yea i agree.
you can write tho there is no doubt about that.
jus smooth out the flow imo its to choppy most of the time.
but u na im sayin jus spit it spit it spit it spit it eventually it'll become like regular talking.
an then you can really break down your flows an the patterns..
its all about that syllable count.
but like i said you can write though. them first bars are amazing.