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Thread: VOTES NEEDED Valkis Vs Dusk

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    5 bars (10 lines)
    Due 24 hrs.
    G/L
    Last edited by Valkis; 05-11-2010 at 01:17 PM.

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    It's clear as he's typing and proving that he's taking a liking to losing,
    And what your writting is stupid, so I remove disgrace, like a final solution, *
    I render him gay and so he's like an unwanted package; I send 'um away,
    Bitch whut? It's like time's mixed up, Dusk won't emerge at the end of the day,
    Beneith me, the earth is burning, dude screams like we heard him cumming,
    Prepares to fuck and aims his but, wouldnt make the cut like a nervious surgeon,
    This man's harmless, like he's a soft paraplegic humantarian......and armless,
    A killer? Get fucking real, this guy won't touch the steel, stays from black markets, *
    He contests my anarchy? Nah Blood squirts as I wreck his arteries,
    He couldnt make me dizzy, will never see double D aside breasts and batteries.

    * Dusk Race
    * Touch the Steal
    Last edited by Valkis; 05-11-2010 at 01:19 PM.

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    I changed it to 5bars. Origionally I ment 8 lines not 8bars, so I fucked up there dude. Make it hot man.

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    lyrical content causin cataclysms, the shit is big
    criminal complex, 'course the vandalism up in ur sig's
    the only crimes on record valkis, unknown in my necka
    the woods, im muhammed welcome to the rhyme mecca
    your good but im better, take shears to adams apple
    make rears that have an asshole take fear when havin battles
    aint queer, just have axl rose sort of swagger, guns n roses
    bought a dagger, some explosives, slaughter battlers, valkis knows this
    oughta battle online knowin ya talents hopeless
    and no one would show up, since u suffer from halitosis

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    guess we can start with the votes

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    vote goes Dusk

    Valkis had some dope lines, but some of the personals are tired, i get it yall think Dusk is gay.

    Dusk just brought the lyricism and some more in depths attacks imo. the last two lines sealed the deal tho

    peace, good battle

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    Lyricism? I'm in confusion of your delusions, is this religion?

    Ok, more votes

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    Vote goes to Valkis

    Both brought nice lines, but Valkis got nice multi's and way better punches.

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    is this religion? uh, wuh? eloels.

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    my vote goes for Dusk...
    "Fuck fame... I'll shoot a hole in a 50 cent piece to test my aim." - Masta Killah (One Blood)

    "Kiss the pyramid...experiment wit high explosives. I slap box wit Jesus....lick shots at Joseph." - GFK (Daytona 500)

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    thx, a little elaboration please?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dusk View Post
    thx, a little elaboration please?
    well word play was tight and felt like your flow was more steady...plus, i'm really not into a lot gay rhyme type battlin'. imo, if you are going to battle come with some facts or some real lyrical attack....it's only soo many times you can call someone a fag....you know?
    "Fuck fame... I'll shoot a hole in a 50 cent piece to test my aim." - Masta Killah (One Blood)

    "Kiss the pyramid...experiment wit high explosives. I slap box wit Jesus....lick shots at Joseph." - GFK (Daytona 500)

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    MosHigh, gay jokes? I don;t believe I based a single line from it. I said "I render him gay" and that was all of it. I would like you to please explaiin the bars from my verse, because I think you were lost from the get go tbh.

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