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    Psycho? Just a little bit, disclaimed by my ancestry/
    Darkness draws like a moth and only the light can answer me//
    Bullets flying from the mouth, like the climax from Matrix Revolutions/
    Beat impossible odds, King Davidís Evolution//
    The pure rage intoxicates my conscious behavior/
    Zombie-like, bubonic plague shit, Iím no savior//
    I fight back against the storm, step in the middle of a cyclone/
    My rise is a story forlorn, shadow hounds ripping me bone by bone//
    Godís light has left me blinded, early comprehension of my potency/
    You had me in the dust grinded, paying your pension by my fiery tendency//
    Iím never coming back, thatís already evident/
    Once I reach those halls Iíll destroy your residence//
    Offer no reverence; fuck this fake hierarchy/
    Get off me so I can escape this earthly lethargy//



    Descent? Happened a long time ago, I wonít pretend//
    I wear these battle scars proudly, the devilish dancer,
    Godís time is over, Iím that underworld cancer//

    feedback?

    Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched..
    for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth
    Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System..
    Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom


    Take ya life plus ya afterlife -Bloodshed

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    feedback anyone?

    Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched..
    for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth
    Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System..
    Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom


    Take ya life plus ya afterlife -Bloodshed

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    ...............anybody...........

    Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched..
    for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth
    Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System..
    Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom


    Take ya life plus ya afterlife -Bloodshed

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    Default Re: Deep thoughts

    pretty good son

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    Quote Originally Posted by White N Dangerous
    Psycho? Just a little bit, disclaimed by my ancestry/
    Darkness draws like a moth and only the light can answer me//
    Bullets flying from the mouth, like the climax from Matrix Revolutions/
    Beat impossible odds, King Davidís Evolution//
    The pure rage intoxicates my conscious behavior/
    Zombie-like, bubonic plague shit, Iím no savior//
    I fight back against the storm, step in the middle of a cyclone/
    My rise is a story forlorn, shadow hounds ripping me bone by bone//
    Godís light has left me blinded, early comprehension of my potency/
    You had me in the dust grinded, paying your pension by my fiery tendency//
    Iím never coming back, thatís already evident/
    Once I reach those halls Iíll destroy your residence//
    Offer no reverence; fuck this fake hierarchy/
    Get off me so I can escape this earthly lethargy//



    Descent? Happened a long time ago, I wonít pretend//
    I wear these battle scars proudly, the devilish dancer,
    Godís time is over, Iím that underworld cancer//

    feedback?
    no homo
    a.k.a. The Difference saying check out my 1st video


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    lmao ummm thanks i guess?? but w/e its to state ur thoughts on my piece i guess thxs for the feed

    Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched..
    for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth
    Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System..
    Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom


    Take ya life plus ya afterlife -Bloodshed

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    Quote Originally Posted by White N Dangerous
    lmao ummm thanks i guess?? but w/e its to state ur thoughts on my piece i guess thxs for the feed
    no homo
    a.k.a. The Difference saying check out my 1st video


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    lmfao what a dumb fuck

    Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched..
    for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth
    Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System..
    Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom


    Take ya life plus ya afterlife -Bloodshed

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    yo homie im feelin ya style

    keep that threa goin son


    that tuco guys a fuckin herb
    "When I die bury me with the LO on...
    Official to the death for all eternity and so on"
    Lo Down & Dirty
    " WASTED ON THE USUAL WIT MOM DUKES WAITIN ON THE FUNERAL"
    "MY MOUSTACHE LIKE ADOLFS"-Ghostface

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    Quote Originally Posted by tha god concept
    yo homie im feelin ya style

    keep that threa goin son


    that tuco guys a fuckin herb
    can i be marijuana???? thats my favorite herb
    a.k.a. The Difference saying check out my 1st video


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    fa sho thanks for the feed man.

    Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched..
    for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth
    Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System..
    Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom


    Take ya life plus ya afterlife -Bloodshed

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    Default Re: White N Dangerous $$$$Thread$$$$

    ...cluttered, flow was still there, but seemed like you rushed some of those bars....good work nonetheless.....1ne.
    I bear tha' soul of a'hundred kings, heart of a runaway slave...
    shackle my hands an' feet together,...I got a "runaway brain..."~RaE






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    Default Re: White N Dangerous $$$$Thread$$$$

    ^ yeh , but still dope

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    Default Re: White N Dangerous $$$$Thread$$$$

    peace brutha your ill with it respect due 4real
    PEACE
    ........

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    it was aight

    some nice lines in there
    some of the lines didnt make sense to me

    ya style needs a little work but you got potential

    keep at it homie

    practice makes perfect
    "fuck you" - me

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