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    Default The Kings Chapter

    i did a thread like this before, and so im makin another one......and ben said we should do now anyways, but i dun give a fuck bout feed, im jus droppin shit cos i feel like it, most yall hate ma irregular style anyways, i dun even care lol! blah

    "The Unforgiven"

    after death i returned to the house of the lord
    saw my sins displayed on a big black bored
    i peered toward the sky, eyes held a fear
    i walked to the entrance and the door disapeared
    exiled king, taken off the throne into a prison
    locked with the outlaws, the villians, the unforgiven
    shiped to the shores of hell like slaves on a ship
    but i came equiped, i let free a clip
    shells ripped thru the deamons red flesh and heads
    the devil came to see wah the fuck god had sent
    and there stood the one, amongst the hell fire
    the same vision i had standing on the church spire
    YUNG CAO CAO, the angels chant the name
    king callabah was spelled on the ground, letters of flame
    he drew his dark sword and summoned a rage
    evil souls towered above me like a tidal wave
    i stood strong on ma feet, took my sword of light
    struck the evils to the ground a flash of day blinked the night
    satan screamed in pain, i came forth to bring the change
    drunk a keg of heavens wine and pissed on hells flames

    more verses will be comin of course.......this is ma amroury, ma practise chamber, ma training pit

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    im so fuckin ballin' i walk around with L1NK's muma on ma dick muh'fucka

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    Quote Originally Posted by King Callabah
    i did a thread like this before, and so im makin another one......and ben said we should do now anyways, but i dun give a fuck bout feed, im jus droppin shit cos i feel like it, most yall hate ma irregular style anyways, i dun even care lol! blah

    "The Unforgiven"

    after death i returned to the house of the lord
    saw my sins displayed on a big black bored
    i peered toward the sky, eyes held a fear
    i walked to the entrance and the door disapeared
    exiled king, taken off the throne into a prison
    locked with the outlaws, the villians, the unforgiven
    shiped to the shores of hell like slaves on a ship
    but i came equiped, i let free a clip
    shells ripped thru the deamons red flesh and heads
    the devil came to see wah the fuck god had sent
    and there stood the one, amongst the hell fire
    the same vision i had standing on the church spire
    YUNG CAO CAO, the angels chant the name
    king callabah was spelled on the ground, letters of flame
    he drew his dark sword and summoned a rage
    evil souls towered above me like a tidal wave
    i stood strong on ma feet, took my sword of light
    struck the evils to the ground a flash of day blinked the night
    satan screamed in pain, i came forth to bring the change
    drunk a keg of heavens wine and pissed on hells flames

    more verses will be comin of course.......this is ma amroury, ma practise chamber, ma training pit
    Yo Callabah....this was tight bruh....i liked this....this is like suin i would write....nuff imagery....i pictured every word said....this aint irregular....quit frontin dog....

    drop the nex one....

    peace

    ORPHANS OF CUSH

    OUT SOON

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    yo thanx alot blak yo words is appriteated mang, much love

    nex one comin soon

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    Default Re: The Kings Chapter

    u make me laugh more of kinda poetry than rap nigga

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    Default Re: The Kings Chapter

    Yeah, I'd have to agree with Furyan, the imagery in this piece was good. I liked the mood too. Good read.


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    Default Re: The Kings Chapter

    peace to noel also

    "Freestyle"

    my speciality is a technicality
    my irregularity brings origionality
    its hard to vision a peaceful planet with clarity
    im crazy like the Sunz Of Man on mics of insanity
    raw grime, phantom wind chimes made of spines
    injected with a poisen, i pose a threat to mankind
    i pick up a golden pen and wright rhymes in my spare time
    from the capital city of crime, blind lead the blind
    look inside to find the faults and rewind
    play memories back, use the film within ya mind
    ignorent slime, seeps thru the doors in dark hallways
    captures the juvenille mind but not mine
    i stay above like clouds and light lifes like sun shine
    the day of judgment came and i crossed the line
    haters, choke on a chode cos i got no time fo ya
    this shits for the kids who suffer within they native borders

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    Default Re: The Kings Chapter

    nice audio audio audio 1

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    "Hollow Heads"

    heathens preach evil under the name of religion
    i took the knife to his head, and made the insission
    saw the image of deamons, all chanting in rhythem
    seems this human is a typical subject of the devil system
    terrorism, a coalition with capitalism
    killah priests drown evil spirts during baptism
    in the rivers of the holy lands, water flows pure
    the fountain of youth, mountain of holy cures
    the snakes clutch youth, tell lies to hide the truth
    assassination behind close doors to sever proof
    they seperated races acording to colour of our faces
    i grab a holy spear and drive it thru the hearts of racists
    you stuck in the matrix, i beat down goliath like David
    mixed race cross bread, stand on ships like the slaves did
    blast lyrics thru ya brain, thats why im king callabah
    another deamon slaughtered, bring on the next challenger

    i lack that part of me thats supposed to give a fuck
    im so fuckin ballin' i walk around with L1NK's muma on ma dick muh'fucka

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    Default Re: The Kings Chapter

    Your writing is very easy to read. As in it just flows nice when reading it, and doesn't get mixed up in complicated rhyme schemes and hidden messages and shit. You seem to just say what you wanna say, and use mostly simple rhymes to put it together. I like that. You do it well. Good stuff.


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    yo i was really feelin "hollow heads" especially-

    saw the image of deamons, all chanting in rhythem
    seems this human is a typical subject of the devil system
    terrorism, a coalition with capitalism
    killah priests drown evil spirts during baptism
    in the rivers of the holy lands, water flows pure
    the fountain of youth, mountain of holy cures


    "the unforgiven" was ok to but hollow heads is alot better





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    mad peace to spoken and 6what much love peeps, good lookin!

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    im so fuckin ballin' i walk around with L1NK's muma on ma dick muh'fucka

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    King C droppin heat, hollow heads is sick

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    elders forgot to mention they devilish ways
    tryna turn ma generation into multi-race slaves
    fuck bein behind a cage, ma rage sprays
    in the form of silver led to make sure these devils pay
    fuck with me and get buryed, i dont play around
    im so hardcore, skelletons party underground
    im the hostile kid with the "fuck you" attitude
    i dont give a flyin fuck, in the streets i'd jus batter you
    hate or love ma style i lack the skill to care
    the heat from ma vocals sets fire to ya hair
    fuckin look into ma eyes and see you nex to die
    then run home to ya mother screamin why oh why
    suck ma fuckin dick and lick ma nut sack
    im pissed the fuck off and you gonna pay for that
    i have so many styles where i can get critical
    then i got this fucked up style that damage physicals
    no feed for this, hate on me and drink ma piss
    i dont give a fuckin shit if you aint feelin this

    i lack that part of me thats supposed to give a fuck
    im so fuckin ballin' i walk around with L1NK's muma on ma dick muh'fucka

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    Default Re: The Kings Chapter

    You posted a while ago, but I just read it now. Love the first post, not my style this biblical apocalyptic theme, but I was still diggin it. You didn't waste words, pretty tight and concise. Ending is dope.

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    yeh! all the verses on this thread are dope , u got a nice flow , u gonna drop some audio? coz that would be sick!

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