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    bill romanowski
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    yea i agree.
    you can write tho there is no doubt about that.
    jus smooth out the flow imo its to choppy most of the time.
    but u na im sayin jus spit it spit it spit it spit it eventually it'll become like regular talking.
    an then you can really break down your flows an the patterns..
    its all about that syllable count.
    but like i said you can write though. them first bars are amazing.


    PEACE
    gas masked up kerosene cocktails/
    cough syrup warm 40 and my lost spirit../
    pray for me holy gohhhhst iss all bad ohh baby oh noo/
    an so slow the world spinnin.../
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    bill romanowski
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    oh yea an i noticed that deeps acronym. good shit.
    gas masked up kerosene cocktails/
    cough syrup warm 40 and my lost spirit../
    pray for me holy gohhhhst iss all bad ohh baby oh noo/
    an so slow the world spinnin.../
    DL THE MISADVENTURES OF CASEY JONES EP
    http://www.mediafire.com/?swdc2a2nvpae6dn
    http://www.reverbnation.com/Battlefieldbully
    or facebook search Slurch YUNG or holla at me on here PEACE

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    no doubt slurch, its something i have always had to work on but yall pointin shit out so it helps pick up where i need to fix, and thats peace.

    but im glad yall diggin the lyrics

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