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    Default Re: The Unveiling

    Its quite a powerful verse, or can i name it "verse in thought". And suitably titled as here it shows a new difinitive approach than the conventional lyrics mostly placed. And you seemed to lure with the lyrically content in discribing what is only there. And what more ample title than the one you gave it. This verse showed a more developed sense of thought (hey you know there are many schools of thought) and yet this one had its own clarity (with nothing).

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    PS: Keep posting. And i had not read this one before!!

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    Default Not A Diss, It's Just For Kicks ... ;)

    A WHOLE FORUM OF THUG WANNA B'S TRYIN HARD TO LIVE UP TO THESE
    STANDARDS OF HIGHER LEARNIN', ALWAYS YEARNIN' BUT NEVER LEARNIN
    THAT FIRE BURNS ...
    SO SIT BACK AND WATCH ME TURN
    SCEPTICS INTO BELIEVERS, YALL ASSES IS TOO EAGER
    YOUR STYLE IS WACK ... SO THE BATTLEFIELD-YOU SHOULD LEAVE IT LIKE BEAVER
    CLASSIC UNDERACHEIVERS ... NIGGA UP YOUR GAME
    THIS SHIT IS CHILD'S PLAY AND I'M CHUCKY-READY TO WRECK AND MAIM
    ... LEAVE YOU LYIN' IN SHAME,
    CUZ THIS DAME DON'T PLAY GAMES DUN
    I'LL SNATCH THE RAP STATS FROM THE CHOSEN ONE
    DAE IS SECOND TO NONE ...
    I BREAK PUNKS LIKE YOU FOR FUN
    HOW YOU WANTING TO SPARK BEEF WHEN YOU AIN' T HOLDING GUNS?
    YOUR FLOW IS SLACK-IT LACKS TACT LIKE COOK COKE, CRACK
    GET THAT? ...
    MY 45 WILL MAKE YOUR ASS LEAN BACK
    NO SHELLS, I FLOW THAT WELL, A STEP AHEAD OF THE REST
    THE SHIT YOU SPIT IS ILLEGIT, IT'S BULLSHIT AT BEST
    CONTEMPLATE YOUR WORSE FATE-YOU WANNA GAMBLE-YOU'LL LOOSE
    INFILTRATE YOUR CAMP'S GATE AND SHUT YALL DOWN LIKE JEWS
    CONCENTRATED MY TOOLS ...
    WITH MY REP, I'LL NEVER LOOSE
    LEAVE YOU PISSIN YOUR PANTS, CRYING-BROKE AND SINGIN' THE BLUES
    SPLIT IN HALF FROM THE AFTERMATH OF MY VERBAL MACHETE
    I WHOOP ASS BADDER THAN BETTY BUT YALL BITCHES AIN' T READY-FOR THIS FIRE ...
    NIGGAS THAT KNOW ME CALL ME BARBed WIRE
    YOUR IMAGE, I RIP TO SHREADS IF YOU TRY TO CONSPIRE
    FORCE YOUR ASS TO RETIRE
    YOUR CREW WILL DEEM ME AS "SIRE"
    SEALING YOU GRIM FATE, THAT'S MY GREATest DESIRE




    Respect My "G" ... LMAO ...

    Peace




    I sew...
    beautiful seeds that sprout flowers thatís deeply rooted
    your weak style-diluted with concepts thatís so polluted
    my words flourish, creating jewels the conscious will cherish ...

    -- Dae Ja Nae

    http://www.soundclick.com/daejanae
    http://wutangcorp.com/showthread.php?t=11503


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    Default Re: Not A Diss, It's Just For Kicks ... ;)

    Pretty Tight I Like That Sig
    KNOWLEDGEABLE FLOW
    Tight Ass Verse
    Yo Shit Was Raw
    Peace 4.4.4 Trumpets

    Wuddup You Wanna Battle
    COME In The Chamber
    Messing Wit Shu
    Peace
    WE ARE DISCUSSING THE END OF THE WORLD-OR HOW TO DELAY IT.

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    Default Re: Not A Diss, It's Just For Kicks ... ;)

    cool,...fuck retiring tho,.....ima kill it till the end, tha hell with that, peace
    "BACK TO FUKIN WERK 1 OF YOUR THREADZ JUST GOT DUSTED"

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    Default Re: Not A Diss, It's Just For Kicks ... ;)

    Quote Originally Posted by Dae Ja Nae
    A WHOLE FORUM OF THUG WANNA B'S TRYIN HARD TO LIVE UP TO THESE
    STANDARDS OF HIGHER LEARNIN', ALWAYS YEARNIN' BUT NEVER LEARNIN
    THAT FIRE BURNS ...
    SO SIT BACK AND WATCH ME TURN
    SCEPTICS INTO BELIEVERS, YALL ASSES IS TOO EAGER
    YOUR STYLE IS WACK ... SO THE BATTLEFIELD-YOU SHOULD LEAVE IT LIKE BEAVER
    CLASSIC UNDERACHEIVERS ... NIGGA UP YOUR GAME
    THIS SHIT IS CHILD'S PLAY AND I'M CHUCKY-READY TO WRECK AND MAIM
    ... LEAVE YOU LYIN' IN SHAME,
    CUZ THIS DAME DON'T PLAY GAMES DUN
    I'LL SNATCH THE RAP STATS FROM THE CHOSEN ONE
    DAE IS SECOND TO NONE ...
    I BREAK PUNKS LIKE YOU FOR FUN
    HOW YOU WANTING TO SPARK BEEF WHEN YOU AIN' T HOLDING GUNS?
    YOUR FLOW IS SLACK-IT LACKS TACT LIKE COOK COKE, CRACK
    GET THAT? ...
    MY 45 WILL MAKE YOUR ASS LEAN BACK
    NO SHELLS, I FLOW THAT WELL, A STEP AHEAD OF THE REST
    THE SHIT YOU SPIT IS ILLEGIT, IT'S BULLSHIT AT BEST
    CONTEMPLATE YOUR WORSE FATE-YOU WANNA GAMBLE-YOU'LL LOOSE
    INFILTRATE YOUR CAMP'S GATE AND SHUT YALL DOWN LIKE JEWS
    CONCENTRATED MY TOOLS ...
    WITH MY REP, I'LL NEVER LOOSE
    LEAVE YOU PISSIN YOUR PANTS, CRYING-BROKE AND SINGIN' THE BLUES
    SPLIT IN HALF FROM THE AFTERMATH OF MY VERBAL MACHETE
    I WHOOP ASS BADDER THAN BETTY BUT YALL BITCHES AIN' T READY-FOR THIS FIRE ...
    NIGGAS THAT KNOW ME CALL ME BARBed WIRE
    YOUR IMAGE, I RIP TO SHREADS IF YOU TRY TO CONSPIRE
    FORCE YOUR ASS TO RETIRE
    YOUR CREW WILL DEEM ME AS "SIRE"
    SEALING YOU GRIM FATE, THAT'S MY GREATest DESIRE




    Respect My "G" ... LMAO ...

    Peace
    OMG yo.....i mean...even at my best, im sure i couldnt flow like this yo, on the real though...thats my word Dae....fuckin ripped tha shit 3 times over with this peice....
    left me speechless, no doubt mama
    keep breakin these cats' backs, they blind without the catarats
    lol no doubt mama.....

    PAZ
    a.k.a. The Difference saying check out my 1st video


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    Default Re: Not A Diss, It's Just For Kicks ... ;)

    D A M N, that shit was fucking tight! You ripped that shit apart like a fucking tornado on that verse. Hot shit.

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    Default Re: Not A Diss, It's Just For Kicks ... ;)

    LOL ... thx for the feeds. I am in no way a battler, except when I have to be . This is something I was just kidding around with ... . I think I'd better stick with my original format though.

    Peace




    I sew...
    beautiful seeds that sprout flowers thatís deeply rooted
    your weak style-diluted with concepts thatís so polluted
    my words flourish, creating jewels the conscious will cherish ...

    -- Dae Ja Nae

    http://www.soundclick.com/daejanae
    http://wutangcorp.com/showthread.php?t=11503


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    Default Re: Not A Diss, It's Just For Kicks ... ;)

    Quote Originally Posted by Dae Ja Nae
    A WHOLE FORUM OF THUG WANNA B'S TRYIN HARD TO LIVE UP TO THESE
    STANDARDS OF HIGHER LEARNIN', ALWAYS YEARNIN' BUT NEVER LEARNIN
    THAT FIRE BURNS ...
    SO SIT BACK AND WATCH ME TURN
    SCEPTICS INTO BELIEVERS, YALL ASSES IS TOO EAGER
    YOUR STYLE IS WACK ... SO THE BATTLEFIELD-YOU SHOULD LEAVE IT LIKE BEAVER
    CLASSIC UNDERACHEIVERS ... NIGGA UP YOUR GAME
    THIS SHIT IS CHILD'S PLAY AND I'M CHUCKY-READY TO WRECK AND MAIM
    ... LEAVE YOU LYIN' IN SHAME,
    CUZ THIS DAME DON'T PLAY GAMES DUN
    I'LL SNATCH THE RAP STATS FROM THE CHOSEN ONE
    DAE IS SECOND TO NONE ...
    I BREAK PUNKS LIKE YOU FOR FUN
    HOW YOU WANTING TO SPARK BEEF WHEN YOU AIN' T HOLDING GUNS?
    YOUR FLOW IS SLACK-IT LACKS TACT LIKE COOK COKE, CRACK
    GET THAT? ...
    MY 45 WILL MAKE YOUR ASS LEAN BACK
    NO SHELLS, I FLOW THAT WELL, A STEP AHEAD OF THE REST
    THE SHIT YOU SPIT IS ILLEGIT, IT'S BULLSHIT AT BEST
    CONTEMPLATE YOUR WORSE FATE-YOU WANNA GAMBLE-YOU'LL LOOSE
    INFILTRATE YOUR CAMP'S GATE AND SHUT YALL DOWN LIKE JEWS
    CONCENTRATED MY TOOLS ...
    WITH MY REP, I'LL NEVER LOOSE
    LEAVE YOU PISSIN YOUR PANTS, CRYING-BROKE AND SINGIN' THE BLUES
    SPLIT IN HALF FROM THE AFTERMATH OF MY VERBAL MACHETE
    I WHOOP ASS BADDER THAN BETTY BUT YALL BITCHES AIN' T READY-FOR THIS FIRE ...
    NIGGAS THAT KNOW ME CALL ME BARBed WIRE
    YOUR IMAGE, I RIP TO SHREADS IF YOU TRY TO CONSPIRE
    FORCE YOUR ASS TO RETIRE
    YOUR CREW WILL DEEM ME AS "SIRE"
    SEALING YOU GRIM FATE, THAT'S MY GREATest DESIRE




    Respect My "G" ... LMAO ...

    Peace
    PEACE DAE...I SEE YOU OPENED THA CHAMBER OF FLAMES ONCE AGAIN.....

    YOU SHOULD'VE CALLED THIS ONE "IF IT OFFENDS YOU, DEN ITS ABOUT YOU"

    NICE RELEASE.....

    MUCH LOVE

    ORPHANS OF CUSH

    OUT SOON

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    Default Re: Not A Diss, It's Just For Kicks ... ;)

    Quote Originally Posted by Dae Ja Nae
    LOL ... thx for the feeds. I am in no way a battler, except when I have to be . This is something I was just kidding around with ... . I think I'd better stick with my original format though.

    Peace
    I concur.

    peace

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    Default Re: Not A Diss, It's Just For Kicks ... ;)

    WOW! good stuff!

    Would love to see you kill some dudes at a Battle

    *Wink*

    *please look down under my banner*

    LOL!


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    Default Re: Not A Diss, It's Just For Kicks ... ;)

    PEACE... i liked this, it reminded me of Jean Grae's "haters anthem"... even if it was just fuckin' around, i love to see people post verses like these, 'cause cats are so sensitive on this forum they all feel offended in some shape or form... no need to name names, they know who they are, and they know they need to step they're game up! keep them on their toes, 'cause this verse could've easily set the battlefield into a panic...

    PEACE

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    Default When I Think Of Poetry ...

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    When I think of Poetry, I think of the wind beneath my wings
    soaring to new heights, viewing all that life brings

    all things ...
    become anew, for this art shines a different light
    it embraces the ills of this world and somehow makes wrongs seem right
    magically turning adversities into an impossible victories
    mysteries begin to unravel as we travel through out history
    unlocking secret tombs and giving voices to Taboos
    illuminating dark places, creating faces from lost clues
    nothing is unknown ... for it enables the mind to dream
    putting everything within our grasp, no matter how inconceivable they seem
    silent screams ...
    are now heard because Poetry has given them a voice
    cries that once fell upon def ears, now have reason to rejoice
    to me, itís lifeís essence ... the very force that drives me
    like the blood pumping through my veins, it keeps me alive, see ...
    Poetry is who I am ...
    the continuous rhythm of my soul
    the fire contained within that runs wild and grabs hold,
    of the smallest hint of imagination, turning stray thoughts into great visions
    manifested into fruition ...
    ... itís the teacher of lifeís lessons-never requestiní a tuition
    Itís gives the smallest life-a true purpose,
    a creative mind-a new surface ...
    to draw upon whatever desires the heart inspires into service
    all these things and more, are reasons I will always adore

    Poetry
    and her depth ... I will endlessly explore



    How about you?




    I sew...
    beautiful seeds that sprout flowers thatís deeply rooted
    your weak style-diluted with concepts thatís so polluted
    my words flourish, creating jewels the conscious will cherish ...

    -- Dae Ja Nae

    http://www.soundclick.com/daejanae
    http://wutangcorp.com/showthread.php?t=11503


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    Default Re: When I Think Of Poetry ...

    That was deep, very nice wordplay, it flowed nicely in my head, and I didn't need a beat, so that's Ill, peace.




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    It was tight, keep it real holmes, 10 / 10

    Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched..
    for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth
    Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System..
    Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom


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    pssst..... Holmes is a Lady,




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