    verbally handsome....the vanity of assassins
    i'll smooth out a wrinkle in time, age reverse
    repeat history and spit another hot verse
    breathe easy analyze how society sees me
    search for knowledge, without it they can silence you easy
    sip the blood of grapes, breeze psalms, bibles Qurans
    found what Al Green had put in a song/Love and Happiness
    here..take these crown of thorns
    the first step, for kings with the mind of pawns

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    Default Land of Shadowing Wings

    Land of Shadowing Wings (This is Life)



    Worlds still turning, poetry in motion
    Moons still lounging, waving to the ocean


    9 prisoners, 9 planets rebel,
    in a system named solar, trapped in suns jail


    3 wise men still stand with Orion
    Most peaceful man on Earth was still crowned a lion


    Bees still intrigued by the feathers of birds
    Broken hearts still finding love is just a word


    Lucifer still remains, the prettiest angel
    Mirrors still reflect your greatest enemy when they frame you


    Wind still carries secrets, and whispers sweet nothings
    The clouds still weep, and tomorrow keeps coming


    Rainbows still ribbon the sky, marvelous wonder
    Lightning’s to fast to fear, so we scared of the thunder


    Sky’s still blue from reflecting off the sea
    And the suns still beautiful to outreaching trees


    Equator still embraces earth like warm hugs
    World still quakes as Atlas’s shoulder shrug


    Gods fingers still spinning, spiraling the galaxy
    Show me selfish, show you when love becomes tragedy


    Spirit of a dreams still held in dieing breaths
    Judas still kiss cheeks, and die a 1000 deaths


    We still sing hymnals and listen to psalms
    And we still read suras and pray with clasped palms


    Universe still bathes in meteor showers
    Constellations tell stories during bedtime hours


    Justice still standing, tipped scale and blindd
    Hate still takes learning, divide man from kind, mankind, (this is life)

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    Default Re: Land of Shadowing Wings

    that right there was dope

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    Default Crops of Intuition

    Puff the peace pipe, smoke signals
    Up in church grandmas shaking they heads singing hymnals
    Sphinx holds no riddles,…deception
    Was ill, got my back turned on me by own reflection
    Crazy dreams, hieroglyphic scriptures
    Written on weakened wood, then spit em like a motion picture…..
    Break bread with heathens, roll with the wise
    Been observing, I’m quite certain doves do cry
    Faith borderlines hope, take a look into souls
    Eyes tell silent stories like Indian totem poles
    Ahead of my time, never speak, only spoke
    Zoning, analyzing thoughts surrounded by smoke
    Nas said it , if sleep is the cousin to death
    Blessed, daily rise, phoenix , lazarus effect
    Italian theme, big family events
    Round table sessions, brothers building, throw in my cents
    Heavens prelude’s the sequel to death
    I just play the role casted and framed in the flesh,/ divine






    Traveling shoes, lifes a journey, many avenues
    Mapquest my mental, see the hells I knew
    And the heavens yo, yin and yang
    Switch up, reading I Ching the book of change
    Light the candles, pphh, praise my physical annually
    Test, bring em shakespeares finest works, tragedy
    Exhale, give the trees some love, we breathing
    Seasoned, people just like stars in the evening
    Some shining, some falling, some burnout
    I wish upon them, will to strive, and turn it to clout
    My name hold status, touch midas,..golden rule
    Wise play the role of fools without control of they moods
    Cocky, ziplock hairdo, checking how the air move
    Careless whispers, give em clues, where the heirloom
    Jewels right here, tradition
    My words food for thought, man, yo I’m chef in the kitchen
    John Hawkins handshakes, niggaz pretenders
    Keep it civilized , theorize, decode agendas






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    Default Re: Crops of Intuition

    Quote Originally Posted by Immaculate
    Puff the peace pipe, smoke signals
    Up in church grandmas shaking they heads singing hymnals
    Sphinx holds no riddles,…deception
    Was ill, got my back turned on me by own reflection
    Crazy dreams, hieroglyphic scriptures
    Written on weakened wood, then spit em like a motion picture…..
    Break bread with heathens, roll with the wise
    Been observing, I’m quite certain doves do cry
    Faith borderlines hope, take a look into souls
    Eyes tell silent stories like Indian totem poles
    Ahead of my time, never speak, only spoke
    Zoning, analyzing thoughts surrounded by smoke
    Nas said it , if sleep is the cousin to death
    Blessed, daily rise, phoenix , lazarus effect
    Italian theme, big family events
    Round table sessions, brothers building, throw in my cents
    Heavens prelude’s the sequel to death
    I just play the role casted and framed in the flesh,/ divine






    Traveling shoes, lifes a journey, many avenues
    Mapquest my mental, see the hells I knew
    And the heavens yo, yin and yang
    Switch up, reading I Ching the book of change
    Light the candles, pphh, praise my physical annually
    Test, bring em shakespeares finest works, tragedy
    Exhale, give the trees some love, we breathing
    Seasoned, people just like stars in the evening
    Some shining, some falling, some burnout
    I wish upon them, will to strive, and turn it to clout
    My name hold status, touch midas,..golden rule
    Wise play the role of fools without control of they moods
    Cocky, ziplock hairdo, checking how the air move
    Careless whispers, give em clues, where the heirloom
    Jewels right here, tradition
    My words food for thought, man, yo I’m chef in the kitchen
    John Hawkins handshakes, niggaz pretenders
    Keep it civilized , theorize, decode agendas





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