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    NSFA

    beautifulrock back, observing the block What's new?
    Bitches and faggots alike, I'm talkin' to you
    You can sell your pussy or work at Pizza Hut
    Be dead ass broke, or be fatherfucking slut
    What I'm sayin' hun is open those fine ass legs
    and I'ma try to fertilize one of those eggs
    Leave you a baby, then take off all shady
    like a thief in the night, prowling for new ladies
    I'm not crazy, that name I gave you ain't real
    and who gives a dog humping fuck what you feel
    Just say peace hun, light up and beast one aiight
    When the feast comes, I'ma leave no crumbs in si-ight
    I'm monstrous metaphorically no nonsense
    How do you stop a motherfucker with literally no conscience
    I'm obnoxious, stomp your kids' toys with my galoshes
    Drop hints to your wife that I wanna slobb'er tits
    Motorboat shit, open her panties, deposit crabs
    Next day, you scratch your balls and I laugh
    Guess what, I'm also your long lost dad
    Fuckin' since I was 12, never wearin' a bag
    Sure I got my problems, So what's it to you?
    You haven't a clue, STOP MASTURBATING WHEN I'M TALKIN' TO YOU!!!!
    Put the dick down and pay attention, get off the porn
    cause I'ma bout to turn it around on you, go knowledge born

    These streets is literally crumbling, the infrastructure
    needs to be redone and they know it, time's up, destructor
    Is waiting at the starting gates, new cities to make
    Utopia State, Europa hoping and knowing the scope is great
    Four steeds, Four colors, no time left, to be open
    and frank, I know what you're thinking, I know what you're hoping
    I know it sucks, things were going so great, what's Up?
    Why the change all of a sudden, have we over runneth cup?
    It was your decision, Don't look around, I'm pointing at you
    Always looking all innocent, citizens, red white and blue
    We allowed an empire to appear before our eyes, blind
    to a military industrial complex without a mind
    Crazier than I, lost without a map, direction-less
    Overreacting greatly by the slightest stress
    Through the saloon door, shooting a man without a weapon
    Am I stepping out a line? I was talkin' Iraq if you're guessin'
    Shock and Awe, Ha, hawkish blah blah blah, Naw son
    Don't do it like that, you killed kids dun.
    and not just one,

    you literally murdered tons

    Innocent to the lies and betrayal, like they knew?
    they would be tied to the tracks when the train came through
    Afghanis hiding in rocks Blame the game on who?
    A dick started this war, but Obama ain't through
    Doubling troops to win an unwinnable war, you been there before
    You know in 84 when you made the Russians poor
    That'll get done by Karzai going the dialog route
    Taliban will still be there, they took enough loot
    Out of the poppy fields, DEA knows the deal
    They watched the CIA home made real from Laos playing a glockenspiel
    In Vietnam, when the war was only about profits, It still is
    These niggas got deep pockets, I'm just saying, Lil' Bis-
    Lil shakedown, Lil hun'ned here and there, killing rate unfair
    But who cares, they don't have credit cards there
    And speaking of credit, what about China?
    Do we default on our loan, like a little vagina?
    Do we change the currency, call it Amero? New dinero
    Have all the mexicans sayin' te quiero
    Buenos noches hace viento en la Kans-ass
    The place where your tornado insurance claims get passed
    Over, HA HA Fucked and denied, we lied
    and then we watched our profit margin go sky high
    We gave out hefty bonuses to all of these guys
    Bentleys, Royce, Mercedes, those the whips that thieves drive
    They'll get theirs though, they won't capitalize
    long, civil war poor lynch, bottom line marginalized

    Then Israel will hit Iran,
    Syria too
    and we'll be forced to fucking interlude
    Russia will join the fight
    China too
    and a thousand missiles will fly
    and it'll all be through

    Don't say I didn't warn you.
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    you literally murdered tons

    Innocent to the lies and betrayal, like they knew?
    they would be tied to the tracks when the train came through
    Afghanis hiding in rocks Blame the game on who?
    A dick started this war, but Obama ain't through
    Doubling troops to win an unwinnable war, you been there before
    You know in 84 when you made the Russians poor
    That'll get done by Karzai going the dialog route
    Taliban will still be there, they took enough loot
    Out of the poppy fields, DEA knows the deal
    They watched the CIA home made real from Laos playing a glockenspiel
    In Vietnam, when the war was only about profits, It still is
    These niggas got deep pockets, I'm just saying, Lil' Bis-
    Lil shakedown, Lil hun'ned here and there, killing rate unfair
    But who cares, they don't have credit cards there
    And speaking of credit, what about China?
    Do we default on our loan, like a little vagina?
    Do we change the currency, call it Amero? New dinero
    Have all the mexicans sayin' te quiero
    Buenos noches hace viento en la Kans-ass
    The place where your tornado insurance claims get passed
    Over, HA HA Fucked and denied, we lied
    and then we watched our profit margin go sky high
    We gave out hefty bonuses to all of these guys
    Bentleys, Royce, Mercedes, those the whips that thieves drive
    They'll get theirs though, they won't capitalize
    long, civil war poor lynch, bottom line marginalized
    damn b u rocked earth off it's axis with this drop son

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    Wow....all i can say is wow....that was good

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    These streets is literally crumbling, the infrastructure
    needs to be redone and they know it, time's up, destructor
    Is waiting at the starting gates, new cities to make
    Utopia State, Europa hoping and knowing the scope is great
    Four steeds, Four colors, no time left, to be open
    and frank, I know what you're thinking, I know what you're hoping
    I know it sucks, things were going so great, what's Up?
    Why the change all of a sudden, have we over runneth cup?
    It was your decision, Don't look around, I'm pointing at you
    Always looking all innocent, citizens, red white and blue

    Lil shakedown, Lil hun'ned here and there, killing rate unfair
    But who cares, they don't have credit cards there
    And speaking of credit, what about China?
    Do we default on our loan, like a little vagina?
    Do we change the currency, call it Amero? New dinero
    Have all the mexicans sayin' te quiero
    Buenos noches hace viento en la Kans-ass
    The place where your tornado insurance claims get passed
    Over, HA HA Fucked and denied, we lied
    and then we watched our profit margin go sky high
    We gave out hefty bonuses to all of these guys
    Bentleys, Royce, Mercedes, those the whips that thieves drive
    They'll get theirs though, they won't capitalize
    long, civil war poor lynch, bottom line marginalized

    here is a five star verse


    Man you firing some heat what caused the spark??
    Last edited by Mantra; 03-26-2010 at 12:01 PM.



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    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    ^^^Wu-Massacre, I'm not kidding, listened to it twice and wrote this shit.
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    The concept here is the way to get to people in this country is to be as vulgar as possible, and then once you have them woken up, drop some knowledge and get heads to recognize the truth. It's also an oxymoronical piece on the one hand being misanthropic, on the other being stern but sympathetic. I used multi-syllabic rhyme structure and used every long and short tense to conclude the bars. I think it came out right and I'm happy with the length.
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    Quote Originally Posted by beautifulrock View Post

    I'm monstrous metaphorically no nonsense
    How do you stop a motherfucker with literally no conscience
    I'm obnoxious, stomp your kids' toys with my galoshes

    Drop hints to your wife that I wanna slobb'er tits
    Motorboat shit, open her panties, deposit crabs
    Next day, you scratch your balls and I laugh
    Guess what, I'm also your long lost dad


    First 3 lines are sick
    Then the puchline sets up end of the 1st section well.

    Quote Originally Posted by beautifulrock View Post

    These streets is literally crumbling, the infrastructure
    needs to be redone and they know it, time's up, destructor
    Is waiting at the starting gates, new cities to make
    Utopia State, Europa hoping and knowing the scope is great
    Four steeds, Four colors, no time left, to be open
    and frank, I know what you're thinking, I know what you're hoping
    I know it sucks, things were going so great, what's Up?
    Why the change all of a sudden, have we over runneth cup?
    It was your decision, Don't look around, I'm pointing at you
    Always looking all innocent, citizens, red white and blue
    We allowed an empire to appear before our eyes, blind
    to a military industrial complex without a mind
    Crazier than I, lost without a map, direction-less
    Overreacting greatly by the slightest stress
    Through the saloon door, shooting a man without a weapon
    Am I stepping out a line? I was talkin' Iraq if you're guessin'
    Shock and Awe, Ha, hawkish blah blah blah, Naw son
    Don't do it like that, you killed kids dun.
    and not just one one,

    you literally murdered tons

    Innocent to the lies and betrayal, like they knew?
    they would be tied to the tracks when the train came through
    Afghanis hiding in rocks Blame the game on who?
    A dick started this war, but Obama ain't through
    Doubling troops to win an unwinnable war, you been there before
    You know in 84 when you made the Russians poor
    That'll get done by Karzai going the dialog route
    Taliban will still be there, they took enough loot
    Out of the poppy fields, DEA knows the deal
    They watched the CIA home made real from Laos playing a glockenspiel
    In Vietnam, when the war was only about profits, It still is
    These niggas got deep pockets, I'm just saying, Lil' Bis-
    Lil shakedown, Lil hun'ned here and there, killing rate unfair
    But who cares, they don't have credit cards there
    And speaking of credit, what about China?
    Do we default on our loan, like a little vagina?
    Do we change the currency, call it Amero? New dinero
    Have all the mexicans sayin' te quiero
    Buenos noches hace viento en la Kans-ass
    The place where your tornado insurance claims get passed
    Over, HA HA Fucked and denied, we lied
    and then we watched our profit margin go sky high
    We gave out hefty bonuses to all of these guys
    Bentleys, Royce, Mercedes, those the whips that thieves drive
    They'll get theirs though, they won't capitalize
    long, civil war poor lynch, bottom line marginalized

    Then Israel will hit Iran,
    Syria too
    and we'll be forced to fucking interlude
    Russia will join the fight
    China too
    and a thousand missiles will fly
    and it'll all be through

    Don't say I didn't warn you.


    No point in cutting any of the rest.

    Great work brock.
    Last edited by Guarded By Martyrs; 03-26-2010 at 06:57 PM.

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