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  1. #241

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    Word good lookin noel it's been a while since u blessed my pages with ur thoughts. stay up

    Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched..
    for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth
    Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System..
    Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom

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    i be da Next ta Spit, dont even Step ta This..
    Please no Questions Trick "turnin heads" like da Exorcist!!
    I got da Vest n Clip.. ta Protect my Chest n Ribs!
    in this game imma "King" like Checkers Bitch!
    Spittin On Da Phone, with Exquiste Audio..
    get ya Coffin Closed, Switchin "da game up" like a Audible!
    Priceless Valuables like my flow is Aztec Gold!
    Dangerous Soulja is Admirable, but even more as a Admiral!
    Like da Stone Cold Stunnah i'm quick ta Stun ya!
    now thats just Anotha Way ta Say I'm the # 1 Stunna!
    Last edited by Father N Dangerous; 02-21-2007 at 01:09 AM.

    Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched..
    for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth
    Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System..
    Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom

  3. #243

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    War Trophyz.. our Whole Team "Supports" .. "Poor" Sports that..
    never had a "Fighting Chance".. like unable to "Afford" an Attorney!
    Akeliz Still Kill's These Wannabe Killa Fleets.. and Big Willie's
    Get Extinct...187 Sting like Killa Beez...get Reduced to Silly String!
    Paper's Known.. like a C-note..from da Vegas Casino..
    13 War Painted People with Unique Abilites that Reign Supreme w/ a Keyboard!
    Lyrical Abuse..Abused ya Lyric's ya Use, a Lyr-i-scist dat's Huge!
    giving ya back your own Hair and Chipped Tooth..like da Blair Witch..BOO!
    CyphaKing will Ghost Write ya Entire Thing..and like Titantic..
    ya whole "Fellow-ship"* will take a Dive n Decline n Sink!!
    Da Boi Dayz, Destroy's ya Im-mature Fags and Grown up legs!
    So What..Make..ya lines "Played out" like "Outside Games"
    Suicide Manual, Chapter 1..ya Sure to Die like Every Soul..
    so Decide When ya Go..leave ya vision blurry like ya eyes a Collidescope!
    Pressa will Dis-Memember ya Texture from the Edge of the Earth!
    with such Pressure he'll make u "salty" and Un-Thaw and Un-Freeze like Raw Meat!
    Gage Spark n hold ~paper together~ like a Stape-lar! Stay Smart..
    and don't test da BraveHearts we'll leave ya dead...like it's our TradeMark!
    DunLo Dug ya Ho'z... a Comf-ter-ble Home.. if ya Fuck w/ da Holmez
    ya "Frost Bite" get's "Froze" and Transformed into "Ice" like it was 9 Below..

    Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched..
    for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth
    Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System..
    Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom

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    jus read ur latest verse, i thought the flow was spot on, didnt always understand your points, but overal a nice effort, well played m8 !


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    B u m p

    Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched..
    for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth
    Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System..
    Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom

  6. #246

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    Dent ya Chest a Bit and leave a Nice Bruize..
    Instead it Gets Infected and Infested Like e Eww!
    Decided to go Right Thru... like a Drive Thru..
    Suicidal..w/ da Rifle... but can still keep my Calm...Ight? ..Cool
    u dont wanna "Step to these Lines" like a Drunk Chick takin a subriorty Test
    Survivin this Mess? and You'll Die a Horrible Death
    ..Horror Shows..YEP. ...Horrid Horde Swift..
    the Force Is... PIR w/ 4 by 4 Re-inforced Wood..
    that when used For Ya..it Hurts like Clip'z from da 4.4 Gun!

    Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched..
    for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth
    Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System..
    Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom

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    U gotta nice flow wit entertainin lines, sum on the lame side, but thats jus my opinion
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

  8. #248

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    word good lookin for your opinion!

    Fedual Japan get Few Feuds now that they don't Suprise Attack!
    Suprised ya Man's.. he know's he won't Survive the Clash..
    so he Hopes High..and and Closes Both Eyes...and Gets his Throat Sliced..
    Sold Nice...Souls to Lord Christ..and the Whole Time..
    he neva Told THY.. Unkown Secrect to this Cold Life!
    Bold Lines can Bestow
    BOLD TIMES..BE-hold ...LIGHT!
    get u broken like ya Faucet Leak..
    your more 7th heaven then Dawsons Creek!
    Your Unfortunate for your MisFortune is very For-tun-ate!
    Forfeit Cliques, 44 Horrifc Deaths..from da 4.4'z Clip
    Enter the Secret Shelter..and Any Peeps Unwelcomed ..Learns..
    his Lesson.. and get's the Welcome he Deserves.
    Metal Hollow Tip w/ Explodin Ammu-nit-ion!
    my Gigantic Dick is,,, so Big in Length n Width..
    i Need Both Hands.. to "Succesfully" Jack Off to my Full Effect!


    Last edited by Father N Dangerous; 03-06-2007 at 10:35 AM.

    Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched..
    for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth
    Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System..
    Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom

  9. #249

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    CyphaKinG ..::::.. PaperSoulja/WND

    "Yesterday's Tomorrow"

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    Debated sorrow, Clinging to a waisted past...
    Dayzed and hollow bringing me to a hateful path...
    Take a chance, but will i have to take to borrow...
    Wake me fast before i decay in yesterday's tomorrow...
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    .CyphaKing
    This anxioty deepins, Im feelin beat in by my dreams...
    Weak and depleated, needing more than what it seems//
    Life gleams like beams of Gods from other mortals...
    While my light is gone despite me trying to hold the torch too//
    Hordes rule the land while those good do the suffering...
    Nothing in this world is Loving, nothing comforting//
    Trusting everything, feeling stuck in this cycle...
    Yesterday makes tomorrow as im running from time's rule//
    Crime spews like darkness' light harkens night's glow...
    Fuck it! spark the light, Time will now halt to my soul//
    Fallen thy hold, I will never tremmer no longer...
    For I am tomorrow's hope, nots its shattered departer//
    Scattered among marters is a reminence that plead...
    "You are our hope now, son - So never forget"//
    But life is repetitive yet, So my shield it protects me...
    Never to yield again to Time's undying testing//
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    Debated sorrow, Clinging to a waisted past...
    Dayzed and hollow bringing me to a hateful path...
    Take a chance, but will i have to take to borrow...
    Wake me fast before i decay in yesterday's tomorrow...
    .
    .
    .Paper_Soulja/WND
    Made Descion's only to Remain Imprisoned...
    in my Brains Brainwaves n BrainStem's Submission/
    Decades from the Present Date ..and Nothings Changed...
    Yesterday..will be Todays Present Day/
    Rewind the Feed...Time it Keeps..
    going in a Straight Line.. and never Waits for Me../
    Can't Pause the Laws God Made Ya See...
    Tommrow or Maybe in a Week.. we'll All be no Longa Able to Breathe/
    Obstacles i Hurdle, my ClockWork never Stay's Still..
    Always Tick-Tockin ... with each Sand Grain Filled/
    Fast Lane Feels Slo-Mo.. theres Mixed Signals..Human Beings..
    Strong Loyal-ty is Cause to the Future's Turmoil n Grief/
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    Debated sorrow, Clinging to a waisted past...
    Dayzed and hollow bringing me to a hateful path...
    Take a chance, but will i have to take to borrow...
    Wake me fast before i decay in yesterday's tomorrow...
    Last edited by Father N Dangerous; 03-06-2007 at 02:52 PM.

    Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched..
    for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth
    Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System..
    Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom

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    like the verses, ya fows differant aswell

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    word thanks 4 all da feed uppin this been a while since i've been in da temple

    Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched..
    for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth
    Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System..
    Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom

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    i promise this..i'll bomb ya set, and i got da Longest Width
    when it Comes ta Dick, mines the Longest..
    Yard.. Measured w/ the Metric Yard Stick!
    Crumple ya StrongHold's Front Door..
    on the Clutch i Shift Slow and Zoom Zoom
    with Such Force.. it causes Hard Gust Storms..
    that Form Cyclone DustBowls like College Sports!

    Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched..
    for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth
    Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System..
    Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom

  13. #253

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    I'm Back At it, with these Mathmatic's!
    Gift of Gab Status! Can't Hack IT!
    not with a Axe or a Hatchet!
    rhymes are Deliduded! Mind Starts Illusions!
    thinkin you can be Half as Sick? Not If Your Spit's were Cancerous!
    Nor Hazardous! Stance is Unmatched like a Belly's Dancer's Is!
    P.S like a Personal Letter, i'm the Colonel's Purple Hearted Medal Inventor!
    save ya the Suspense Nerd, ya Worse then a First Grader's Cursive Pen Work!
    Last edited by Father N Dangerous; 06-11-2007 at 01:31 AM.

    Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched..
    for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth
    Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System..
    Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom

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    my style..


    Jesus Christ ... ya Need ta Critque my Lines..
    and Please Be nice or i Might feel Insulted SYKE..
    Impulse is to be a Sultan that Evolve'd from the Hall of Kings
    where All da Big Bosses were Taught the Laws of Rawness..
    Lot's of Knowledge like Change'n season's ya'll fallin like Autumn.
    This is just Off the Top of the Top Notch Mobsta ..
    that Lost Control of his Own Goals like a Soccer Ball gettin Shot ..then..SCORED!
    imma Settle da Score, ya'll are Neva Eva Ahead of the Contestants that Entered Before..
    they Steps Turned into Footprints Indent'n the Surfaces Texture.
    Personally i can't lose Purposely ...even if it's me Versus Me..
    i'll Never Recieve a Losing Streak..from these Baby Drool Mc's
    not even Care'n Who u Be, Bruce lee Speed w/ Wounds that Bleed..
    Eternally and Internally so if ya Get wat i Mean you'll be No longa Amongst da Living.
    unable to Take Breath's, cuz u Buried so far down we can't even Reach It
    w/ Heavy Construction Equipment..now thats a Big ass Ditch Kid...
    that was dug b4 u even Existed...now u Sleeping Feeling Guilty?
    Feel Me? ya Still have a Spirit it's just in Purgatory..
    no longa a Westside Story but a TestSite for These..
    Lost Souls that get Branded w/ Barcodes like i Bought n Sold
    A Part for my Deformed Carcass so i can Walk da Immortal Road..

    Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched..
    for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth
    Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System..
    Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom

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    yea i like how that last verse started, the flow was rite ma dude, just gotta try and maintain it thru the whole thing and its crack, but nice verse kid
    peace
    "i got drug spots from NY to Canada/
    cuz Big L b fuckin wit more keys then a janita/"
    Follow me @SkiLLs456

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